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Kyu kiya khoon masoom ka ? -
6th June 2006, 12:36 PM
ek share arz karti hu:
"Shama par chala mukadma parwane ke khoon ka, Pucha gaya shama se kyu kiya khoon masoom ka, Shama boli, parwana jawani ke nashe mai joom raha tha, Mere aagey peechey ghoom raha tha, Khoon na karti to kaya karti, Bhari mehfil mai mujhe choom raha tha"  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Re: Kyu kiya khoon masoom ka ? -
6th June 2006, 12:44 PM
"Shama par chala mukadma parwane ke khoon ka,
Pucha gaya shama se kyu kiya khoon masoom ka, Shama boli, parwana jawani ke nashe mai joom raha tha, Mere aagey peechey ghoom raha tha, Khoon na karti to kaya karti, Bhari mehfil mai mujhe choom raha tha" WAH..WAH.... sunita ji..aapke sher ne mere labon par muskaan la di....sach..kitni khubsurati se aapne apni baat keh di hai..bahoot khooob...apna ek sher yaad aa gaya...gaur farmaiyega.... wo nahin jante abhi andheron ki wehshatein parwanon se jo jalne ka mazza puchte hai meri daad kubool kijiye....apna khayal rkahiye karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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6th June 2006, 03:59 PM
wow
sunita jee aapse se to sarna padega.. are yaar .. wo chum hi to raha tha... aur aapne khoon kar diya... but good sher. keep writing ARUN ====================================== Dil naa-umid to nahi, nakaam hi to hai. lambi hai gam ki shaam, magar yeh shaam hi to hai. ======================================= |
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bahut khoob -
6th June 2006, 05:54 PM
bahut khoob kaha bahut achha laga wah
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kyu kiya khoon masoom ka -
7th June 2006, 09:06 AM
Masoom ji
Namaskar ! appko mera shayer accha laga, pad kar bahut kushi hue. daad ke liye sukriya. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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9th January 2007, 01:15 AM
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uff... maar daala.... allah... maar daala... arre Di... thoda rehem to karte.... woh itna important murder nahi tha.. ab main aapke bina kaise rahungi.... nahi.....   Good one!!! ~Priya  "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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accha lagga aapka reply dekh kar...aur aapka sher us se bhi jayada accha lagga, yu hi saath detey rahna....! .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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shukriya arun.... .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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priya ab kaya karu, jo nahi hona chahiye tha ho gaya......  tu kaha kaha se nikaal kar laye hai enko...bahut puraney hai yeh...! .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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9th January 2007, 10:52 AM
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pranaam sister, murder ? hahaha mujhe badi hasi aayi ye priya di ka jawab dekhke ab jhel lo mujhe bhi Shama par chala mukadma parwane ke khoon ka, Pucha gaya shama se kyu kiya khoon masoom ka ye bahot badhiya laga mujhe khus raheN aur apna khayal rakheN aapka chhotu |
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He raam.. ye ghor anrath main kaise hazam kar paaungi..... Purane hain to kya hua.. kya lagta hai aapko mujhe chupa loge inge... ...main to is post ko pataal se dhoondh laati.. ismein to aapka ikbaale jurm hai.. vaise meri salah maano to yeh thread delete hi karva do... kyunki agar police ke haath lag gaya to musibat ho jaayegi.... hahahahhahaa.... hass hass ke mere pet me dard hone lag gaya... ab chalti hun.. ~Priya Dhaval.... Di ko chodna mat.. bahut mushkil se Di ki taang kheenchne ka mauka mila hai... chodna mat chotte bhai.. ~Priya"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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13th January 2007, 11:12 AM
