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its punishment to all girls n boys i want ur comments plz (may i rite or rong;)
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its punishment to all girls n boys i want ur comments plz (may i rite or rong;) - 8th March 2004, 01:20 PM

chalo mana ke yeh make up beshumar kerti hain
maa baap ke paisoon ka khana kharab kerti hain

serdiyon main bhi to germiyon ka izhar kerti hain
half silievs k sath bhi kab yeh naqab kerti hain

lijiye janab yeh soch bechar bhi kerti hain
shoaib hai kanjoos to afridi ka aitebar kerti hain

shadi se pehle to humain nikalwane ka khayal kerti hain
shadi k baad maa baap ko bhagane ka izhar kerti hain

yehi hai inki sharafat kia isi ka iqrar kerti hain
sach to yeh hai shadishuda gher bhi yehi barbad kerti hain

hum chup bethe the akhir yehi cherne ki ibtida kerti hain
yeh manain ya na manin students ko bhi yehi kharab kerti hain


yeh kiun khua ma khua hum se mulaqat karain
mobile dain gift tab hum per aitebaar karain

in maasomoon ki masoomiyat to dekhoooo
kab aye koi dil main jahkne wala isliye greban khula rakti hain


kahain to pora page bher dooon in per likh likh ker
phir kahengi k khud adatain apni hum kharab kerte hain


yeh kabil se , hum to her kisi se pyar kerte hain
phir yeh kiu hum pe ilzamat ki bochar kerti hain


her mushkil main in ka sath nibhaenge
asman se sitare bhi toor layenge


dil bahut bara hai maaf kerdenge in ko
bus yeh kahdain hum mujrim hain iqrar kerti hain



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8th March 2004, 10:55 PM

saim.............u write so so so cute.

u made me laugh really..........buhat nice likha hai tum ne.
wese tu tum jo bhi likhte ho...bas dil main hi utar jata hai.

plz keep writting.........warna mujhko lagega is site ki aik buhat important cheez miss hogaee...

plzzzzzzz.

take care saim


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8th March 2004, 11:02 PM

hey saim..........ye punish wanish kiya??????????

aik tu larkiyoon ki itni itni buraee ki aur ab punish bhi...

wese jo sahee larkiyaan honge wo asa bilkul bhi nahen karenge....i m sure.

ab sahee larkiyaan dhondna tu tum larkoon ka hi kam hai na!
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hi - 8th March 2004, 11:06 PM

samiir bhya...
how r u?
laga jaise kisi ne dil ka bojh halka karna chaha...
waise to ham yehi kahin gain k kisi had tak aap drust hain..
magar yeh bat sab k liye nahi..yeh bhi sahi hay...
..aisa likh kar aap ne khwamkha ki dushmani hi wasol ki
abhi dkeho mazid kiya coments ati hay...
..waise to is ishq nagar main hmara rukna muhal hay...magar majbori ban jate kabhi kabhi kuch lafz...aap k in lafzon ki tarah...

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hmmmm - 9th March 2004, 03:47 AM

hi how r u bela jii thanx for ur replying n liking my peotry well bela ji its not for u and not for those who do this,,,,,, hmm clear it or ,,,,,,,,(rahi baat k sahi lerkiyan dhondna tum lerkon ka kaam hai),,,,,,,,,,so i told u i m not like that if i m rite or someone,,,,, if we guys r good\honest inshallah we get perfect once nnnn if anyone feel hurt so extremely very much sorry hmmmm ok so just take care n keep smiling tata babye khudahafiz


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9th March 2004, 11:17 AM

saim abhi tu ye dekho kon kon si girls ke comments ate hain!!!!!!!!haahaha

wese be carefull haan.


