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18th September 2005, 08:13 PM
frenz.....
i'm extremely sorry 4 having done this..!!marte marte bachi hoon.ek hi din me itne joote-chappal padne wale the,jitne msgs aaye,jitne tortures sahe hain.usi k dar se yahaan wapas aana pada.is gustaakhi k liye maafi chahti hoon.shayad thodi der k liye selfish ho gayi thi.ye nahi socha ki meri khushi se zyada kisi aur ki khushi maayne rakhti hai...shayad isilye wapas aayi hoon.....lekin KaSaK ab sirf shouk ke liye likhegi....abhi tak dard dil me tha to likhti chali gayi,lekin ab bina dard liye likhungi.gayi bhi kisi ki vajah se hi thi to aayi bhi kisi k pyar ki vajah se hoon.... being the youngest member of the site....mera itna to hak banta hai ki aap log mujhe maaf kar do yaar......!!!ise meri naadaani samajh ke bhool jaiyega.... to lijiye pehli baar dil se likhi ghazal apke saamne pesh hai.....shayad ye pehli aisi ghazal hai...jisme 'pyar' lafz nahi...... *********************************************** Haar ke khushi manaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, paani me aag lagaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, zindagi nahi rukti kisi ke bhi chale jaaNe se, kaarvaaN aage badhaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, yaar to aakhir yaar hai,bewafaa hi sahi...... uski khushi me din bitaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, aankhoN me ab wo nasha-o-suroor kahaaN raha, sharaab hi se pyaas bujhaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, tameezdaar nahi duniya! keh kar chaldiye huzoor, khud ko bhi tehzeeb sikhane ki koshish kijiyega, Nahi kehte hum ki kaante hi zakhm dete hain, kabhi phooloN pe haath phiraaNe ki koshish kijiyega, Husn ki aag k sholoN me parwaane hi kyun jalte hain, aisi rasm pe bandh lagaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, khuda se 'KaSaK' ka taalluk jaise toot sa chala hai, meri sadaa us tak pahunchaaNe ki koshish kijiyega........ *********************************************** doston.....vaada karti hoon ki jab tak bazm me hoon...aisi naadaani phir nahi dohraaungi.....pleez forgive me jinko bhi hurt hua ho..... luv u all, KaSaK.......  Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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18th September 2005, 09:06 PM
khushi hui aapko yahan phir se dekh ke.aur aapke khayalat dekh kar unse bhi jyada khushi hui hai.waise to har pankti ahchi thi par ye paktiyan mujhe bahut hi pasand aayi,aur kyun ye aap ahchi tarah jaanti hain,
zindagi nahi rukti kisi ke bhi chale jaaNe se, kaarvaaN aage badhaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, Nahi kehte hum ki kaante hi zakhm dete hain, kabhi phooloN pe haath phiraaNe ki koshish kijiyega, tumhara LUCKY  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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18th September 2005, 09:10 PM
Kasak,
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18th September 2005, 10:23 PM
thanx lucky........
tumhe pasand aaya......aur kya kahoon....?? jaanti hoon kyun pasand aayi...... thank u 4 each n everything dear...... luv ya, KaSaK...... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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18th September 2005, 10:25 PM
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hehehe..... bhaiya......samjh gayi...aur aap shayad andaaza nahi laga sakte ki main kitni khush hoon jo apka reply mila....bas aur kuch nahi chahti hoon...... thanx.... luv u, KaSaK........ Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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Re: ~*~paaNi me aaG laGaaNe ki kosHisH kijiYegA~*~ -
18th September 2005, 11:23 PM
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Haar ke khushi manaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, paani me aag lagaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, bahut khub kaha meri daad kubul karo sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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18th September 2005, 11:26 PM
thanx di....
