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Originally Posted by Kavita Negi
Bahut bahut shukriya lucky ji,,,,
Zindagi ke liye aas talabgaar kar di usne....
>> Zindagi jeene ke liye jo ek aas ya icha hoti hai wo khatam ho chuki hai....!!! talabgaar means kisi cheez ki bahut lalsa hona. Waise mai jayada achi trah smjha nahi paai.... aasha hai Aap smjh jaayenge....!!!!
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kavita ji bataane ka shukriya, par mere khayal se aas aur talabgaar dono kafi hadd tak el hi meaning rakhte haiN, aas ka matlab ikcha nahin balki umeed hoti hai, aur isiliye vo line thodi si atpati lagi thi mujhe.. maafi chahuNga pa pehle main aapka point of view jaan.na chaahta tha ki kahin main to galti nahIn kar raha padhne me, ho sake to wahaan aas ki jagah koi aur lafz rakh dijiye par ek hi line me dono ek saath line ko kharaab kar rahe haiN....!!
Ek aur baat aapki jo maiN line hai
"khushi to bahut thi, par muskuraya na gaya..."
isme halka sa dosh hai, ya to aap ise kaheN ki "khush to bahut thi" ya fir "khushi to bahut hui" khushi to bahut thi, thoda sa galat laga mujhe, waise mujhe kuch aata vata nahin hai, isiliye gar galtiyaN ho ajyeN to maa kijiyega...!!
waise gar meri kisi v baat se aap aahat ho ya aapko kisi v bat se thes pahuNche to maafi ka talabgaar rahuNga.....!!