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hmmmm - 9th March 2004, 04:05 PM

hi banjara ji thanx for ur replying yaar ager maine dushmani li hai to app sab lerkoon k liye hi li hai werna mujhe to kabhi ishq nahi hoa tha is liye main sab lerkiyon se akela takker lene ko tayar hoon lekin sirf poetry main waise bhi its just a poetry not a wwf so banjara ji thanx app ne reply kia n or apne jazabat zahir kiye thanx onceagain n take care bye khudahafiz


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9th March 2004, 08:06 PM

Assalam u alaikum
saim ji
kaise hain aap
waise aapka likha hua to bohot hi achha hai but aapne to yahan sabhi ko ek hi line mein khada kar diya....yeh nahin kehti ke aapki poori poetry ghalat thi but yeh zarooor kahoongi ke saari ladkiyan ek si nahin hoti....ab isse zyada kya kahoon
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Smile Bismillah - 9th March 2004, 11:30 PM

salam saim and pas it plz .
well lolzzzz awww that was supeb u know tumney to yaar larkyoon ki ful tim take ley li lolz )
bhut accha likha haiii keep it up
ek bat kahooo chaloo choro )
keep it up brv and keep wriitng
Farhan Shaikh.

ek baat aur kahoo..
Saim i have maild her but she did not replied me ok now dont tell me to send another mail if she has an attitude then i m her Father on this

Allah hafiz
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hiii - 10th March 2004, 04:25 PM

salam khushi ji me fit n fine as well n how r u khushi ji it just a poetry not a panga wid every beautifulll or like that type of girls yeh to app bhi note karahi hongi jo is type ki hain woh hi reply nahi karahi well dont mind plz yeh app jaise ache logon k liye nahi hai hmm remember this ager phir bhi bura laga to sorry for that ok n take care tata babye khuda hafiz


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hmmm - 10th March 2004, 04:33 PM

salam pg kaisi hain apppppppppppp me acha hoon pg app kaisi hain hmmm waise pg app mujh ghazal k zerye jawab dengi to theek hai dijiye main app ko jawab nahi donga bcoz main app ki bahut izzat kerta hoon lekin rahi baat aisi lerkiyon ki jin per maine poetry likhi hai to main tayar hoon jawab dene k liye sirf un ko plz or haan jab yeh baat app ne bhi maan li k lerkiyan hain hi aisi to bus ab mujhe jawab dene ki zarorat hi nahi hai un ko un ka jwab mil hi gaya hai :P well thanx pg apke reply ka hmm ab chalta hoon apna khayal rakhye ga bahut sara theek khudahafiz


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hmmm - 12th March 2004, 02:06 AM

hi farhan kaise hoo thanx for ur replying brov u know how m i so tumhare reply per tum ko 1 joke sunata hoon hope acha lage ga tumhain about girls hmm acha lage to reply zaror kerna theek


Bank's cash dispenser machines)

Boys:
1. Drive to the bank, park and go to the Cash Dispenser.
2. Insert card
3. Dial code and desired amount
4. Take the cash, the card and the slip


Girls:
1. Drive to the bank
2. Engine stalled
3. Check make-up in the mirror
4. Apply perfume
5. Manually check haircut
6. Park the car - failure
7. Park the car - failure
8. Park the car - Success
9. Search for the card in the handbag
10. Insert card, rejected by the machine
11. Throw phone card back in handbag,
12. Look for bank card.
13. Insert Card
14. Look for Secret Box (where secret code is written)
in Handbag
15. Enter code
16. Study instructions for 2 minutes
17. #Cancel#
18. Re-enter code
19. #Cancel#
20. Call Boyfriend/husband to get correct the code
21. Enter desired amount
22. #Error#
23. Enter bigger amount
24. #Error#
25. Enter maximum amount
26. Cross fingers
27. Take cash
28. Go back to the car
29. Check make up in rear mirror
30. Look for keys in handbag
31. Start car
32. Drive 50 meters
33. STOP
34. Drive back to bank machine
35. Go out of the car
36. Take card and ticket back from machine
37. Go back to the car
38. Throw card on passenger seat
39. Throw slip on the floor
40. Check make up in rear mirror
41. Manually check haircut
42. Go into roundabout - wrong way
43. BRAKE
44. Go into roundabout - right way
45. Drive 5 kilometers
46. Remove hand brake
47. Call boyfriend/husband to tell how miserable she
was because of HIM.

