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Kuch mera pyaar hi dila de mujhe -
10th January 2007, 05:20 PM
apni new rachana apke samne pesh kar rahi hun.
sakhi Kuch mera pyaar hi dila de mujhe Mein aaj tumse kuch mangti hun Wadaa karo na karoge ruswa mujhe Tum koi achi si dua do mujhe Ya phir yaisa karo rulaa do mujhe Tumko bhulaau jo mein agar Maut aa jaye ye duaa do mujhe Rahun jo khush mein tere wagair Na mere hone ka silsila do mujhe Bahut si maayusiya mili hai ‘sakhi’ In maayusioin se bahar laa de mujhe Mein ye nahi kahti ki sab de de Kuch mera pyaar hi dila de mujhe (10/1/2007) शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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Nice Creation -
10th January 2007, 07:11 PM
Nice creation
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11th January 2007, 03:41 PM
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apko mera creation acha laga dil se shukriya ada kar rahi hun apka. sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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11th January 2007, 05:03 PM
sakhi ji namskaar,
aaj aap udas kyuN? aapki is rachna meiN aapki udasi nazar aayi jo dil meiN khwahisheN jagake baithi haiN kuch paane ki kisi se aapne apne dil ke ehsaasoN ko bahot hi gehrayi ke sath bayaaN kiye haiN mujhe sari peshaks meiN se 2 lines mere dil ko chhu gai aur bahot pasaNd bhi aayi wo do lines bahot kuch keh deti hai Tum koi achi si dua do mujhe Ya phir yaisa karo rulaa do mujhe khus raheN aur apna khayal rakheN aapka dost dhaval |
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12th January 2007, 12:43 PM
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udasi ab yaisi nahi aati kyun ki patjhad ka mausam aa gya hai koi ab itna rulana nahi kyun ki pahle hi koi bahut rula gya hai ye udasi to bas yuhi kisi ke karan aai thi tabhi is rachana mein apni udasi ko milake apke samne rakh diya. shayad isse mein halki ho jati hun bas.mera bojh utar jata hai kuch. khawahise ab rakhti nahi mein. kisi se koi umeed rakhna bhi beimaani hai khud se. isliye bas jaisa chal raha hai chalne do. yahi jindagi hai. aap yahn aaye mere sath sukriyaa. aap bhi apna khyaal rakhna sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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12th January 2007, 03:01 AM
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Aaj tumhe bahut der baad padhne ka mauka mila.. Aur itna dard bhara hua hai har shabd me.. itni maayoosi.. Dil se nikalti hai to bas dua meri sakhi ke liye... Khushiyan ho jaaye haazir jaldi se teri muskaan ke liye... Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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12th January 2007, 12:49 PM
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tumhein yahn dekha to dil khush ho gya. purane dostoin ka saath ho to kya baat hai na????  Dil se nikalti hai to bas dua meri sakhi ke liye... Khushiyan ho jaaye haazir jaldi se teri muskaan ke liye... ye baat dil ko chho gai aur mein muskuraa rahi hun jab se tumhara naam mere post par dekha mein bakhut khush hun. shukriya dost saath dene ke liye. apna khyaal rakhna dear ok sakhi with love शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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12th January 2007, 05:25 PM
Sakhi ji namskar,
apne bahut hi acchi rachana likhi hai. aur khaskar apki ye do lines "Bahut si maayusiya mili hai ‘sakhi’ In maayusioin se bahar laa de mujhe" youn laga ki mere andar ka kahin koi jakhm hara ho gaya ho. but good one's Thanks |
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17th January 2007, 06:30 PM
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kaise ho aap?? shukriya mera likha pasand karne ke liye. apka jakham hara hua apko taklif bhi hui hogi. bas yahi dua hai taklif kam ho apki aur apko khushiyaa mile. sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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17th January 2007, 07:12 PM
Excellent words of hearts
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20th January 2007, 03:20 PM
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bahut bahut shukriya apka yahn aane ke liye. aapko apne post par pahli baar dekha hai. asha hai aage bhi aap ate rahoge yahn. sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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20th January 2007, 08:47 PM
shakhi ji
namaskar kaisi hain aap aapki ye nazam bahut hi khoobsurat hai ehsaso se sarabor apne pyar main sara jahan dekhna bahut badi baat hai hamesha ese hi likhte rahiyega shukriya dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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22nd January 2007, 12:42 PM
pyari sakhi
bahut accha likha hai, ahsaas dil chu gaye...meri dua hai...sakhi ko uska pyar aur zamane ki har kushi miley...ameen. lots of love tumhari dii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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23rd January 2007, 03:45 PM
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didi bahut bahut shukriya apka aapne jo dua ki mere liye. sakhi with love शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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23rd January 2007, 01:18 PM
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sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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22nd January 2007, 01:11 PM
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ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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23rd January 2007, 03:48 PM
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raj ji namskar apne mere shabdoion ki sachai ko samjh acha laga jaan ke. shukriyaa yahn aake hoshala afjai karne ka. sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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26th January 2007, 01:03 PM
Bahut si maayusiya mili hai ‘sakhi’
In maayusioin se bahar laa de mujhe Mein ye nahi kahti ki sab de de Kuch mera pyaar hi dila de mujhe Hello My sweet doll Bahut pyari si rachna likhi hay tumney......I wish tumhey mayusiyaan kabhi na mile aur har kadam bhaar hi bhaar miley....yuun hi likhti raho...... Apna khyal rakhna |
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28th January 2007, 12:43 PM
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kaisi ho aap? shukriya meri khushiyoin ki chahat karne ke liye. aur mera likha sarahne ke liye. aap yahan aai to meri khushi bad gai didi realy. sakhi with love शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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26th January 2007, 01:12 PM
sach ma apka ya ehshash dil ma utar gaya .........bahut acha likha ha apna......ma to iss shayri ka mahfill ma naye hu ....aur apko pahli barr padha ......jo sidha dil ko chu gaya........asa hi ehshasho ko sabdo ma piro ka pass karta rahiyaga..................
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "ajnabi nahi thi pahla yann duniya tera ishq ma isko bhi ajnabi bana gaye" aapki dost~saloni |
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28th January 2007, 12:49 PM
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aapne mujhe pada bahut acha laga apko apne post par pahli baar paake. apke dil tak pahunchi meri baat to mera likhna safal hua. kash ye us dil tak apni pahunch bana paye jis dil ki ise chah rahi ho.yuhi aate rahna dost. sakhi with love शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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