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19th January 2005, 02:50 PM
Nazron ki gustakhiyon ke jamane bahoot yaad aaye
na ban sake haqiqat jo fasane bahoot yaad aaye dhoondhti rahi saaya aankhein sehra ke safar mein dhoop mein teri palkon ke shamiyanein bahoot yaad aaye meri raat ki gawaah hai bistar par padi salwatein har karwat par teri baahon ke sirhaane bahoot yaad aaye sharaab na de paayi sukoon beqarar dil ko us dam pyaase labon ko tere labon ke paimane bahoot yaad aaye aaj peeche mud ke dekha jo jindagi ke safar mein "kureel" samjha kiye jinhe apna wo begaane bahoot yaad aaye -Manoj Kureel karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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bahut yaad aata hai tera manana woh mera rooth jana aaj phir guzre usi raah se to har pal tumhara bahut yaad aaye sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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19th January 2005, 04:08 PM
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19th January 2005, 04:17 PM
Hi Manoj Bhai,
CLAP CLAP CLAP!!!. U're back with a bang. Bhai bohot accha laga aapko itne arse baad waapis yaha paake. Kalaam to humesha ki tarha lajawaab. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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19th January 2005, 04:21 PM
shukriya salim
bahoot acha laga tumhara reply paa kar.....kaam ki masroofiyat aur jindagi ki bhaag-daud mein peeche kuch dinon se kuch bhi nahin likh saka tha....aaj bahoot acha lag raha hai apne jazbaaton ko aap sab doston ke beech share kar ke..tumne meri koshish pasand ki iske liye dil se aabhari hoon tumhara....take care Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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19th January 2005, 04:35 PM
dhoondhti rahi saaya aankhein sehra ke safar mein
dhoop mein teri palkon ke shamiyanein bahoot yaad aaye Kya baat hai... Bahoot badhiya sher kahe aapne Manoj Bhai... achha likhte hain aap.. Daad kabul kariye.. aapka vij Quote:
Dhoop Mai.N Baitha Hai Khud Pedh Lagaane Wala http://artwanted.com/vijen http://vijendrasvij.com |
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19th January 2005, 04:37 PM
manoj ji,
kaise hain?? bahut din baad likh raha hoon reply.. wel aap sab delhi mein mile aur aap sabki picture dekhi meena ji ki aankho dekhi padhi bahut achchha laga... aur a[ki aaj phir ghajal dekh raha hoon aur sach kahu jitana bhi feel kerta hoon kam hi feel kerta hoon aapne ..bahut hi khubsurat palo ko apane alfaazo mein kaid kiya hai... bas likhate rahiye... aapki yah line bahut hi achchhi lagi... meri raat ki gawaah hai bistar par padi salwatein har karwat par teri baahon ke sirhaane bahoot yaad aaye shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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19th January 2005, 04:43 PM
Hi Manoj ji!
Apne behad khoobsurat likha hai! Pata nahi kaise tariff karu..shayd..lafz kam pad rahe hein!..it was a pleasure reading u. take care komal |
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19th January 2005, 04:52 PM
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sach aapne to dastaan e jawani likh di hai ... sach ek ek shabd jigar maiN bas gaya hai .... har ek lafz maiN jo sachai hai .. usko tareefoN maiN bayan karna mushlkil hi nahi naa munkin hai .. meri daad teh dil se kabool kijiyega ... aur yuN mehfil se nadarad na raha kare aate raha kareN.... ... umeed karoUnga aap nirash nahi kareNge aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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19th January 2005, 05:59 PM
monoj mere dost
kaafi dinon baad aap ne ghazal se mustafeez kiya, aur khoob kiya. bhai, ek mushkil zameen per bohat khoobsurat alfaaz se aaraasta kiya hai aap ne is ghazal ko. mujhe bohat bhaaye aap ke ashaar. zaati taur per yeh andaaz aur aise kahe gaey ashaar mere mizaaj se bohat mail khate (match kerna) hain. meri behad daad qabool karo mere bhai. meri dua hai aap ka zoar e qalam isi tarah barhta rahe aur ham is se nehaal hote rahein. musharrafhusain |
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19th January 2005, 07:48 PM
meri raat ki gawaah hai bistar par padi salwatein
har karwat par teri baahon ke sirhaane bahoot yaad aaye sharaab na de paayi sukoon beqarar dil ko us dam pyaase labon ko tere labon ke paimane bahoot yaad aaye Manoj bhai, kya khoob likha hai aap ne.. waaH! WaaH! Jitni taareef ki jaaye kam hai aap ke is ghazal ke liye… Apne pyaar ko.. apne ehsaas e dil ko.. ek alag andaaz mai shbdoN ke jariye…khoobsoorati ke saath.. yahaaN pesh kiya hai.. taareef kabul kijiye… Jaate jaate ek sher.. arz karta hooN.. [color=dark red]Gham na hoga.. mout ke aane ka… Gar tere aagosh mai dum nikle…[/color] MayanK |
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20th January 2005, 07:07 AM
aaj peeche mud ke dekha jo jindagi ke safar mein "kureel"
samjha kiye jinhe apna wo begaane bahoot yaad aaye Manoj ji very nice agree with Kunal ji' s views he tells it better than what I could. Very nice indeed.... Shade in the shadow world |
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20th January 2005, 08:48 AM
Bahut achha likha hai...hamesha kee tarah...