Sorry girls, (if mind)


how is that tell me m i rite or rong well again thanx farhan n take care tata babye khudahafiz


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wow - 12th March 2004, 09:57 AM

salam saim sahab app ne bahut acha likha hai koi shak nahi hai mager app hath dho ker lerkiyon k peeche kiu par gaye lerkiyan itni buri bhi nahi hoti bus zara sahi tarhan se sochna or sahi nazar se 1 dafa dekhna hoga kisi k dil main jhank ker shayed apko samajh ajaye k sab lerkiyan 1 jaisi nahi hoti lekin phir bhi app ne jis tarhan apni poetry main byan kia hai lerkyon k liye waki bahut acha hai 1 tarhan se such bhi hai k aisa lagta hai apne lerkiyon ki 1 kitab khol ker samne rakh di heheheh waki hansi bhi arahi hai or app lerkon per app jaise nahi aisi hi lerkon per jaisi lerkyon ki baat ki hai mera bhi dil karaha hai k main bhi 1 lerkon per ghazal bana ker doon apk jawab main dekhte hain app jette hain ya hum so GOD BLESS U bye
   
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12th March 2004, 10:30 AM

sachme saimji aapto ladkiyon ke piche haath dhoke pad gaye hain,saari buraaiyan ek hi baarimein kar daali.hamne bhi aapki sahiri ko tod marodkar kuch aisi banadiya hain.dekhiye!waise ladke bhi koi dudh ke dhule nahin hote

chalo mana ke yeh din bhar college jaate hain(khuda jaane kya karte hain?)
par baap ke paisoon ko fhizulimein udate hain

serdiyan ho ya germiyon
salmaan ki tarah ghumte rehte hain.

lijiye janab yeh bhi sochko badtar kerte hain
aish hai kanjoos to toon toon ka bhi aitebar kerte hain (paisewali honi chahiye)

shadi se pehle bahut ghumaneka khayal kerte hain
shadi k baad sochte hain ghar ki murgi daal barabar hoti hain.




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wow - 12th March 2004, 11:16 AM

salam to all of u thanks mousam ji chalo shuker hai 1 to mere sath hoin app jawab dene main kiu saim ji waise 1 baat kahon saim sahab

sorry 2 say ziyada qasoor boyz ka hota hai na key galz ka ager galz fashion kertiii hain tu....apnay laye karti hain....yeh tu app logoo ki nazar kharab hoti hai jo aun ko buri nazar say dekhtay ho... yahan adain dikhaney waliyan(galz) kam hi milain gee(only 2% or 5%) per adain dekhaney waley(boyz) bohat milain gee.......... hehehehehe

ziyada boyz tu girls key colleges key chaker lagatey hain, per gals tu boys key colleges key pass nazer bhi nahi atiii hain... again sorry saim ji yeh app k liye nahi hai aise lerkon k liye hai jo aisa kerte hain hmm its my opnion about boyz hmm milte hain break k baad so GOD BLESS U N BYE N THANX MOUSAM JI K APP NE UN KI GHAZAL KA JAWAB TO DYA WERNA MAIN TO SOCHTI RAH GAYI THI HMMMM GOD BLESS U 2 N BYE



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wooops - 12th March 2004, 11:48 AM

salam saim bhai kaise hain app kia khoob likha hai saim bhai app ne lerkiyon ki kitab khol ker rakh di hai apne sorry woh reply kerne main late hogaya zara papers ki tayari main laga hoa tha is liye abhi time mila to apki poetry per nazar pari to jhat se kholi k app ne lerkiyon ko aisi kia punish dedi or waki sahi likha hai app ne i m agree wid u kiyun GUYS kia hoa waise to sab bari bari battain kerte hain peeth peeche or ab jab baat ana ki agayi sab kahan gaye mana k saim bhai ne akele panga lelia sab se lekin app sab bhi to sath do its just for enjoyment or just tease every gals come on we want ur replies gals k bhi or boys k bhi mujhe bhi app sab k opnion k bare main janna hai k hum 1 dosre k bare main kia sochte hain dekhte hain jeet gals ki hoti hai ya boys ki hmm so lets start now


