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Lightbulb Geetkar hun - 1st March 2006, 07:24 PM
Saanjh ban ke dhal rahi
dhalaan ki kataar hun.
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.

Samajvad agaya yeh
bandhu mere kehrahe
Vastuvon ke bhav hain ki
aasmaan chu rahe.

Is bane vispot ki main
dehakti chingaar hun
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.

Dekh mujko karna hoga
apne mann mei ik manan
aagayi ya chup gayi
bhavisya ki meri dulhan.

Bana ke dekhun chitr
main kya chitrkar hun
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.

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Re: Geetkar hun - 1st March 2006, 07:40 PM
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Saanjh ban ke dhal rahi
dhalaan ki kataar hun.
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.

Samajvad agaya yeh
bandhu mere kehrahe
Vastuvon ke bhav hain ki
aasmaan chu rahe.

Is bane vispot ki main
dehakti chingaar hun
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.

Dekh mujko karna hoga
apne mann mei ik manan
aagayi ya chup gayi
bhavisya ki meri dulhan.

Bana ke dekhun chitr
main kya chitrkar hun
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.

Kanchan
Wah kaanch ji bohat hi khoob..Jab bhi hindi ki koi bhi rachna dekhta hu kush ho jata hu..Aur wo bhi apki ho to kya kehne..Take care ji
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Re: Geetkar hun - 1st March 2006, 09:00 PM
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Saanjh ban ke dhal rahi
dhalaan ki kataar hun.
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.

Samajvad agaya yeh
bandhu mere kehrahe
Vastuvon ke bhav hain ki
aasmaan chu rahe.

Is bane vispot ki main
dehakti chingaar hun
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.

Dekh mujko karna hoga
apne mann mei ik manan
aagayi ya chup gayi
bhavisya ki meri dulhan.

Bana ke dekhun chitr
main kya chitrkar hun
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.

Kanchan
Kaanch,
yeh kaun chitrkaar hai..............
Bahaut khoobsurat likha hai tumhne. Bilkul alag agaaz.

"Aakash ke padosh ki ek geetkaar hoon"

Aise hee likhti raho, taki hum bhi parhein
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Re: Geetkar hun - 2nd March 2006, 08:23 AM
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Saanjh ban ke dhal rahi
dhalaan ki kataar hun.
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.

Samajvad agaya yeh
bandhu mere kehrahe
Vastuvon ke bhav hain ki
aasmaan chu rahe.

Is bane vispot ki main
dehakti chingaar hun
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.

Dekh mujko karna hoga
apne mann mei ik manan
aagayi ya chup gayi
bhavisya ki meri dulhan.

Bana ke dekhun chitr
main kya chitrkar hun
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.

Kanchan

meri priy kanch,

Samajvad agaya yeh
bandhu mere kehrahe
Vastuvon ke bhav hain ki
aasmaan chu rahe.

Is bane vispot ki main
dehakti chingaar hun
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.


sach ko kala kruti mai dhhalna.. humesha ek soch ko janam deta hai.. aisi soch .. jo ujala laane ke liye aakash ki aur chal padti hai..

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Re: Re: Geetkar hun - 7th March 2006, 05:52 PM
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Wah kaanch ji bohat hi khoob..Jab bhi hindi ki koi bhi rachna dekhta hu kush ho jata hu..Aur wo bhi apki ho to kya kehne..Take care ji
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Re: Re: Geetkar hun - 7th March 2006, 05:55 PM
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meri priy kanch,

Samajvad agaya yeh
bandhu mere kehrahe
Vastuvon ke bhav hain ki
aasmaan chu rahe.

Is bane vispot ki main
dehakti chingaar hun
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.


sach ko kala kruti mai dhhalna.. humesha ek soch ko janam deta hai.. aisi soch .. jo ujala laane ke liye aakash ki aur chal padti hai..

tumhari meena
Meena ji, namastey
pehle to maafi chati hun der se reply per. bohat acha laga jab aap ka samarthan pada to.
apna khayal rakhi yega

aapki
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Re: Geetkar hun - 7th March 2006, 06:10 PM
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Saanjh ban ke dhal rahi
dhalaan ki kataar hun.
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.

Samajvad agaya yeh
bandhu mere kehrahe
Vastuvon ke bhav hain ki
aasmaan chu rahe.

Is bane vispot ki main
dehakti chingaar hun
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.

Dekh mujko karna hoga
apne mann mei ik manan
aagayi ya chup gayi
bhavisya ki meri dulhan.

Bana ke dekhun chitr
main kya chitrkar hun
Aakash ke padosh ki
main ek geetkar hun.

Kanchan

ek baar apna takiya kalaam duhra doon....

"Kanchan ji, aapki is roop ki deewani hoon mai"

bahoot achha likha hai... bahoot hi achha

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Re: Geetkar hun - 8th March 2006, 01:38 PM
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ek baar apna takiya kalaam duhra doon....

"Kanchan ji, aapki is roop ki deewani hoon mai"

bahoot achha likha hai... bahoot hi achha

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8th March 2006, 01:58 PM
priya kanchan....

sabse pehle maufi chahti hoon jo itni der se padhrahi hoon tumhe...
tumne bahaut hi pyara likkha hai hamesha ki tarah....
mein koshish karti thi ke kabhi sudh hindi me kuch likh sakoon par aaj tak nahi likhpaayi hehe
tumse seekhna padega ji....
sikha dena plz.

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8th March 2006, 02:04 PM
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priya kanchan....

sabse pehle maufi chahti hoon jo itni der se padhrahi hoon tumhe...
tumne bahaut hi pyara likkha hai hamesha ki tarah....
mein koshish karti thi ke kabhi sudh hindi me kuch likh sakoon par aaj tak nahi likhpaayi hehe
tumse seekhna padega ji....
sikha dena plz.
Farhana ji
bohat acha laga aapko yaha dek kar. aapne ise pasand kiye to ek hosla mila hei.
Agar aap Shudh hinhi mei likna chahey hein to ye bat bohat kusi hei. mujse jitna ban padega kosis kerungi, Wese yaha bohat se achey hindi ke writers hein, muje bi unse hi inspiration milti reti hei.
itna waqt dene ke liy mei aapka shukriya kerti hun

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