lekin Manoj... yaade.n chalii.n Khayaal chalaa ashk-e-tar chale lekar payaam-e-shauq ka_ii naamabar chale ab kyaa karoge sair-e-chaman_zaar-e-aarazuu rut jaa chukii cha.Dhe hue dariyaa utar chale tumhara kalaam bahut dard bhara thaa...so yoonhi keh gayi...Hosh Tirmazi ki yeh lines...laga kyun koyi dil dukhaaye...jo gaya so gaya...waqt kab kisi ka thaa... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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20th January 2005, 04:09 PM
hello manojjjeee...
bahut accha likha hain apne...har ek ashar zindagi ki sacchai kehta hua...behad pasand aaya.... Nazron ki gustakhiyon ke jamane bahoot yaad aaye na ban sake haqiqat jo fasane bahoot yaad aaye meri raat ki gawaah hai bistar par padi salwatein har karwat par teri baahon ke sirhaane bahoot yaad aaye mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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20th January 2005, 04:42 PM
manoj ji
bahut acha laga apka likha. mein yahn naya hi hun bahut kuch nahi janta bas yahn aapke acha laga. veer |
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Namaskar Kureel ji -
20th January 2005, 06:12 PM
Namaskar Kureel ji
Kayi din baad aapka likha padne ko mila bahut achha likha hay aapne.maafi chahungi kafi samay se site par nahin aayi chalo abb aayein hain. Nazron ki gustakhiyon ke jamane bahoot yaad aaye na ban sake haqiqat jo fasane bahoot yaad aaye dhoondhti rahi saaya aankhein sehra ke safar mein dhoop mein teri palkon ke shamiyanein bahoot yaad aaye Kuch likhna chahungi Gum to kayi mile par uska Aansu pochna bahut yaad aaya Zindagi ki Raftar ka hamey peechey chod jana bahut yaad aaya Inteezaar us waqt ka dekhein unhey samney Achanak uska samney Aa kar muskurana bahut yaad aaya A very Nice composition indeed.Sada kush rahiye |
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20th January 2005, 07:51 PM
aaj peeche mud ke dekha jo jindagi ke safar mein "kureel"
samjha kiye jinhe apna wo begaane bahoot yaad aaye wahh manoj ji....wahi purana andaaz-e bayaa..dil ki gehraiyon ko chuu gaya..muaafi chahti hu ki aajkal jyada reply kar nahi paati... lekin haa aapki ye besh kimati rachnayein padhti jaroor hu.. Waqui aapke kalam padh kar dil mein ek ajeeb si shirkat paida hoti hai..kabhi wo dard bhari hoti hai to kabhi josh bhari...har baar ek naya ehsaas jaga jaati hai aapki kalam.... hamesha ki tarah is baar bhi daad kubool kijiyega.. aur haa aapki tasveer dekhi ...bilkul waise hi hai aap jaise ki mere tasavuur mein the...wahi chehre pe gambhirta ..wahi apne aap mein kho jaane wali shakshiyat.... Apna khayal rakhiyega, hamesha aapki khushiya chahne wali, aapki dost, pari  |
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Bahut khoob -
20th January 2005, 08:47 PM
aaj peeche mud ke dekha jo jindagi ke safar mein "kureel" samjha kiye jinhe apna wo begaane bahoot yaad aaye
Bahut khoob Manoj...Mere dost...Poori ki poori rachna bahut pasand aayi...or khaas kar ye Antra... Aksar eisa hi hota hai ke gujzre waqt ke waakyaat ...bahut yaad aate haiN. Bahut din baad tumhaari taraf se kuchh parhne ko mila per bahut achchha laga. Likhte raho...Khush raho Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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21st January 2005, 08:06 PM
Vijen bhai
Tareef ke liye shukriya..acha laga aapko yahan dekh kar....apna khayal rakhiye. -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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21st January 2005, 08:09 PM
Akantji
mein acha hoon aap kaise hai???tareef ke liye dil se shukriya dost...sach mein yeh bahoot khoobsurat pal the..bhale hi inka anjaam naakaami raha ho magar mere liye yeh bahoot badi dharohar hai jindagi ki,aur un palon ki yaadon mein kabhi kabhi utar jata hoon. aapka reply padh kar bahoot sukoon mila...likhte rahiye... -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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26th January 2005, 12:40 PM
namashkar komal ji
tareef ke liye dil se aapka shukriya...tareef karne ka koi tareeka nahin hota,,,aapka yahan aa kar mera hausla badhana hi mere liye sab kuch hai....take care -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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26th January 2005, 12:43 PM
kunal