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hmm priya di sahi kaha hai ji aapne sister gaur kijiyega vaise meri salah maano to yeh thread delete hi karva do... kyunki agar police ke haath lag gaya to musibat ho jaayegi.... maine dekha k yahaaN kiskika khoon hua hai ab lagta hai 100 dial karna padega mujhe aur FIR bhi darz karvani pade shayd ye ek aisa khoon hai jiske hone par bahot hasii aa rahi hai mujhe hahaha |
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14th January 2007, 02:10 PM
hahahah..............bahot hasi aai mujhe........nahi nahi...apke sher pe nahi....priya di ka javaab uspe dhaval ki dalilen..........subhaan allah.......waise di apko ye nahi karna chahiye thha..........buri baat hai na........ab apko taazi rat-e-hind daffa 302 ke tahat saza sunaai jayegi........hahaha
hum ayenge apke liye khana leke...... ..don worry...kabhi kabhi phone bhi kar liya karenge......lekin apko itna bada jurm nahi karna chahiye thha...... well di apka ye sher bahot achha lga...kabil-e-tarif hai...well keep writing my dear badi diiiiiii grazie aapki gudiya matko rani pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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17th January 2007, 11:51 PM
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hahahhaa...... Di... aap abhi tak yahan vapis kyun nahi aaye??? Darro mat, main hun na...  main kisiko bhi police complaint nahi karne doongi kisiko bhi... Aap bina darre aa jaao vaapis..... hahahahaa!!!! Chalo ab chalti hun.. aaj ke liye hassi ki dose kaafi ho gayi ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Abhi Dhaval se keh ke chuki hun.. aur ab tum bhi... Koi police complaint nahi kar sakte hum sab... gharvaalon ka jurm gharvaalon ko hi digest karna padta hai... Bichare baaki saare parivaar vaale... arre mera haazma to bahut jyada kharaab hai.. lekin main phir bhi chup hun.. Take Care... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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19th January 2007, 10:54 PM
priya didi
pata nahi ye khoon karke meri sisiter kahaaN chale gaye hai, ab to unke aane ka tak wait karna hi padega sister aa jaayeN koi humme se koi police ko nahi batayenga hahahah kyuN priya di maiN sahi bol raha huN na? sister kahaN hai aap? |
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Bahut Achaa -
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"Aapne ye ashar me bahut khubsurti ke saath apnee baat ko kahne ki koshish ki hai. Bahut acha likha hai aapne Aap esee tarah likhte rahen mujhe intezaar rahega. Aap apna khyaal rakhiyega, take care Allah Hafiz SHAAN ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Gamo ki keder karo or unke saath jiyu, Kyuki Gam kabhi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah. Shaan |
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20th January 2007, 11:44 AM
wah sunita ji wah
aapne kya baat kahi hai DERI SE PADHA HAI PAR AAJ SIRF AAPKI IS RACHNA NE AANKHON KO NAHI DIL KO BHI CHHUA HAI LOG KAHTE HAIN WAH KOI ISE AAPKI KALA KAHTA HAI HUM JANTE HAI KI KAHI AAPKA DIL AAJ FIR SE DUKHA HAI JAB JAB BHI AAPKI KOI RACHNA AANKHO SE GUJARI HAI JO PADHKAR MUKARATE THE UNKA BHI SIR JHUKA HAI sunita ji aapne bahut hi khub likha hai ese hi likhte rahiyega janaab aapke javab ka intezaar rahega aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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20th January 2007, 08:51 PM
heee hehe
didi aapka itna bhayankar roop dekhka darr lag raha hai lagta hi nahi aap esa bhi kar sakti hain. " pyar main mile chahe kitne hi gam parwah nahi hai badle main pyar mile ye bhi chah nahi hai hum wo nahi do jalne ke dar se shama ka sath chod de.n anzam kuch bhi ho chahe fir parwah nahi hai. aadab arz hai.......  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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22nd January 2007, 12:11 PM
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.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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thanks alot .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd January 2007, 12:19 PM
Dhaval.....tum accha bhai ka farz nibha rahey ho, police complaint karke....
