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Love **PanaH** - 26th April 2010, 11:38 AM
Dil jadd da thora viraN ho gaya e
sikhar duphere vi mainu kujh nazar nahiN aunda
eh kaisa sana.nata kaisa andh.kaar ho gaya e
bagaaN de vich koi phull nahiN.. koi kali nahiN
har ja.ra jiddaN shamshaaN nu janda raah ho gaya e
maiN barff bann kadd takk kharda lo agge
pighliya te vajood tabaH ho gaya e
oss noor takk pujjaN da daava ki karaN
atma da rang kala si...huN siaaH ho gaya e
ghar taaN banaya si maiN vi, khidki darvaaje toN sakkhna
ajj kall meri kabar.gaaH ho gaya e
oh hun juram nahiN pucchde, bass saja sunaunde ne
mera hi parchavaN suneya ohna da gwaaH ho gaya e
havavaN nu dard sunaeya taaN oh vi cheek paiyaN
toofaN toN baad sochdaN ke mere toN gunaaH ho gaya e
safar di izzazat de, ohne paireeN gungroo bann ditte
nall sharat vi ke turda awaaz na karaN
hun oh sukooN ch hai..beparwah ho gaya e
har nadi di chahat samunder hi si…par ohde intzaar ch
jameeN da ek maroo jeha tukda, kan-kan karke registaaN hunda jada
bass aiveN fanaa ho gaya e
jadd vi thakk –tutt ke ghar auna
taaN mainu intezaar ch baitha milda
mera gamm meri panaH ho gaya e



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ਤੁਸੀਂ ਖੁਦ ਹੀ ਧਿਆਨ ਮਾਰੋ, ਕਿੰਨਾ ਕਠਿਨ ਹੈ ਯਾਰੋਂ,
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29th April 2010, 02:07 AM
safar di izzazat de, ohne paireeN gungroo bann ditte
nall sharat vi ke turda awaaz na karaN
hun oh sukooN ch hai..beparwah ho gaya e
har nadi di chahat samunder hi si…par ohde intzaar ch
jameeN da ek maroo jeha tukda, kan-kan karke registaaN hunda jada
bass aiveN fanaa ho gaya e
jadd vi thakk –tutt ke ghar auna
taaN mainu intezaar ch baitha milda
mera gamm meri panaH ho gaya e
aah lines gaint aa bai ji...baut badhia.....1 saal to padda aa thonu preet par gamm ghatn di jaga vadh gaya aa......

ਤੱਸਵੁਰ ਵਿਚ ਮੈਂ ਇਹ ਕੇਹੋ ਜਿਹੀ ਮੂਰਤ ਬਣਾ ਬੈਠਾ
ਨਾ ਇਸ ਵਿਚ ਰੰਗ ਭਰ ਹੁੰਦੇ ਨਾ ਇਹ ਦਿਲਤੋਂ ਮਿਟਾ ਹੁੰਦੀ
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Dil jadd da thora viraN ho gaya e
sikhar duphere vi mainu kujh nazar nahiN aunda
eh kaisa sana.nata kaisa andh.kaar ho gaya e
bagaaN de vich koi phull nahiN.. koi kali nahiN
har ja.ra jiddaN shamshaaN nu janda raah ho gaya e
maiN barff bann kadd takk kharda lo agge
pighliya te vajood tabaH ho gaya e
oss noor takk pujjaN da daava ki karaN
atma da rang kala si...huN siaaH ho gaya e
ghar taaN banaya si maiN vi, khidki darvaaje toN sakkhna
ajj kall meri kabar.gaaH ho gaya e
oh hun juram nahiN pucchde, bass saja sunaunde ne
mera hi parchavaN suneya ohna da gwaaH ho gaya e
havavaN nu dard sunaeya taaN oh vi cheek paiyaN
toofaN toN baad sochdaN ke mere toN gunaaH ho gaya e
safar di izzazat de, ohne paireeN gungroo bann ditte
nall sharat vi ke turda awaaz na karaN
hun oh sukooN ch hai..beparwah ho gaya e
har nadi di chahat samunder hi si…par ohde intzaar ch
jameeN da ek maroo jeha tukda, kan-kan karke registaaN hunda jada
bass aiveN fanaa ho gaya e
jadd vi thakk –tutt ke ghar auna
taaN mainu intezaar ch baitha milda
mera gamm meri panaH ho gaya e
bohat hi sohna likhya hai preet jii.....
thode likhan da style mainu behad changa lagda hai, eNj hi likhde raho...

