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Sapno ki mazaar !! |
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Sapno ki mazaar !! -
9th December 2004, 06:15 PM
aaj phir apne sapno ki mazar per bethi hu
aaj phir ek phool khilega shayad kuch dhundlapan hai aaj mausam mein ya shayad in aankhon ka ujala kuch kam hua hai panchiyon ki udaan nazar nahi aati ab shayad unko bhi naya basera mil gaya ya phir kisi saayiad ne kaat diye pankh unke bhi ashko mein phir ek saya nazar aaya hai qatl kiya meine us ko ya is duniya ne kehar dhaya hai saanj ko ab deepak nahi jalta aangan ki tulsi bhi udhaas hai koi to bhujaye us ki pyaas ko chandrma ki chaandni ki yahi fariyaad hai !!! |
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9th December 2004, 06:47 PM
meri nanuuuuu,
..................... diidiiii |
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9th December 2004, 07:05 PM
ashko mein phir ek saya nazar aaya hai
qatl kiya meine us ko ya is duniya ne kehar dhaya hai Hi! Saw ur post after a long time... How r u? Hope u r doing well  Beatiful words really... Mujhe bahut acchai lagi aapki yeh post... plz do keep up the good work.. keep writing aaj phir apne sapno ki mazar per bethi hu aaj phir ek phool khilega shayad kuch dhundlapan hai aaj mausam mein ya shayad in aankhon ka ujala kuch kam hua hai Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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i like ur poem |
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i like ur poem -
18th December 2004, 12:43 PM
good dear ; i like u plzzzzz contact me on my mail i will defenetly provide u a good friendship as i like u; u r good girl; and i born on 15th of april 1981; so we will become good mate right baby? yes.
by dear ur dearest freind " mitul" |
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just come back... |
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just come back... -
26th December 2004, 09:04 AM
Hi...Shalu...
its more than 10 month since i visited Shayri.com....i m back again in my normal life ...with lots of changes....specialy at career end...any way...we will talk that later... ur latest ..."...sapno ki mazar....."....hhmm...touchy....well done...whts new..... mail me... praveen |
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27th December 2004, 03:21 PM
Waqt phir karwat lega ey dil
Tu udaas kyoN hota hai, Dekh tera muskuraata sa hausla PhooloN ko bhi khila deta hai Paagat...sweekar kar in gamoN ko bhi In gamoN ke peechhe bhi Muskuraahat ka koi kaaran chhupa hota hai. Chaand Shalini...bas yahi kahooNga..ke him.mat rakho....or muskurakar apni raah per aage barhti raho... tumhaara waqt bhi aaega...us waqt ka intzaar karo. meine kaha tha na wo song.... thode gam haiN Thodi khushiyaaN yahi hai...yahi hai... Yahi hai ChhaaNv dhoop. Ye jeewan hai. Dua rahegi...hamesha khush raho. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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Bahut Khub... |
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Bahut Khub... -
4th August 2006, 04:45 PM
ashko mein phir ek saya nazar aaya hai
qatl kiya meine us ko ya is duniya ne kehar dhaya hai Bahut Khub Shalini, Bahut hi achha likha hai par ye likha nahi gaya hai balki ye aapke antaraatma ki goonj hai aur ye main yunhi nahi kah raha .....mahsoos kiya hai har shabdo ko gehrai se..... Shalini ji Panchi kitni dur bhi udta chala jaye,laut ke apne aashiyan me vapas aata hi hai.....aap bhi apne aashiyan ko bakhubi pehchanye aur ...... Take care.......  |
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4th August 2006, 06:15 PM
hi shalini
bahut khubsurat likha hai aisa laga jaise ahsaas bhar diyen hain kitna sada kitna sakun dene wala wow main nahi kah sakta koi lafj aapki tareef main sach kah raha hun mujhe behad achha laga dil se kah raha hun bahut udasi hai bahut hee gahrai fir bhi bilkul sadgi hai is rachana main likhte rahiye tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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