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kanch ke tukdo - 7th October 2008, 11:50 PM
kanch ke tukdo ko sametna ki chahat main
hum khud ko zamkham laga baithe

khawaish to thi phoolon ki
kanton se dil laga baithe

duniya main apne bhi kahna hote hain apne
hum parayon ko apna bana baithe

doston se daga mili hume har kadam par
har dost ko hum raqeeb bana baithe

mil jaye sukoon is tanhai main shayad
yadon ki mahphil main khud ko mita baithe.
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8th October 2008, 08:55 AM
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8th October 2008, 09:34 AM
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kanch ke tukdo ko sametna ki chahat main
hum khud ko zamkham laga baithe

khawaish to thi phoolon ki
kanton se dil laga baithe

duniya main apne bhi kahna hote hain apne
hum parayon ko apna bana baithe

doston se daga mili hume har kadam par
har dost ko hum raqeeb bana baithe

mil jaye sukoon is tanhai main shayad
yadon ki mahphil main khud ko mita baithe.
.......................................Vaishali
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bahut hi purane khyaalat hain ye . kitni hi shayri inper likhi ja chukii hai
per aapne inhe apne shawdon main dhaala accha laga
ye sher ke khyalat kuch had tak thik laga........

mil jaye sukoon is tanhai main shayad
yadon ki mahphil main khud ko mita baithe.

pls keep it up......

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8th October 2008, 08:24 PM
Vaishali ji bahut aachi koshish rahi aapki aur se likhti rahiye

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9th October 2008, 01:33 PM
bahut accha likha hain..............nice.........

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Thanks everybody , thanks for suggestions .a appreciate that you read my poems and liked it.



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Smile nice thread - 10th October 2008, 03:04 AM
nice thinking.
aisa bhi hota hai kay ki koi kisi ke yadon ke anjuman me khud ko dhula sakta hai . ?

magar jo bhi kaha acha kaha .

likt rahiye . hum aapko padte rahenge .

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10th October 2008, 10:51 AM
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kanch ke tukdo ko sametna ki chahat main
hum khud ko zamkham laga baithe

khawaish to thi phoolon ki
kanton se dil laga baithe

duniya main apne bhi kahna hote hain apne
hum parayon ko apna bana baithe

doston se daga mili hume har kadam par
har dost ko hum raqeeb bana baithe

mil jaye sukoon is tanhai main shayad
yadon ki mahphil main khud ko mita baithe.
.......................................Vaishali
Vaishali ...............aaccha laga aapko padna, ahsaas jab dil se nikalte haiN to jo bhi likho dil tak pahunchta hai....bas aise hi lage aapke ahsaas....shayri ke hisaab se koshish ecchi hai, likhtey rahiye kalam mein aur nikhaaar aayega.

kush rahiye
god bless u

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kanch ke tukdo ko sametna ki chahat main
hum khud ko zamkham laga baithe

khawaish to thi phoolon ki
kanton se dil laga baithe

duniya main apne bhi kahna hote hain apne
hum parayon ko apna bana baithe

doston se daga mili hume har kadam par
har dost ko hum raqeeb bana baithe

mil jaye sukoon is tanhai main shayad
yadon ki mahphil main khud ko mita baithe.
.......................................Vaishali
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Shukriya - 10th October 2008, 11:57 AM
Shukriya aap sabhi ka , ki aap ne meri kavita ko padha aur pasand kiya , isi tarah padhte rahiye aur hausla badhate rahiye.


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11th October 2008, 12:52 PM
acha likha hai aapne

bas ache poet ko padhe aur unko study kare

khud b khud nikhar ayega aapme

khyal aur soch ... aapke paas hai
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