.sorry to say galz actually boys girls k pechay nahe atay balkay girls un becharoon ko treat he aysay karte hain k becharay masooom bholay bhalay say boys ko some time ullo bana daytee hain.main manta hoon k agar boys flirt kartay hain to girls bhe kam nahe hain.mayree bahnaaa(sister) mazraat k saat fact is fact.or aaj kal girls boys say zaida sharp hain.

its my 1st experience .agar kisi ki dil azaree hooe hoo to SORRY. dont worry SAIM bhai me wid u hmm take care saim bhai main her kisi ka jawab dene ko tayar hoon dont worry keep it up n take care khudahafiz
   
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12th March 2004, 10:16 PM

salam saim ji..........

well kese hain app..............?

hmm.............larkiyoon ke baree main apka jock tu mujhko buhat hi acha laga jo app ne khas farhan bhai ko sunaya hai.

well waqi larkiyaan ase hi hote hain............but u know isse kiya kehte hain...........?
keeeeeeee.............woh hote hi nazuk see sharmeli see hain
right na..........??????????

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hmmm - 13th March 2004, 12:31 AM

hi mousam ji kaisi hain app waise mousam likhta hoa ajeeb sa lag raha hai aisa lag raha hai main badloon se baat karah hoon wats ur name will u tell me plz if u dont mind so well thanx mousam ji k app ne reply kia is nacheez ko waise mousam ji its just a poetry app jaise ache logon k liye nahi hai plz naraz na hoye ga sirf 1 poetry samajh ker enjoy kerye mera fight kerne ka aisa koi irada nahi hai n appka jawab bhi kam nahi hai really mere sare sher 1 taraf apka 4 sher 1 taraf mager maine koi bura nahi mana bcoz main asia hoon hio nahi ok n thanx apka bahut bahut take care bye


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hmm - 13th March 2004, 12:46 AM

salam sabeen ji kaisi hain app well sabeen ji thanx apka bahut bahut k apne reply kia waise kia hogaya apko app to lerkiyan ikathi karahi hai mujhe jawab dene k liye hey saben ji yeh sirf 1 poetry hai kisi claas main lerkiyon per hoting nahi ki i m really sorry for that ager app sab ko bura laga yeh maine to bus aisi her cheez per ghazal likhi socha ab lerkiyon per bhi try kerloon jab try kia to nateja apk samne hai :P well dont mind miss sabeen ji ager app ko bura laga ho to 1 baar dubara thanx apka hmm apna khayal rakhye ga or isi tarhan khush rahye ga hamesha khudahafiz


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hmm - 13th March 2004, 12:51 AM

salam nomi kaise hain app arey bhai thanx yaar apka k apne reply ker k mera honsla barha dya werna main to soch raha tha yar ager sab lerkiyan idher again to main kia keronga akela is manjhdar main k kashti main bhi apni suraq or chappu bhi nahi kahan jata acha hoa bhaiya app agaye ab app hi sambhalye main chala u know mujhe kahan jana hai abhi dont worry me also wid u brov so again thanx app ka bahut bahut k app ne reply kia apna time nikal ker hmm i m really thanxfull to u apna khayal rakhye ga tata bye khudahafiz


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13th March 2004, 10:37 AM

hi,
saimji jaiyee aapko maaf kiya,aapbhi kya yaad rakhenge ki kiss nacheez se pala pada tha jab aapne kha ki yeh acche logo ke liye nahin hain to fir socha maaf hi kar de.waise mausam itna bura naam bhi nahin hain.

