[sunita thakur]

Originally Posted by amit7600

bahut hi umda...... lafz nahi hai mere pass........dil ki awaaz lagi mujhe......dil tak pahuch gayi.....



abhi bhi shabd dhoond raha hu.....milte hi nahi......nishabd kar diya aapne......surely one of ur best......

meri dhero shubhkamnaye......

Originally Posted by KunaaL

Sunita jee,,,

Sabse pehle maiN aapse bohat bohat muafi maangna chahta huN ...ki aapki itni umda likha hua nazraana aaj tak main nahi padh saka ... aapki kavish ke baare main jitna kahunga kam lagega .. bohat hi bhadiya .... seeedha saaf saccha aur accha ... har sher ek se badh kar ek hai ... meri dheroN duayeN aapke naam ...

Kunaal

Originally Posted by vikramjethi

sunita ji,

aapki ye ghazal bahut bahut khaas hai...maiN aapko mubaraqbaad dena chaahta hooN...ehsaas aur alfaaz dono hi khoob, is se zyada kya keh sakta hooN....har sher badhiya....ehsaasoN se labrez...jitni bhi daad di jaye kam hai...

iswar aapko sada khush rakhe...

aapka dost...

Amit ji, Kunaal ji aur Vikram ji....muaafi chahti hu ki bahut waqt baad aaj es gazal ko dekha to paaya ki aap sabka shukriya tak aada nahi kar paaye maiN, aap sabhi ka dil se shukriya...Kunaal ji aap jaisi hasti es andaaz meiN housla badaye to bahut accha lagta hai.

aaj pad kar yakeen nahi ho rha ki kabhi maiN bhi likha karti thi

aap sab dosto ke saath aur pyar ka bahut bahut shukriya