pehli baar apka reply mila.......yunhi ye silsila chalta rahe....khuda se yahi guzaarish hai...thanx 4 liking it...... luv ya, KaSaK......... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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19th September 2005, 12:20 AM
my dear kasal
tumahra ye kallam padh kar kuch yaad aa gaya Nahi kehte hum ki kaante hi zakhm dete hain, kabhi phooloN pe haath phiraaNe ki koshish kijiyega, Phoolon se yaad aaya punjabi mein Phulaan di ta dillan di ikko jehi kismat ek aapey tut jaanda hai, ik loki tor dainde ney... keho jeha eh sansaar vahi! in hindi: Phoolon aur dilon ki ek jaise hai kismat kuch log tor dete hai, kuch khud hi tut jaatey hai kaise hai jaane ye sansar behad dard bhara hai tumare kallam mein, i would say write whatever is in ur hrt...usey dabana nahi,,,varna nasur banega,,when it will comeout only then u will feel u can go one iwth life , its only a suggestion! from expreice  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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19th September 2005, 12:52 PM
Kasak ji...
aap bohat accha likhti hai..., sach maine aapki bohat shayri padhi hai.. aur sach dil se pasand karta hun inhe ... yakeen maniye kunal bhai ke baad agar kisi ka kalaam poora dil maiN utar saka hai to wo aap hi ho...bas yu hi likhti rahiye ... mujhe khushi hai ki aap humare is parivar ka hissa hai .... bas waqt na mila aaj tak aapko reply karne ka ... meri dua aapke liye humesha rahegi ... aapka Raj bas raj hi raj |
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19th September 2005, 02:06 PM
welcome back
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19th September 2005, 02:47 PM
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pata hai ...aap bilkul sahi ho....dard ko kabhi andar dabaake nahi rakhna chahiye......lekin ab shayad mere dil me dard ke liye koi jagah hi nahi rahi.... aur jo apne lines bataayi hain.....bahut sahi hain......thanx 4 sharing.......apka bahut bahut shukriya ki apne mujhe reply karne ka time nikaala..... keep smiling...... luv ya, KaSaK......... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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19th September 2005, 02:51 PM
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are yaar itni taareef mat karo meri....kahin gadbad na ho jaaye......apne kunal bhaiya k baad mera naam liya........likhna jaise saarthak ho gaya....magar ek baat hai ki kunnu bhaiya aakhir kunnu bhaiya hain.....hes different frm us.......unke saath chalne k liye bahut mehnat ki zaroorat hai.....aur main to abhi bahut nayi hoon...... phir bhi agar aapka yahi maan.na hai toh i'm extremely obliged.....u really made me smile........ thanx dear....... luv, KaSaK........ Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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19th September 2005, 02:53 PM
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 par thanx again ki apne mujhe padhne aur reply karne ka time nikaala.......thank u so much...... luv u, KaSaK........ Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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19th September 2005, 04:02 PM
Hey Kasak,
bahut ache aapne jo phir se jion kar liya. dukho se dar kar koi marta nahi hai, aur agar manta hai to O buzdil kahlata hai. aur hame nahi lagta hai ki aap buzdil hai. Kyun maine thik kaha na. bas isi tharah likhte rahie aur kya jindagi yu hi kat jayga. Main ravi |
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19th September 2005, 05:36 PM
hellooooo kasak,
loved to c ur posts once again. Thanks for writing agar aap yahan se chali jaati, to mera bhi yahan rhena shayad mushkil ho jaata!!! ek baat jo dilse kehna chahti hoon, mujhe nahi pataa ki koi meri baat se sehmat hoga ya nahi par ek FACT hai tht aapki ghazal dard ko bakhubi bayaan karti hai. no doubts ki aaj jo likhe hai woh bhi umada hi hai, isme to koi shak nahi, par jo baat dard main hai uska kya kehna!!!! aaj ki ghazal main jo sabse accha laga, khuda se 'KaSaK' ka taalluk jaise toot sa chala hai, meri sadaa us tak pahunchaaNe ki koshish kijiyega........ aur ek baar, thnx for coming back!!!! do keep writing aapki nazm ka hamesha intezaar rahega c ya Itne hanse ki rone ko majbur ho gaye, Aur aansuon ko apana mukaddar bana liya, tanhaiyon ke shahar me ek ghar bana liya. ~~~~~~Sonu~~~~~~ |
