17th March 2010, 09:23 PM
heer jii, aaj nazar payee thode i's kalaam te...padh ke vadhiya laga....
bohat sona likhya hai....khaas kar ke eh neeche waliyaaN lines ta bahut hi pasand aayeeaN...enj laga jime kise ne mere hi dil di gal keh diti hove....
bohat khoob.....
tere naal bolna mainu taa mehga hi pe gaya
ajj phir tere naal bole bina reh na saki
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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