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28th November 2009, 07:31 PM

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Originally Posted by vikramjethi View Post
Khwahish jii,

Bahut badhiya lagi hame aapki ye Ghazal....
Neeche wala sheyr to khaas taur pe pasand aaya...

Ghar, ghar meiN ho rahi hai maikashi Kuch aisi
Maikhane hi Maikhane hue maikhana na raha

Tahe dil se daad haazir hai Janaab Kabuul farmaayeN...!!!
Aise hi likhte rahiye......
Khuda aapki kalam ko aur bhi nehmatoN se nawaazish kare, bas yahi dua hai meri...

Ijaazat...
Vikram
Thanks Vikram jee.............

Aapki daad dil se kabool hai janab, jab yeh koshish bhi dil se ki hai to koyiN na koyiN sher mein to main padhne wale ke kareeb ja hi sakunga.........

Aape hounsla afzai ka tahe dil se shukriyaa...
Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye...
Khush Rahiye
Khuda Hafez......


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