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19th September 2005, 06:16 PM
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well....ravi ji.....main itni jaldi marne nahi wali yaar....aur main buzdil nahi....shayad aap sahi keh rahe hain......well......meri feelingz ko samajhne ka shukriya........ luv u, KaSaK....... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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19th September 2005, 06:24 PM
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aisi noubat kabhi nahi aayegi ki meri vajah se apko ye bazm chhodna pade......aage se aisa mat kahiyega..... well......yaar....ab to sirf shouk ke liye likhti hoon yaar......maine socha dard ka ek alag roop dekhne ko milega......lekin yahaan bhi wahi.....uff!!! hehehe.......apko achcha laga ki main phir se wapas aayi to bahut bahut shukriya....... mujhe bhi apki reply ka hameshaa intezaar rahega..... thank u so much... luv u, KaSaK....... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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Re: ~*~paaNi me aaG laGaaNe ki kosHisH kijiYegA~*~ -
19th September 2005, 06:30 PM
zindagi nahi rukti kisi ke bhi chale jaaNe se,
kaarvaaN aage badhaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, Nahi kehte hum ki kaante hi zakhm dete hain, kabhi phooloN pe haath phiraaNe ki koshish kijiyega, khuda se[/b][/color] 'KaSaK' [color=indigo] ka taalluk jaise toot sa chala hai, meri sadaa us tak pahunchaaNe ki koshish kijiyega........ KASAK JI SABSE PEHLE TO MEIN KAHUNGA KI AAPAKO BAZM MEIN DUBARA dekh kar bahooot khushi mehsooos hui,,,meri mubaaraqbaad kuboool kijiye,,aur ab yeh kahunga ki aisi behtreeen gazal par ,,jismein jindagi ko ek alag nazariye se dekhne ki koshish ki hai aapne,,,kaabil-e-tareeef hai...yun to pooori hi agzal khubsurat hai,,magar yeh 3 sher khaas taur se dil mein utar gaye....ek achi gazal,,ek umda soch aur aapki waaapsi...in sab ke liye meri dil se nikli daad kuboool kijiye.,...isi tarah aapa aage bhi likhti rahengi,,,apne jazbaaton ke gauhar se bazm ko sajati rahengi,,isi umeeed ke saaath aaap se izzazt chaunga....likhte rahiye..khush rahiye..apna khayal rakhiye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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19th September 2005, 07:30 PM
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magar apka reply dekh kar phir se umang uthi hai..... bas yahi to zindagi hai.....kabhi idhar se kuch na mile to udhar se dhoond lein.....kuch to haath lagega......DARD HI SAHI....... thank u so much 4 ur wonderful reply...... luv ya, KaSaK........ Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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19th September 2005, 08:07 PM
Hi Kasak..
I dont know if saying "how wonderfully u have expressed your thoughts" is the right term to use to say abt what you have written, cos wonderful is too simple and it wont do justice.. its simply beyond wonderful....great work!! I particulary liked these lines... tameezdaar nahi duniya! keh kar chaldiye huzoor, khud ko bhi tehzeeb sikhane ki koshish kijiyega, Nahi kehte hum ki kaante hi zakhm dete hain, kabhi phooloN pe haath phiraaNe ki koshish kijiyega, cheers *zee* |
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20th September 2005, 07:09 PM
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hi dear..... well i dnt knw ur name......plz tell me...... aur thank u so much ki aapne itni dher saari izzat de di........ bas aise hi padhte rahiyega...... well.....wo lines to mujhe bhi pasand aayi.....hehehe.... thanx again...... luv ya, KasaK.............. Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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20th September 2005, 07:29 PM
Hey Kasak...