'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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safar di izzazat de, ohne paireeN gungroo bann ditte
nall sharat vi ke turda awaaz na karaN
hun oh sukooN ch hai..beparwah ho gaya e
har nadi di chahat samunder hi si…par ohde intzaar ch
jameeN da ek maroo jeha tukda, kan-kan karke registaaN hunda jada
bass aiveN fanaa ho gaya e
jadd vi thakk –tutt ke ghar auna
taaN mainu intezaar ch baitha milda
mera gamm meri panaH ho gaya e
aah lines gaint aa bai ji...baut badhia.....1 saal to padda aa thonu preet par gamm ghatn di jaga vadh gaya aa......
SSA Ranjot veer ji..KiddaN oN tusiN......tusiN pehlaN vi puccheya si....gamgeen ja dukhi hoN di koi vajaH nahiN hai mere kol ...haaN koi anjaan jeha dard shayad chet.anta vich kitte doonga uttar gaya hai...Kyun..jiss din maiNu pata challeya..thuhanu jarror dasanga...oddaN vi i am an emotional fool......likhna taaN aunda nahiN...par apniaN harkataN toN maiN vi nahiN baaz aundaparaN lai atte pasand karaN lai bahut bahut dhanwad.kujh lines yaad aa gayiaN

par ke khat aiveN naa ho jave udass
iss lai usnu na koi hadsaa sadma likhaN
iss lai ajj teek likh nahiN sakeya ek harf vi
sochdaN haaN harf devaN saath taaN maiN likhaN......(NM)



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bohat hi sohna likhya hai preet jii.....
thode likhan da style mainu behad changa lagda hai, eNj hi likhde raho...
SSA Vikram ji.....hope you are doing great.....tusiN apna kemti sama es poem nu read karaN lai ditta...bahut hi shukarguzar haaN........apna kayal rakhna



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ਬੇਦਾਗ ਨੇ ਉਹ ਸਾਰੇ ਬੱਸ ਦਾਗਦਾਰ ਮੈਂ ਹੀ
ਉਹ ਲਿਸ਼ਕਦੇ ਨੇ ਸ਼ੀਸ਼ੇ ਮੈਲੀ ਨੁਹਾਰ ਮੈਂ ਹੀ
ਤੁਸੀਂ ਖੁਦ ਹੀ ਧਿਆਨ ਮਾਰੋ, ਕਿੰਨਾ ਕਠਿਨ ਹੈ ਯਾਰੋਂ,
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4th May 2010, 12:54 AM
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SSA Ranjot veer ji..KiddaN oN tusiN......tusiN pehlaN vi puccheya si....gamgeen ja dukhi hoN di koi vajaH nahiN hai mere kol ...haaN koi anjaan jeha dard shayad chet.anta vich kitte doonga uttar gaya hai...Kyun..jiss din maiNu pata challeya..thuhanu jarror dasanga...oddaN vi i am an emotional fool......likhna taaN aunda nahiN...par apniaN harkataN toN maiN vi nahiN baaz aundaparaN lai atte pasand karaN lai bahut bahut dhanwad.kujh lines yaad aa gayiaN

par ke khat aiveN naa ho jave udass
iss lai usnu na koi hadsaa sadma likhaN
iss lai ajj teek likh nahiN sakeya ek harf vi
sochdaN haaN harf devaN saath taaN maiN likhaN......(NM)
haye oye meria rabba thonu kine keha aa ke likhna ni anda....ans den lai thanku preet ji..

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