DIya jal raha hai duniya ko roshni aaj dene ke liye,

[shayri12345]

dosto ek khyaal ko aapke saath share kar rahi hu>>


DIya jal raha hai duniya ko roshni aaj dene ke liye,
DIl tu kyu jalta hai uski yaad ko mitane ke liye?

Aaj ke din yaad kar lu kal tujhe bhulaungi,
Kyu karta hai usey yaad e dil kyausey bulaney ke liye??

pal jo mere liye bare hi anmol they,
aaj hai vo yaaro mere mujh ko rulaney ke liye,???

naam unka lete hi hai ye aankho me ashk kaisa,
Ye 'ashk' ho hoga jasgmag aaj DIWALI MANANE KE LIYE!!

chalo jo hua ho gaya, tum khush raho hai yahi dua,
hum bhi hasi ka nakkkab laga laingey chalo zamaney ke liye????

Priya>>

[Sharaabi]

Jaanu, bahot hi acha likha hai aapne - aise hi likhte rahiye. Par agar aap guzre hue pal ko pakaD ke rakhoge, to nayii yaadein kaise bane gi? Pata nahin main kya bol raha huun, agar mujhe koi yeh bolta, to mera jawab hota ki, "Usko yaad kar ke hi to jeene ke kabil huun main, warna kab ka duniye chhod jaata tha." It's hard to get over someone, mujhe dekhlo - I've loved her since five years now, aur abhi tak ek hi ladki ke peeche ro raha huun! Aap aisi galti mat karna, and sorry to lecture you =T

By the way, this was my favorite part of this sher

pal jo mere liye bare hi anmol they,
aaj hai vo yaaro mere mujh ko rulaney ke liye

Chalta huun main,
Aman.

[shayri12345]

hey aman thx a lot for likin and also the leturing part
yea aman this is the wired part of life cuz we dont even know the times that are making us smile will make us cry , but then the life goes on >> we should try to go on with it, though its really really hard,

ek baar phir in zasbaatoon ko pasand karne ke liye

Priya>>

[hara ashiq]

hey priya how r u eirst of all i want to wish u a very happy diwali then i woluld like to say that what to worry about yaar u have called me a friend & u have forget a lesson which u have teach to ur friend rember what

agar bhula sako to sangdilo ko bhula dena
kyoki sangdilo ko yaad rekhne se milta kya hai


kyoun phir diwali jaise festival par apne aap ko bhuli yaado main khoj rahi ho kya yeh bevkufi nahin hai hai na phir kyoun hum yeh bevkufi kare

for u
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dil ko diyon ki tarah jalao to zarror magar kisi ki yaad main mitne ke liye nahin kisi ghar ko roshan kerne ke liye

khud ko bite lamho main leke jao to zaror magar dubne ke liye nahin ucha udne ke liye.
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ek hara hashiq jo zindgi ki jeet ki aur apne kadam bada chuka hai
"apoorv"

[wonderguy_rahul]

hiiiiiiiii priyaggggggggg

kyaa likha hai aapne bahot achha likha hai kyaa dard hai aapke dil me . ok likhte rahiye

your friend rahul

[shayri12345]

dearest apporv
yaar thank u so much!! for the kind words, kyu yaad kare un sangdilo ko, unsey milta kya hai, han shayad aapne theek kaha, ki bette palon ko yaad karo magar ucha udne ke liye, i will try my best, agar chuk jayu thenhelo me i need it a lot.
))))

urs friend Priya

[shayri12345]

dearest rahul,
thanks a lot for likin these feeelings, haousla afzayi ke liye tahe dil se mera shukriay aapko

Luv Priya >>

[wonderguy_rahul]

hiiiiiiiii priyaggggggggggggg


kisine such hee kaha hai pyaar nahi kernaa chahiyee per jishne kiyaa hai vahi aisaa kehta hai tum kyaa kehti ho priya ggggg


your friend
rahul

RANG SE RANG MEEL GAI HOTE TO ZAKHAM FULO SE SEEL GAI HOTE
TUM NAHI AAYE VARNA KAANTE BHI KHEEL GAI HOTE

[shayri12345]

dear rahul G
haan shaayad muhobbat waale kuch aisa hi kaha karte hai, aapne bahut khoob kaha hai ki,RANG SE RANG MEEL GAI HOTE TO ZAKHAM FULO SE SEEL GAI HOTE
TUM NAHI AAYE VARNA KAANTE BHI KHEEL GAI HOTE
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dosto se dushman hi ache jo jal ke naam to lete hai,
phulon se kaante hi ache jo DAAMAAN TO THAAM LETE HAI

KYA kehtey ho aap rahul G

Luv PRiya>>