You are most welcome! Aap likhte rahiyega..hum definitely padhte rahenge. By the way i'm zahra, zee is my nickname... Very nice of you for taking the time to find out who i am. keep smiling zee |
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20th September 2005, 07:33 PM
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unse baat karne me to hamaari hi khushnaseebi hai!!! hehehe........hope 2 see u soon......... bye....take care...... luv ya, KasaK.......... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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20th September 2005, 07:41 PM
Ek baar fir se dil me utar gayi tum aur tumhaari shayri sweetu
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20th September 2005, 07:44 PM
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thank u pallo di.......... are yaar....apne kahaa tha ki aap phir itni der k liye nahi jaoge...... hum aaye bhi,chale bhi gaye,aur ek baar phir se aa gaye....magar apka pata nahi chala......well........ab jaan me jaa aayi ki apko phir se dekha apni post pe......... than ku so much 4 takin out time 2 read and reply 2 my post.... urs, SweetU......... KaSaK........ Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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20th September 2005, 07:56 PM
thanx kasak.. same here.. well as far as i know it means a flower..
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20th September 2005, 09:56 PM
Originally posted by kasak
Haar ke khushi manaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, paani me aag lagaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, Haare hein to kya houa...try try try and try again until you succeed zindagi nahi rukti kisi ke bhi chale jaaNe se, kaarvaaN aage badhaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, Tum bhi chalo...hum bhi chalein chalti rahe zindagi... yaar to aakhir yaar hai,bewafaa hi sahi...... uski khushi me din bitaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, Khoush raho tou sada, ye doua hai meri Bewafaa hi sahi dilrouba hai meri... aankhoN me ab wo nasha-o-suroor kahaaN raha, sharaab hi se pyaas bujhaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, Issi liye to hum sharaabi kehlaane lage tameezdaar nahi duniya! keh kar chaldiye huzoor, khud ko bhi tehzeeb sikhane ki koshish kijiyega, To give taste to this life, a little nip of salt don't harm...does it ? Nahi kehte hum ki kaante hi zakhm dete hain, kabhi phooloN pe haath phiraaNe ki koshish kijiyega, Tropical carnivorous flowers...hehehe Husn ki aag k sholoN me parwaane hi kyun jalte hain, aisi rasm pe bandh lagaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, Bechaare Parwane...Aadat se majboor khuda se 'KaSaK' ka taalluk jaise toot sa chala hai, meri sadaa us tak pahunchaaNe ki koshish kijiyega........ Koshish jaari hai...Kasak Betiya ! *********************************************** luv u all, KaSaK....... Hum ko toumhari yaha kavita bahout hi achi lagi...Betiya! Issi tarah mehfil sajaate rehna...ok? Take care of yourself and keep smiling Chachu Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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21st September 2005, 11:15 AM
Haar ke khushi manaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, paani me aag lagaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, zindagi nahi rukti kisi ke bhi chale jaaNe se, kaarvaaN aage badhaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, WaaaaaaH..... Very true...! yaar to aakhir yaar hai,bewafaa hi sahi...... uski khushi me din bitaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, aankhoN me ab wo nasha-o-suroor kahaaN raha, sharaab hi se pyaas bujhaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, Kya baat hai... too good...! tameezdaar nahi duniya! keh kar chaldiye huzoor, khud ko bhi tehzeeb sikhane ki koshish kijiyega, Nahi kehte hum ki kaante hi zakhm dete hain, kabhi phooloN pe haath phiraaNe ki koshish kijiyega, Wonderdully well written...! Husn ki aag k sholoN me parwaane hi kyun jalte hain, aisi rasm pe bandh lagaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, khuda se 'KaSaK' ka taalluk jaise toot sa chala hai, meri sadaa us tak pahunchaaNe ki koshish kijiyega........ Waah waahhh...! Dear Kasak, As always u have expressed urself wonderfully well...Loved to read this beautiful poetry of urs.. Do accept my heartiest praises... but somewhere i had a feeling that it was written from perspective of a boy....Khair jo bhi hai... Likha zabardast hai.... Do keep writin like this.. TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Re: Re: ~*~paaNi me aaG laGaaNe ki kosHisH kijiYegA~*~ -
21st September 2005, 05:59 PM
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shayad apke nazariye se dekhne par apni shayri ka alag meaning pata chala......hehehe...... thank u yaar ki apne itni gehraai me jaakar mujhe reply kiya......thanx....... luv u, KaSaK........ Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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21st September 2005, 06:05 PM
hi pulkit bhaiya......