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wow - 13th March 2004, 12:58 PM

salam saim sahab kaise hain app hope ache honge hmmm nomi v nice joke...Becharay, Masoom, Bholay bhaley, Ullo ban janey waley......Really yeh boys qualities to mujhey bhi aaj hi pata chali hain kiu saim sahab app bhi aise hain ya nahi well apki batton se reply se nahi lagta k app aise honge hmm well thanx saim sahab humari hosla afzai or dad kabool kerne ka hmm khayal rakhye ga
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wow - 13th March 2004, 01:18 PM

salam saim bhai kaise hain appp arey saim bhai kia hogaya app ki kashti main suraq hai to mere paas bhi 1 hi swiming jacket hai soch lijiye kia kerna hai kidding sir arey sir lagta hai der gayin lerkiyan is liye baat khatam kerne k liye mafff kerdya hahahaha waise saim sahab chalye chorye app kahte hain to maine bhi maaf kia jannnnnne bhi do bhai , abhi lerkian kese hute hain yeh tu boys ko bhi pata hai or gilrs ko bhi hamare khene se ya un ke khene se wu badal tu nahi jayen ge na , hmmmmm well girls r right those r genious , sharp and strong 2 :P , BOYS HI KHARAB HUTE HAIN LERKIAN TU BOHAT SHARIEFFFFFFFFFFFFF HUTE HAIN , BiLKOL NAWAZ SHARIF OR UMER SHAIRF JESE , i agreeeee , boys ap bhi apne apne girlfriends ko khush kerne ke liye agreee ker lo , kya jata hai 1 jhot bolne main , sub set hai , wu bhi khush or hum masom log bhi khush ,,,,,,, hmmm chalta hoon saim bhai khayal rakhye ga apna or haan sabeen ji life main kabhi kabhar koi cheez 1st time pata lagti hai jab to bara ajeeb lagta hai hahaha chalo acha hoa ab pata lag gaya apko ab khayal kerye ga chalata hoon ab saim bhai take care u all n bye
   
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salam bela ji kaisi hain appp hope achi hongi haina well thanx bela ji k app ne bataya mujhe k lerkiyan hoti hi nazukk sheshe ki tarhan or lerke hath main pather liye ghomte hain rite na anyway bela ji mujhe lerkiyon k bare main itna nahi pata i mean zyada nahi janta so mujh se poochna bhi bekar hai bus yeh janta hoon k waki woh bahut nazuk hoti hain or moody bhi bari se bari baat ignore kerdeti hain lekin choti choti baat per naraz hoker beth jayengi hope u understand me wat i wanna say so plz plz plz apna khayal rakhye ga bye tata khudahafiz


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salam saim sahab kaise hain app waise bela ji ne sahi kaha ke lerkiyan waki hoti hi nazuk hai bahut jaldi ghabra jati hain aise moke per app ne bhi sahi kaha k sheshe k dil hain or pather k log or hathon main pather liye ghomte hain heheheh or yeh bhi sach hai k bari bari baat ignore kerdengi or choti se bat per naraz is baat se main app k sath hoon k app waki kuch nahi jante lerkiyon k bare main lekin jitna jante hain woh bhi bahut hai lerkiyon k liye or woh bhi hum jaisi kamzoor heheh anyway saim jii apki yeh ghazal main 50 baar perh chuki hansi bhi ati hai lerkiyon per or achi bhi lagti hai k naraz hone ka dil nahi kerta k app ne galat likha hai really welldone saim sahab meri taraf se to 100 main se 101 % ki dad kabool kerye ga aisi ghazal k liye waki maine ajj tak aisi poetry kahin nahi dekhi kahin nahi sunni kisi se really isi tarhan likhte rahiye ga isi tarhan lerkiyon per nahi or dosri tarhan hheheheh acha ab ijazat dijiye khayal rakhiye ga app sab khudahafiz
   
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hmmm - 14th March 2004, 03:46 PM

salam sabeen ji me fit n fine as well n how r u well thanx thanx n thanx apk replies ka ab or kia kahoon sab kuch to app ne kah dya lekin phir bhi thanx hmm take care tata bye khuda hafiz