 koi baat nahi dekh lungi tumhey, mere hi paas aatey ho na har baat ka rona roney.....! aur Pooja....tujhe etna pyar diya...koi kami nahi rakhi tu bhi es dhaval ki side ho gaye...mujhe es problem mai.n chorr kar....  Priya....mai.n tujhe es sabse samjdaar mannti thi, maine galti ki tum sab ko aapna maan kar, ek taraf to tum dhaval ko kah rahi ho ki ghar ki baat hai aur doosri taraf ente badey badey reply karke sabko bata bhi diya....koi baat nahi...tujhe bhi dhaval ke saath dekh lungi....jab ek khoone kiya hi hai...tooo......samaj gaye.... dilip tumse to hargiz yeh umeed nahi thi...........koi baat nahi....! "jab aapne ho jaye be-wafa to dil tootey" .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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bhut khub -
22nd January 2007, 01:17 PM
sunita ji is pyari c sharing ke liye hum aapke shukar guzaar hain wh kyaa baat hai.........meri daad hazir hai........raj.........
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22nd January 2007, 01:54 PM
aapka bhi bahut bahut sukhriya sunita ji hamein javab dene ke liya
kya bat kahi hai aapne maine aaj padha ki...... khuda kabhi tu bhi bichhad kar dekh... wah Ek din khuda ne insaan se kaha kabhi ishq mat karna, Dewaana ban jayega, Tabhi insaan bola, Kabhi dewaana banker to dekh tu bhi insaan ban jayega. Quote:
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22nd January 2007, 08:25 PM
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acha silla diya tune mere pyar ka... yaar kahin loot liya ghar yaar ka.... Acha silla diya tune mere pyar ka... Ek to maine aapka saath diya... Dhaval aur Pooja dono ko police complaint karne se roka.. ab agar yahan reply nahi karti to unko kaise rokti.. aur aapne meri wafa ka yeh silla diya... nahi... yeh suune se pehle mere kaan kyun nahi kat gaye... zameen kyun na fat gayi... aasmaan kyun na gir pada... Koi baat nahi Di... jab aapne, mujhe bhi Dhaval aur Pooja ke saath hi rakha hai.. to theek hain... Hum teeno milke.. aapko dekh lenge... Theek kaha na kyun Dhaval??? Pooja??? Di ab aap, hum teeno ki team se bachke rehna.. aapki koi bhi agli rachna, nazm... hum teeno ke bina adhoori rahegi ab... Aapne ab ek Compliance Manager ko challenge kiya hai.... zara bachke.. zara bachke meri jaan... Take Care... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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22nd January 2007, 10:39 PM
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maine to bhai ka hi farz nibhaya tha bada nahi huN maiN to chhota huN shaitaan aur maine kahaaN police complain ki? afwah suni hoNgi shyad aapne wo to sirf 100 dial karne ko kaha tha kiya nahi tha aur sara rona leke to aaphi ke pass aata huN ye to aapko bhi pata hai apne chhotu ki aadat priya di se bach ke raheN team bahot badhiya banayi hai unhone hahahah ab to aap apna khayal rakheN haNsi ke sath ijaazataapka shaitaan chhotu |
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24th April 2007, 04:09 PM
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.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th April 2007, 04:38 PM
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kitna saada khyaal hai jo .. par shayari shayad yahi hai ... jo un batoN ko phir se kisi naye andaaz main keh jaye,... padhte hi hoNtoN pe waah aa gayi thi ... bohat accha laga aapko aise padh kar ,.. Khaak banda Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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25th April 2007, 09:40 AM
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god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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25th April 2007, 10:45 AM
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25th April 2007, 12:13 PM
Namaskar Sunita ji
