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24th August 2014, 04:07 PM

Shukriya Mujib ji!!

tahe dil se shukriya!!
Koshish rahegi ki aap jaise chahne walon ke liye achhe qalam laa sakoon.
Aap taq apne jazbaat pahuncha sakun, aapke jazbaat tak pahunch sakoon!!

khush rahiye

Nakul

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Originally Posted by mujib66 View Post
Wah..pehli baar itni achhi ghazal main ne padhi hai
patharon ko bohut pilaya ke dekha hai.....eh sher to sach much dil ko chu gaya.

Jee chahata hai ke mehfil men aapki amad ka bharpur kher maqdam karun.

kisi ghazal ka ek matla aur ek sher pesh kar raha hun.

apna gham lekar kahin aur na jaya jaye
ghar men bikhri hui cheezon ko sajaya jaye

ghar se masjid hai bohut door chalo yun karlen
kisi rote hue bachhe ko hansaya jaye.



Mubarak ho nakulG.
   
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