Quote:
Originally Posted by Praneeta
Zarraa ji mujhe itni technicalities nahi aati. I am just trying to express that in this situation its mandatory to commit suicide despite not wanting to. Could you please fix it for me. 
|
Waise fixing ki aisi bahaut ziyada zaroorat naheen hai, and I may not be the best fixer
(mujhe khud fixing ki zaroorat padti rehti hai
) ... but I might have tried variations like (may not be in the meter you may have in mind) ... "panaah mili n koyee to maaNgee saza rasan o daar se" ya "ho ke majboor maNg baithe saza rasan o daar se" ...
Lekin chhorhiye in nuktoN ko, yahaaN maqsad hai diye gaye jumle par ghaur karne ka hai, jis ko aap ne bahaut achchhee tarah grasp kar liya hai ... to mubaarakbad aap ko
Threaded Mode