apko wo parwaane wali couplet se laga hoga....... well.....hameshaa maine apne dard pe hi likha....is baar socha ladkon se hamdardi jataa loon....dard sirf mera hi to nahi....unka bhi to hai.....hehehe...... khair......apko pasand aaya isse zyada khushi ki baat aur kya ho sakti hai...... thank u so much 4 replying 2 me...... luv u, KaSaK........ Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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8th January 2013, 02:26 PM
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daad qabool kijiye |
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8th January 2013, 08:48 PM
bahut khoobsurat ahsaas KASAK jii.....................
.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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10th January 2013, 07:42 PM
Haar ke khushi manaaNe ki koshish kijiyega,
paani me aag lagaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, zindagi nahi rukti kisi ke bhi chale jaaNe se, kaarvaaN aage badhaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, Dil Itna Naazuk Hota Hai Ke, Isski Tootne Ki Awaaz Bilkul Nahi Aathi, ****************************** MEIN TUJHKO BHOOL JAUN YE KISSS KITAAB MEIN LIKHA HAI. ------------------------------------------------ socha tha woh hame tut kar chahenge par chaha bhi hami ne aur tute bhi hum KISHOR R KARKERA NEW PANVEL NAVI MUMBAi,410206 PH:-09322764070 
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12th January 2013, 01:12 PM
Haar ke khushi manaaNe ki koshish kijiyega,
paani me aag lagaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, zindagi nahi rukti kisi ke bhi chale jaaNe se, kaarvaaN aage badhaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, yaar to aakhir yaar hai,bewafaa hi sahi...... uski khushi me din bitaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, aankhoN me ab wo nasha-o-suroor kahaaN raha, sharaab hi se pyaas bujhaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, tameezdaar nahi duniya! keh kar chaldiye huzoor, khud ko bhi tehzeeb sikhane ki koshish kijiyega, Nahi kehte hum ki kaante hi zakhm dete hain, kabhi phooloN pe haath phiraaNe ki koshish kijiyega, Husn ki aag k sholoN me parwaane hi kyun jalte hain, aisi rasm pe bandh lagaaNe ki koshish kijiyega, khuda se 'KaSaK' ka taalluk jaise toot sa chala hai, meri sadaa us tak pahunchaaNe ki koshish kijiyega........ hi kasak..... ek zamaana ho gayaa tha tumhe padhe hue.... Masha Allah kya taqreer hai.. kyaa ummdah parwaaz hai.... us waqt bhi tumhaari likhaai me ye taseer thi, subhaan Allah.... Ummeed to bahot kam hai ke shaayad ab tum yahaan aao... magar dil me ye chaahat zaroor hai ke tum ek baar zaroor aao aur dekho tumhaare dost tumhe kitnaa miss karte hain... tumhaare kalaamo ka aage bhi muntazir rahunga..agar munaasib samjahna to aana zaroor... apna khyaal rakho.. Shaad... |
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10th March 2013, 01:11 PM
Dear Kasak....aapki poetry jab bhi padti hu...dil ko sakoon milta hai...par aap jane kaha gum hai...bazm meiN aap jaise shayroN ko kami khalti hai...!
god bless u dear .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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