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PYAASA SHAYAR
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Haal E Dil -
19th November 2002, 04:57 PM
Hal-e-dil likhna chahta tha mai khat mein,
kis tarah jal raha tha uski mohaabat mein Do lafz likhte hi kalam toot gayi Isne bhi na saath diya ulfaat mein..... APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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aww -
18th December 2002, 03:04 AM
aww nice one pyaasa ji, yaar hame bhi kuch sikha do........bahut badhiya likha hai , i liked this one a lot!!
a sher.................to say something........ kalam mere paas hai kaagaaz bhi mere paas hai aaj likhna tha kissa is dil ka, par dil hi uunke paas hai Priya>> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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wow -
18th December 2002, 09:24 AM
Pyaase ji...aap ne bohoth hi acha likha hain. It was really very nice.
And Priya ji, i also liked your sher too. Wow. Keep writing both of you. Amrita |
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