tumharai "taastaan-e-jawani" wali baat ne mere labon par muskaan bikher di...meine to wahi likha hai jo mere saath guzra hai...aur jo meine mehsos kiya.. tumhare reply ka tareka mujhe bahoot pasand aaya...tumhare saath aur hauslaafzai ke liye dil se shukriya. take care -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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26th January 2005, 12:50 PM
musharaaff bhai saheb
aabaab sach aapka reply paa kar bahooot khushi mehsoos hoti hai mujhe.. shayri ke phalak ke chamakte sitare ki chaaw jab jab meri gazlon par padti padti hai ,,mere dil ko bahot sukoon milta hai..aapka yahan aana hi mere liye is baat ka suboot hai ki is baar mein shayad meine acha likha hai. aapki daad sar-maathe par..aage bhi acha likhne ki koshish karta rahunga.aapke hauslaafzai ke liye dil ki gehraiyon se shykriya take care -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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26th January 2005, 12:54 PM
mayak bhai
taareef ke liye shukriya..dost waise aap bhi kuch kam acha nahin likhte hai,,aapka andaaz-e-bayaan bahoot behtreen hai..aapki gazlon par mein aksar reply nahin kar pata magar unhe padhe bhina nahin chodta,, Gham na hoga.. mout ke aane ka… Gar tere aagosh mai dum nikle bahoiot khoob !!! magar dost..hamare aise naseeb kahan.! take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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26th January 2005, 01:07 PM
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26th January 2005, 01:07 PM
SHADOW JI
aap se pehli martaba mukhaatib ho raha hoon...aap ka isteqbaal karta honn..aap ne yahan ab kar meri koshish ko saraaha aur pasand kiya...aapki hauslaaafzai ke liye dil se shukriya...take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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27th January 2005, 12:04 PM
Nazron ki gustakhiyon ke jamane bahoot yaad aaye
na ban sake haqiqat jo fasane bahoot yaad aaye dhoondhti rahi saaya aankhein sehra ke safar mein dhoop mein teri palkon ke shamiyanein bahoot yaad aaye meri raat ki gawaah hai bistar par padi salwatein har karwat par teri baahon ke sirhaane bahoot yaad aaye sharaab na de paayi sukoon beqarar dil ko us dam pyaase labon ko tere labon ke paimane bahoot yaad aaye aaj peeche mud ke dekha jo jindagi ke safar mein "kureel" samjha kiye jinhe apna wo begaane bahoot yaad aaye Wah Wah WAh!! Majo bhai... Bahut hi umda kalaam....Dil khush ho gya ise padhkar... Nazron ki gustakhiyon ke jamane bahoot yaad aaye na ban sake haqiqat jo fasane bahoot yaad aaye aaj peeche mud ke dekha jo jindagi ke safar mein "kureel" samjha kiye jinhe apna wo begaane bahoot yaad aaye Manoj bhai.. in ashaar ne hi poori post ka saar bayan kar diya and thats why i like thse lines the most....Bahut khoobb manoj bhai... Meri daad humesha hi aapke saath hai.... Apna khayal rakhiyega... and plz keep writing Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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29th January 2005, 11:43 AM
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deir se reply ke liye muaafi chahta hoon....tumne sahi kaha "waqt kab kisi ka hua hai" magar paars guzra waqt yaad bhi bahoot aata hai....guzre waqt mein ham log jindagi talaashte hai...us beete daur mein pahunch jana chate hai jabki jante hai jindagi ke safar mein U turn nahin hota....khair..yeh daastaan meri jindagi ki kitaab ke kuch sunhare panne the jinhe meine gazal ke roop mein aapke saamne pesh kiya....khush hoon ki tumko meri koshish pasand aayi....apna khayal rakhna.. -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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29th January 2005, 11:44 AM
mausam ji
aapki tareefon ke liye dil se shukrguzar hoon..behad acha laga aap ko yahan dekh kar..take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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29th January 2005, 11:45 AM
VEER SAHEB
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Re: Namaskar Kureel ji |
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Re: Namaskar Kureel ji -
29th January 2005, 11:49 AM
namashkar sukanya ji
behad acha laga aappko yahan dekh kar....mein bhi kafi dinon baad yahan aaya hoon aur yeh post yahan pesh ki hai...umeed karta hoon aap achi hongi aur aapka saath bana rahega. Gum to kayi mile par uska Aansu pochna bahut yaad aaya Zindagi ki Raftar ka hamey peechey chod jana bahut yaad aaya Inteezaar us waqt ka dekhein unhey samney Achanak uska samney Aa kar muskurana bahut yaad aaya bahooot khoob...! sada aur seedha dil mein utar jane wala sher kaha hai aapne...meri daad kubool kijiye..dil ki gehraiyon se aapka aabhari hoon ki aap waqt nikaal kar yahan aayi...likhte rahiye aur sada khush rahiye..apna khayal rakhiye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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Re: Hi |
