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22nd February 2016, 10:11 PM
Adaab doston..February mahine me TPT k liye diye mast sahab ki tasweer ko dekhkar kuch khayaal zehan me aaye..vo aap sab ke samne hain...mujhe khushi hoti agar is silsile me aur behtar kalaam aate aur hame padhne ka mauka milta....afsos..kyun ki aisa nahi hua..main ye kalaam yahaan post kar rahi hun..mast ji ka ek baar fir shukriya..ki unhone ek khoobsoorat tasweer di jis par main kuch likh saki.. chhup na jaye suraj thodi dhoop chura ke layein ham. saat rang badal se chun dharti ko zara sajayein ham. pankh mile hain armano ke ab koi kaise rokega chahe mushkil ho kaisi bhi door use bhagayein ham. jaan se bhi pyara hamko dil se ye dil ka rishta hai khud hee roothein yaron se fir khud hee unhe manayein ham. ham na jane kya hai apna kon yahaan paraya hai pyaar hee jag me baante aur pyaar hee sabse payein ham. chal ek dooje ke hathon ko tham gagan me ud jayein.. chaand taron se bhar muththi laut zamee.n pe aayein ham.. Har gali janegi ab awaaz hamare pairon ki Har disha hamse goonje ab shor kare ya gayein ham.  अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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23rd February 2016, 11:17 AM
wahhh wahhhhh....Madhu bahut hi umda likha hai tumne, muje behad pasand aaye yeh gazal...yu hi likhti rho...khush rho.
 .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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23rd February 2016, 11:24 AM
waaahhhhh kyaa baat hai madhu ji..... ek ek lafz kaise tasweer ki kahaani bayan kar raha ho......
meri taraf se behad mubaarakbaad qubool kijiye.... likhti rahiye Shaad... |
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24th February 2016, 12:15 AM
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उन बीते लम्हों के याद ना दिलाया करो
दिल में सुलग रही आग को ना हवा दिया करो |
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4th March 2016, 09:51 AM
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Aati rahein... Apna khayaal rakhein.... Madhu. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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8th March 2016, 10:48 PM
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Aate rahiyega.. Tkcr Madhu अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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5th April 2016, 04:13 PM
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sath dete rahiyega..... khayaal rakhiyega.. madhu.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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12th April 2016, 10:09 AM
Bahut umdaa Madhu us waqt bhi is saadgi se byaan karti hui ghazal ne dil pe asar kiya tha aur aaj phir padhkar vo ehsaas yaad aa gaye..bahut khoob
Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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17th April 2016, 12:00 AM
Bohut khoob ...
Ishwar kare tum issey bhi acha likho.. I m sure ye TPT mein hoti to jeet jaati.. Sarika |
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9th May 2016, 01:28 PM
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aap doston ka sath hee likhte rahne ki vajah hai... aate rahiyega.. takecare madhu. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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25th May 2016, 01:10 PM
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...hoti to na.......Khair tumhe pasand aayi mujhe achcha laga......duao ka aur sath ka dil se shukriya....aati raho... Madhu... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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25th May 2016, 04:59 PM
Bahot Umda Madhu JI..!!
Yunhi likhte rahe khush raheN  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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6th June 2016, 02:53 PM
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Aage bhi sath deti rahiyega... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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