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आज फिर उसका लिखा ख़त नज़र आया - 5th April 2010, 04:39 PM

आज फिर उसका लिखा ख़त नज़र आया
पढ़ते पढ़ते दिल फिर भर आया
बस यही सोचता रहा की आखिर क्यों
मौत को मेरा ही घर नज़र आया ...

आज उसकी लिखी वोह बातें फिर याद आई
आज फिर वोह पंक्तियाँ मैंने गुण गुनाइ
बस यही सोचता रहा की आखिर क्यों
हो गयी यह जुदाई ....

आज फिर उसकी यादों मे खो गया
जी भर कर रो गया
बस येही सोचता रहा की आखिर क्यों
मे तनहा हो गया ......

वजह जो भी हो आज बरसो बाद
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5th April 2010, 04:46 PM

lokesh zahid sahab,
kamal hai kya likha hai apne wahhhhhhhh..........daad kubul karein..........

barso baad zinda hone ka ehsaas...............

aise hi likhte rahiyega............duaaoo ke sath............

apka.




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Love 5th April 2010, 06:06 PM

आज फिर उसका लिखा ख़त नज़र आया
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मौत को मेरा ही घर नज़र आया ...

bhai kya baat likhi hai....bahut khoob...dil fida ho gaya aapki i'n paNkatiyoN pe.....


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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5th April 2010, 06:30 PM

LOKESH Ji........bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne......yaadon ka meetha-meetha dard-e-ehsaas karti lagi mujhe....sabhi panktiya mann ko chhuti hai...bahut khoob ! likhte rahiye....dil se daad hazir hai....

khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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6th April 2010, 01:00 AM

hiiiiiiii lokesh kya khub likha hai


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6th April 2010, 11:54 AM

Nice Work Lokesh Saheb...................


Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

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@sajid ghayel..............shukriya Sajid ji
   
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@naresh ji aap hamesh mera hoshla badahte hain..sach kyon to behad busy rehne ke baawjod mai yahan aata hoon sirf aap jaise behad umda logon ki wajah se ,..dil se shukriya
   
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vikram bhai aapko janata nahi par ek baat dil se mehsoos kar sakta hoon ki aap behad umda insaan hain..aapka sath hamesh rahega shayari ki is duniya mai..aise umid hai..shukriya
   
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आज फिर उसका लिखा ख़त नज़र आया
पढ़ते पढ़ते दिल फिर भर आया
बस यही सोचता रहा की आखिर क्यों
मौत को मेरा ही घर नज़र आया ...

आज उसकी लिखी वोह बातें फिर याद आई
आज फिर वोह पंक्तियाँ मैंने गुण गुनाइ
बस यही सोचता रहा की आखिर क्यों
हो गयी यह जुदाई ....

आज फिर उसकी यादों मे खो गया
जी भर कर रो गया
बस येही सोचता रहा की आखिर क्यों
मे तनहा हो गया ......

वजह जो भी हो आज बरसो बाद
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Lokesh ji aadaab

sach bahut hi badhya likha hai aapne
her sabad jaese sach kah raha ho
dil se daad haajir hai kabul kareN

sada khush raheN


maNzil pr nazar rakhtaa huN
zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !!

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Raj ji ..behed shukriya..asha hai aapka sath aage bhi milta rahega
   
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