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Re: Hi -
29th January 2005, 11:58 AM
namasjkar Pari ji
kaisi hai aap??? sach ek arse baad aap se rubru ho raha hoon...aur aap "muaafi" jaise alfaaz istemaal kar ke mujhe sharminda na kijiye plz...mein bhi ek arse baad is site par lauta hoon...jab se nai naukri join ki hai net par aana hi khatam ho gaya hai... pari ji yeh aap ki nazron ka karam hai ki aap mere kalaam ko itni ehmiyat deti hai...warna mein kuch bhi nahin....mein to bas dil ke haal ko bayan karne ki koshish bhar karta hoon,,yeh aap jaise dost hai jo mujhe likhne ko prerit karte hai.aapke is maan ke liye mein dil ki gehraiyon se shukrguzar hoon. kaash...delhi mein aap bhi ham sab ke saath hoti...ham logon ne har shayri.com member par baat ki,,jinmein aap bhi thi...badkismati hai hamari ki aap hamare saath nahin thi..wo sach mein kabhi na bhulnewala lamha tha jise ham logon ne jiya...ek dusre ke chehron se anjaan ham sab jab pehli martaba rubru hue to wo manzar bayan nahin kiya ja sakta...aapko meri tasveerein pasand aayi iske liye dil se aabhari hoon... mein yehi umeed karunga ki aap ka saath is mehfil mein bana rahe...aap jahan bhi rahe khush rahe.. apna khayal rakhiye,aapki nayi gazal ka sada intezaar rahega. -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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Re: Bahut khoob |
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Re: Bahut khoob -
5th February 2005, 01:24 PM
chand bhai
deir se reply ke liye muaafi chahata hoon....bahoot bahooot shukriya dost aapke hauslaafzai ke liye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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5th February 2005, 04:50 PM
Nazron ki gustakhiyon ke jamane bahoot yaad aaye
na ban sake haqiqat jo fasane bahoot yaad aaye aur aaj peeche mud ke dekha jo jindagi ke safar mein "kureel" samjha kiye jinhe apna wo begaane bahoot yaad aaye Manoj Bhai..... aapke ye sher dil ko choo gaye..... sach, ek dard ek judaai aur phir yaaden...... aur kya kahoon..... maufi ki der se aapki post pe aaya......aur badi aarzoo thi ki delhi mein shaadi pe milenge magar aapki tabiyat zara nasaaz thi.... khair phir kabhi sahi..... yunhi likhte rahiye janab..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Re: Re: Nazron ki gustakhiyon ke jamane... |
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Re: Re: Nazron ki gustakhiyon ke jamane... -
31st March 2005, 07:16 PM
meena di
deir se reply dene ke liye muaafi chahta hoon....dil ki gehraiyon se shukrguzaar hoon aapki tareef ke liye...take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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31st March 2005, 07:18 PM
HI PULKIT
sorrry 4 late reply...bahooot acha laga tumhara reply pa kar....dil ki gehraiyon se shukriya aapka....take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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9th May 2005, 11:49 AM
manojji
itne dino baad aapka kuch likha padha mazaa aa gaaya har baar ki tarah is baar bhi aapka likha sidhe dil mein utar gaya sonal There would come a time when we have to stop loving a person not because that person started hating us ..... but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go..... |
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9th May 2005, 12:26 PM
manoj..
maaf kerna ayi kayio baar per tumhari ye rachna nahi parh payi...ye bhi bahut aacha ehsas hai....dil se daad kabool kerna.... |
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Re: Nazron ki gustakhiyon ke jamane... |
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Re: Nazron ki gustakhiyon ke jamane... -
10th May 2005, 10:38 AM
Hi Manoj,
Aap ki Shayri bahut achchhi hai, Lagta hai ki aap ka kisne ne dil tod diya hai...Lekin aap is traha likhte rahe to aek din bade shayar ho jayege... Anup |
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18th November 2005, 05:06 PM
aman bhai
apni is bhoooli bisri post par ek arse baad aapko reply de raha hooon....muaafi ka talabgaar hooon.....aapki izzatafzai aur daad ka tah-e-dil se shukrguzaaar hooon..likhte rahiye.,..khush rahiye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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