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Adaab Kabool Farmiye.... - 14th March 2004, 03:47 PM

Salam Janab Muhtrhaam Saim Sahab.......Janab Kia kubhsurti ke sath apne apni tawajju-e-ruQun larkiun pe kiya hai Mashallah hum apki in baton se thora itifaaq rakhte hain Sach main yeh larkian agar multawaja na hun tu apse ek raaz inayaat hai ke yeh kamzoor tu hotin hain aur thori sharaamsaar bhi apke kalaam ki haar harf ba harf jayaaz hai jis ki humne tarif ki ke bahut khubsuraat khayalaat hain apke saim sahab....paar saim sahab larkiyan tu apke dil pe muqeem hain phir yeh ghazal...hahaha waise jo bhi hai bahut khoob andaaz-e-bayan kia hai....Is umeed se ijazat talaab karte hain aainda bhi apke kalaam hum sabke nazr-e-haya honge Inshallah...Shukriya Janab....Kudha Hafiz..


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ji saim ji larkiyoon ko waqi app nahen samjh sakte...

well keep writting.
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hmmmm - 15th March 2004, 01:38 PM

salam janab salman sahab kaise hain app sir jee shukrya apka bahut bahut bahut k app ne time nikal ker reply kia mujhe hmm or janab lerkiyan mere dil per mukeem nahi hain balke mujhe apne dil per mukeem bana leti hain or rahi baat mukeem ki kasam khuda ki mujhe mukeem ka matlab nahi pata itni hard urdu nahi atai sir ab app baad main mujhe bataye ga mukeem kia hai yeh hmm ok sir ab ijazat dijiye 1 baar again thanxs apka bahut bahut ok take care tata babye khudahafiz


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woops - 15th March 2004, 02:16 PM

salam saim sahab wow saim app lerkiyon per aisa likh sakte hoo main soch bhi nahi sakti sahi kaha hai bilkul lerkiyan hoti hi aisi hain lekin her lerki aisi nahi hoti phir bhi apka her sher bilkul sahi hai lerkiyon per main app ki is poetry se ittefaq rakhti hoo ager app naraz na hoon to main yeh peotry app ki apni best ko bhej saktii hoo ager app ki marzi hoo to to bcoz mujhe yeh itni achi lagi hai is liye main app ke hi name se apni friend ko bhejongi maine apni friend se apka bare main bataya tha is liye ap ki yeh poetry parh ker or bhi zyada khush hogi so plz or haan maine app se promise kia tha main kal aongi lekin net ki prob ki waja se nahi asaki is side per jaise hi net sahi hoa main sab se pehle app ko ko mail ki phir yeh side kholi app mail zaror check kerye ga theek hai na or isi tarhan likhte rahiye ga main apki her poetry dil se parhti hoon ab ijazat dijiye is nacheez ko is apne pan k sath k duaon main yaad rakhenge app sab khudahafiz
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salam bela ji kia matlab main lerkiyon ko nahi samajh sakta jis way se app sooch rahin haan shayed main us way se nahi samajh sakhta lekin app meri thinking se lerkiyon k ya 1 lerki k bare main soche to app bhi kahengi k saim waki main app ko nahi samajh sakti hmmm samjhin app miss kk well thanx app ne apni baat mujhe samjhane ki koshish keri lekin main nahi samajh saka tha itne sare samajh main bhi nahi samjah is samajh per mujhe 1 sher yaad araha hai i know app ne suna hoga

samajh samajh ker samajh ko samjho
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hope app smajh gayin hongi well take care tata babye khudahafiz


