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gayee ho - 18th November 2012, 10:07 AM

Lekar meri jaan gayee ho
Tum bhi ab ye maan gayee ho

Teri yaad mai bheeguN hardam
Kaisi chhatri taan gayee ho

Aaine se fair liya munh
kya khud ko pahchaan gayee ho

Jane ki thaani thi pahle
Ab aaogi na thaan gayee ho

kitna mushkil aaye thi tum
aur kitna asaan gayee ho

dekhogi to dar jaaogi
chhod ke yuN hairaan gayee ho

Aankh hi nikle ye na nikle
Bhar kar jo lobaan gayee ho
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18th November 2012, 02:14 PM

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Lekar meri jaan gayee ho
Tum bhi ab ye maan gayee ho

Teri yaad mai bheeguN hardam
Kaisi chhatri taan gayee ho

Aaine se fair liya munh
kya khud ko pahchaan gayee ho

Jane ki thaani thi pahle
Ab aaogi na thaan gayee ho

kitna mushkil aaye thi tum
aur kitna asaan gayee ho

dekhogi to dar jaaogi
chhod ke yuN hairaan gayee ho

Aankh hi nikle ye na nikle
Bhar kar jo lobaan gayee ho
Teri yaad mai bheeguN hardam
Kaisi chhatri taan gayee ho

Aaine se fair liya munh
kya khud ko pahchaan gayee ho

Good Expressions

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Mubaaraqbaad !!!




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18th November 2012, 02:46 PM

[QUOTE=janumanu;441222]Lekar meri jaan gayee ho
Tum bhi ab ye maan gayee ho

Teri yaad mai bheeguN hardam
Kaisi chhatri taan gayee ho

Aaine se fair liya munh
kya khud ko pahchaan gayee ho


Jane ki thaani thi pahle
Ab aaogi na thaan gayee ho

kitna mushkil aaye thi tum
aur kitna asaan gayee ho


dekhogi to dar jaaogi
chhod ke yuN hairaan gayee ho

Aankh hi nikle ye na nikle
Bhar kar jo lobaan gayee ho[
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bahut hii gahre ehsaas ..........................................


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Aaine se fair liya munh
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Lekar meri jaan gayee ho
Tum bhi ab ye maan gayee ho

Teri yaad mai bheeguN hardam
Kaisi chhatri taan gayee ho

Aaine se fair liya munh
kya khud ko pahchaan gayee ho

Jane ki thaani thi pahle
Ab aaogi na thaan gayee ho

kitna mushkil aaye thi tum
aur kitna asaan gayee ho

dekhogi to dar jaaogi
chhod ke yuN hairaan gayee ho

Aankh hi nikle ye na nikle
Bhar kar jo lobaan gayee ho
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