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mere jivan ki shaam -
10th May 2003, 02:51 PM
Ek din mere angan maie
achanak aa khadi hui, n taar – n khabar... kaale badal ki tarah achanak hi baras padi.. muj par hasti boli.. aa gayi hu tere paas ab n kabhi jaaungi.. tere jivan ki maie saanj tere rang maie rang jaaungi tu chahe to shyam aur chahae to gulabi ban jaaungi par ab n wapas jaaungi. |
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12th May 2003, 02:35 PM
meena ji
aap ka kalaam ab kisi bhi qisim ki comments kaa mohtaaj naheen hai. siwaaey is ke keh is ki taareef ki jaaey. mein sochta hoon ke aap itna dil se likhti hain jo doosron per bohat asar kerta hai. kam az kam mujh per to bohat. umeed kerta hoon aap isi tarah likhti rahengi. please take care and wishing you all the best. musharraf husain |
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ji shukriaa -
12th May 2003, 03:43 PM
dostmusi ji,
aapka jitna shukria ada karu kam hai.aapne hamesha muje mere ahesaaso ko saraha hai. |
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