waah Zeba ji bohat khoob...
kaise tareef karu iskii aur kis sher ki kitni tareef karu samajh me nahi aa raha hai...
ek khata meri maaf karnaa meherban
tere hisse ke gum hum chura kar chale
phir milen to dosti ki ummed say milen
aj dilki har kad-wahat bhula kar chale
ufff aahh... kaise likha hoga aapne ye...
dard hi dard.. gham hi gham bhara hua hai isme...
sach me Zeba ji bohat achcha likha hai aapne....
her ek sher lajawaab hai...
aapka andaaz behad kashish bhara hai...
mubaarakbaad qubool kijiyega...
likhti rahiye aur muskuraati rahiye...