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Koi mere adhure khab lauta de - 14th September 2014, 11:11 AM
Koi mujhe mere adhure khab lauta de ,
Jis khusee ko talshta hun ek baar mila de.

Barson se main chain ki neend soya nahi hun,
Koi mujh ko phir se maa ki lori suna de.

Maa ki goud chooti ya maiN door ho gaya huN,
Waqt se paida hui sari dooriyan mita de.

Safar kat gaya yun hi chahton ke dagar per ;
koi meri hasraton ko mukammal rasta dikha de.

Phasa rehta hun bus uljhano ke bhanwer mein,
kaise bandhuN iss mann ko vo bhandan bata de.

Kadam dagmagate rahe per chalta ja raha hun,
Koi phir se mujhe mere kafile se mila de.


khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
   
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14th September 2014, 06:33 PM
sanjay jee/......bhaut hee sundar kalaam likha hai aapne badhai ho


एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था

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14th September 2014, 08:28 PM
Bohat khoob Sanjay ji......per isay is section me kyun post kiya aapna? ...



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14th September 2014, 08:40 PM
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Bohat khoob Sanjay ji......per isay is section me kyun post kiya aapna? ...
Shukriya Zainy ji ...Mujhe ye poem miscellanous lagi ..na dard hai , na Ishq hai
so socha yahan daal deta hu ise .. khud se sawal jawab aur kuch khone ka ehsaas tha bus and ye dard section mein fit nahin ho raha tha ....plus vahan kuch bheer zyada rehti
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Vaise this section is meant for what type of poetry

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14th September 2014, 08:47 PM
Aap ko "aapki shayri" section me post karna chahiye tha in that case...is section me generally woh shayri post hoti hai jinke shayer ka naam pata na ho...unknown shayers poetry ..



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14th September 2014, 09:07 PM
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Aap ko "aapki shayri" section me post karna chahiye tha in that case...is section me generally woh shayri post hoti hai jinke shayer ka naam pata na ho...unknown shayers poetry ..

Sorry for the error ...I shall.take care in.future


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14th September 2014, 09:36 PM
Pls request one of the mods of this section to move this to "Aapki shayri " section



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14th September 2014, 09:54 PM
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Koi mujhe mere adhure khab lauta de ,
Jis khusee ko talshta hun ek baar mila de.

Barson se main chain ki neend soya nahi hun,
Koi mujh ko phir se maa ki lori suna de.

Maa ki goud chooti ya maiN door ho gaya huN,
Waqt se paida hui sari dooriyan mita de.

Safar kat gaya yun hi chahton ke dagar per ;
koi meri hasraton ko mukammal rasta dikha de.

Phasa rehta hun bus uljhano ke bhanwer mein,
kaise bandhuN iss mann ko vo bhandan bata de.

Kadam dagmagate rahe per chalta ja raha hun,
Koi phir se mujhe mere kafile se mila de.
Waah.........Bahut khoob sanjay ji........


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15th October 2014, 06:18 AM
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sanjay jee/......bhaut hee sundar kalaam likha hai aapne badhai ho

Arvind ji ...kaise ho ...Aap la bahut 2dhanyavad jo aap ne humare ehsason ko pasand kiya..

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16th October 2014, 11:11 PM
Barson se main chain ki neend soya nahi hun,*Koi mujh ko phir se maa ki lori suna de.

Bahut hi badiya.. lajwab likhaan hai aapne..


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Barson se main chain ki neend soya nahi hun,*Koi mujh ko phir se maa ki lori suna de.

Bahut hi badiya.. lajwab likhaan hai aapne..
Vinay ji ,

Aap ki daad ka reply karne mein chook ho gayi , maufi chahta hun ..
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