Maine aapke sher ko padha. aur sabke jawab bhi pade.. woh kehte hai na ki har ek ka dekhne ka nazariya alag hota hai... mujhe yeh nahi pata ki sab log ise padh kar hasi ke mahaul mein kyu chale gaye hain ya mujhe ab kaise react karna chahiye. Par ek baat jo maine is sher mein feel ki hai usne sach mein mere dil ko dehla diya hai. Shayad yehi sachai hai. Mere pass words nahi hai express karne ke liye ki maine kya feel kiya hai balki mujhe sach mein pata hi nahi chal raha ki aisi feelings ko kya kehte hai... yeh dard ka ehsaas to nahi ho sakta kyunki us ehsaas se main waakif hoon. Par itna zaroor kehna chahunga ki maine aapko jyada to nahi padha par ise padh kar dil kar utha hai ki aapke saare kalaam padhu. aur umeed karta hoon jaldi hi mujhe time milega ki main aapke kalaam padhu aur khud ko khushnaseeb samjhu.. Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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25th April 2007, 12:31 PM
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yeh mere liye bahut kushi ki baat hai ki tum muj nacheez sarrey kalaam padna chahtey ho....! bahut bahut shukriya....!god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th April 2007, 03:26 PM
Kyu kiya khoon masoom ka ? - 6th June 2006, 12:36 PM
ek share arz karti hu: "Shama par chala mukadma parwane ke khoon ka, Pucha gaya shama se kyu kiya khoon masoom ka, Shama boli, parwana jawani ke nashe mai joom raha tha, Mere aagey peechey ghoom raha tha, Khoon na karti to kaya karti, Bhari mehfil mai mujhe choom raha tha" sunita ji aap ke sher pasand aaye aur esa badia likhti rahe namasker |
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27th April 2007, 10:11 AM
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kashif ji a-slaam-walekum kaise hain aap....! aapne mere sher pasand kiye ....dil se shukriya adda karti hoon...kabool farmaye. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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27th April 2007, 02:32 PM
wakai, dil fareb, badi aasaani se kahar dhaa gayi haiN aap dd, bas dil kar raha hai, ki wah wah hi karta rahuN...! bas gazab...!!!!!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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28th April 2007, 02:52 PM
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shukriya aapki dii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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1st September 2007, 04:33 PM
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pyaare sey Sher ko funny Sher humne kahaaN banaaYa.. ? Sher hai hi itanaa baDhiya!! ... waisey Priya didi aor maiN yahi soch rahe haiN.."KyuuN kiYaa Khoon maasoom kaa?? ..Hehehe..aapka chhoTu ~ Dhaval |
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3rd September 2007, 06:33 AM
namaste dii
bahut acha likha hai. alag sa likh hai, jo humein bahut pasand aaya. andaaz b acha hai. wow, reallly good and interesting. yuhin likte rahein aur khush rahein. aapka munna Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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8th September 2007, 03:26 PM
AAj kaa din bahut bura hain mere liye..so socha aaj sirf shayri e dard ko surf karu..to 3 rd page pe yeh title "kyun kiya khoon massom ka" padha to laga hey....yeh didine kya likha hain dekhu to sahin........fir apki [post padhi priya aur dhaval ke replies padhe to laga kahin humorous section main to nahin main(aapke sher ko humorous nahin keh rahi...sher likhne ka dhang kamal ka hain )......atmosphere to puri post pe humorous hi tha.............ek pal to reply nahin karnewali thi kyunki aaj mera hansne ka bilkul man nahin hai..par fir bhi maine reply kiya..........issiliye ke mujhe jaana tha ki apne aisa kyun kiya??????????
bechare masoom parvane ko mar diya...........rabba bechare ko pyar karne ki aisi sazaa mili...are bechare ne bhul se jyada daru pi li hogi....aaap use ek chata lagake hosh thikane le aati......Maar daala bichare......ko??????????...kahin policewalo ne yeh post padhke aapko jail mein daal to nahin diya...isiswajeh se aap gayab to nahin...............bas meri hasi ka quota khatam ho gaya so ..........ap jyada aapko tang na karungi.....Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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