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22nd August 2014, 11:35 AM

Wah..pehli baar itni achhi ghazal main ne padhi hai
patharon ko bohut pilaya ke dekha hai.....eh sher to sach much dil ko chu gaya.

Jee chahata hai ke mehfil men aapki amad ka bharpur kher maqdam karun.

kisi ghazal ka ek matla aur ek sher pesh kar raha hun.

apna gham lekar kahin aur na jaya jaye
ghar men bikhri hui cheezon ko sajaya jaye

ghar se masjid hai bohut door chalo yun karlen
kisi rote hue bachhe ko hansaya jaye.



Mubarak ho nakulG.
   
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