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22nd February 2006, 08:36 PM
ik chota sa kalaam phirse pesh-e-khidmatt kar rahi hoon...
apni pasand napasand se nawaaziyega  zindagi tujhbin raas na aayi maut bhi mere paas na aayi jab jab bhulna chaha tujhko tab tab teri yaad sataayi zikra hua jab teri baaton ka beeti yaadon se meri aankhein bhar aayi zindagi tujhbin raas na aayi maut bhi mere paas na aayi jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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Re: beeti *YAADON* se meri *AANKHEIN* bhar aayin... |
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22nd February 2006, 08:45 PM
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hi s,,,,,,,,,, |
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hi s,,,,,,,,,, -
22nd February 2006, 09:53 PM
again u with aa nice 1
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23rd February 2006, 12:45 PM
Hi Shweta,
Nice and sweet.... Keep writing like this... TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd February 2006, 12:56 PM
dear sweets
nice one keep writing shrdh 
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24th February 2006, 07:12 PM
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dear Diggaj ji, aaj apko apni post per dekhkar mujhe bahut khushi huyi... aapne jo lines likkhi wo acchi hai... per meri likkhi lines ne poore flow ko kharaab kar diya lambi jo ho gayi isiliye (aisa mujhe kisi ne kaha tha... aage se in sab cheezon ka dhyaan rakhoongi aap yu hi aate rahiyega... hauslaa badaate rahiyega take care jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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24th February 2006, 07:14 PM
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nice to see you here aap padhte raho likhte to hum raheinge hi take care jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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24th February 2006, 07:17 PM
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Hi Pulkit, glad you like it... you always appreciate my work ... like it.. take care jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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24th February 2006, 07:19 PM
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hello Shraddha ji, bahut bahut khushii huyi apko dekh kar... or yeh jaanker bhi ki apko mera likkha kalaam pasand aaya aati rahiyega.. take care jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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24th February 2006, 07:22 PM
bahut badiya shweta g kafi achhha hai .......really gud
buhbyee tke care hemant newbornlyshayar |
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25th February 2006, 08:42 PM
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oye ye "G" kahaan se aa gaya  mera kalaam pasand aaya tumhe khushi huyi mujhe aate rehna take care jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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25th February 2006, 08:44 PM
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haan ji sabke padhne ka tareeka alag alag hota hai isiliye kisiko mera kalaam pasand aata hai kisiko nahi aata aapko pasand aaya mujhe bahut khushi huyi bas aap yuhin padhte rahiye take care bye jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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25th February 2006, 08:57 PM
zindagi tujhbin raas na aayi
maut bhi mere paas na aayi ................................................. .................................................. .. ....................................... ................................................. ........................................... N I C E ***khozii*** |
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glad to know that u like my post.... do keep coming like this Khozii take care bye jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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