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hmm well saim abhi tu main apki baat nahen samjhi but u know na jo apko samjhana tha woh tu app kal hi samjh chuke hain..........hahhahha

hmm samjhne ke liyee thanks aur jo main nahen samjhi woh tu app see samjh hi longi .
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hmmm - 16th March 2004, 02:59 AM

hi samreen ji kaisi hain app ya thanx for ur replying to liking my poetry n ya u can send this to ur friend ok nnnn or haan i checked ur all mailz huh app ne yahan 1 ki baat ki thi or jab maine inbox khola to 11 mailz ayin thi apki or sab 1 hi thin plz 1 mail 1 dafa bheja kerye apki 11 mailz se mera inbox full hogaya tha so plz next time be care full ok dont mind plz kia keroon main aisa tha nahi lekin ban gaya n again thanx apke reply ka ok take care tata babye khudahafiz


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wese saim sahab app ye bhi yahan show kardeen ke ase kiyon bangaee hain well itna kuch dekh kar ab apki tharhaan mera bhi blood pressure high hojata hai kiya karoon apke kehne par jo amal karne lagi hoon.

u also becarefull next time otherwise u know well

apna khayal rakhiyeega jante hain na kiyon

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hmm - 16th March 2004, 11:53 PM

hi bela kaisi hoo app hope fit fine n fat as well hmm ji app sunna chahti hain na k aisa kiyun ban gaya hoon to sunye apki (bela) ki waja se sahi hai now u happy bela ji n ua also take care tata baye khudahafiz


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alaooooooooooo - 17th March 2004, 01:23 PM

hi saim ji main kafi time baad is side per wapis ayin hoon to apke subject per nazar pari so i m shocked app ne lerkiyon ki itni insult ki or mujh se raha nahi gaya is liye main bhi apke liye kuch derahi hoon not 4 u kuch aise hi lerkon k liye ok zara dehan se sunye ga



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If u treat him nice he says"yaar mujhe line de rahi he"
If u dont he says"kitna akarti hai"

If u dress nicely he says"mujhay impress karna chati he"
If u dont he says "tasteless he yaar"

If u argue with him he says"ziddi he"
If u sit quietly he says"dumb he"

If u act smarter he'll lose his brain as u r insulting him
If he acts smarter he think its his right

If u dont love him he says"is ka to pehlay say hi 2,3 larkoon k saath chakar he"
If u love him he says"peechay hi par gayee he"

If u dont give him a kiss he says" tum mujh say serious naheen ho"

If u give him a kiss he says" sab ko line dati hogi"

If u r skinny he says "u shud hv appropriate mass 8 appropriate places"
If u r healthy he says "u shud b smart"

If u dont tell him ur prob he says" ur not honest 2 me"
If u do tell to him he says "ur a problem child"

If u scold him he says "you act like a nany giving lecture"

If he scolds u he says "Yaar, its becuz i care"

If u break a promise he says "he does not trust u any more"
If he breaks he says "jan mein majbour tha"

If u smoke he says "u are a bad girl"
If he smokes he says "i m a man"

If u do good in exams he says "qismat ne saath diya warna tum or good marks"
If he gets goods mark he says"" its my brain"

If u hurt him he says "u r cruel & dont care of my feelings"
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& they claim they r not Hypocrates,Interstin na !!!


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hi saim.........ya i m cool n fresh
thanks.....

ya ya i m happy

well ye sab apne hi tu sikhaya hai tu socha apko bhi yaad karwadoon bus isliyee woh reply kiya .... hhahahha.

wese always cool haan
infact i m with u na

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hmmmm - 18th March 2004, 07:34 PM

salam masoom pari jii thanks for ur replying n liking my peotry waise jo yehy sab app ne likha hai yeh mujh per suit nahi kerta ok jis k liye likha hai us ka neeche name bhi likh dijiye ok n thanx again take care bye


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hi saim.........ya i m cool n fresh
thanks.....

ya ya i m happy

well ye sab apne hi tu sikhaya hai tu socha apko bhi yaad karwadoon bus isliyee woh reply kiya .... hhahahha.

wese always cool haan
infact i m with u na

hi bela thanx mera bacha i m also wid u kuchiiiiiiiiiiii apna khayal rakhna bahut sara oks bye


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thank u saim
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