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Ek kalaam,Aashiq ki bebasi ke naam
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Ek kalaam,Aashiq ki bebasi ke naam - 8th February 2005, 01:16 PM

Ek kalaam aashiq ki bebasi ke naam:-


Tujhe bhool ker bhee bhula na sake hum
Ye alag baat hai ke tujhe pa na sake hum

Dilon ke beech faansle badhate rahe tum
Wo or baat hai ke duur ja na sake hum

Aaj tak kissi ne humko rote nahi dekha
Ye or baat hai ke muskura na sake hum

Ta-umr ishq ko hum mitaate he rahe
Ye or baat hai ke ise mita na sake hum

Hum haath jodte hain,muaafi nawaaz ker
E karz zindgi tera chuka na sake hum

Ye bhee sach hai ke hum begaane nahi thai
Sach hai tumhe apna bana na sake hum

Tallukaat humare tumse dostana rahe thai
Ye or baat hai ke haath mila na sake hum

Jara si baat cheet me ishq ki shamme jala di
Ye or baat hai ke phir bujha na sake hum

Daag-e-muhobbat kabhee dikhaya to nahi
Ye or baat hai ke ise chupa na sake hum

Karan'maluum thaa marz-e-ishq la-ilaaz hai
Ye or baat hai ke khud ko bacha na sake hum

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8th February 2005, 05:56 PM

karan ji...

seene khicch jinna ne khadi oh kara arram ni behnde...
vaslon uree mukaam na koyi..oh dine raat pyee vehnde....


ya...

shayad kise lyee thandi chhan bnaa..
isee umeed te khdaa haan iss dupehar andaar...
oh koyi hor hongyee jo khuun chh duub ke likhde ne...
asaan taan dubde haan nitt apne hee hanjuyaan andaar....


ya phir...

mere dostaan nu shikayat hai ke mein apne lhuun nal nahi likhda...
par oh nahi samjhde ke ghujeyaan(deep) sattan(wounds) choon lahuu(blood) ni simiyaa karda....


app ke ane se mehfil mein raang aa jata hai..


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Wah ki wah - 8th February 2005, 06:01 PM

Well again.. very best words..
Sometimes you make me speechless
marrne ke baad bhee meri aankhen khuli rahi
Aadat padi hui thee tere intzaar ki...
Khair iss baar jyada intzaar nahi kerwaya
or humare kalaam likhte he huzoor mehfil me aaye
aate rahiye....
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hi! - 17th February 2005, 12:39 PM

Tujhe bhool ker bhee bhula na sake hum
Ye alag baat hai ke tujhe pa na sake hum..

Wah wah!!.......
hum apko dundhte hue chale ja rahen hein..
najane kitne panno par hire moti bikhreN hue hein!!

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Jab bhee dekhogi..mere naam ke saath khud ko juda paaogi
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Jab bhee dekhogi..mere naam ke saath khud ko juda paaogi - 18th February 2005, 12:59 AM

Ek ghazab si baat hai iss safar me
jitna dhoondhta houn tujhko,khud ko pata chala jaata houn

hi komal...
in one replly you have quoted that you have started seeing me as an ideal... Since that day .. a new journey has begun for me
Ofcource you are the first one....
And your name will be always there on my lips
That was the best compliment i could ever get *
There can be many more names but komal will be the first Name which i will remember
Just as rohin is the one who asked for an autograph*
And you are the first one who Said such beutifull words
I don't know i m worth of it or not but yet its an honour and accepted from the every cornor of my heart
jab bhee dekhogi mere naam ke saath khud ko juda paogi

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Karan!
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Karan! - 18th February 2005, 06:39 PM

Esa laga ki ..
mujhe yahi toh likhna tha!
aur apne likh diya......
mujhe yahi toh kehna tha...
aur apne keh diya!
Ek ghazab si baat hai iss safar me
jitna dhoondhta houn tujhko,khud ko pata chala jaata houn..!
...han.. kuch esa hi mehsoos
hota hai when i read ur poems!

I m Glad tht i am tht 1st name!

Tune ye kya keh diya
hum khud pe marne lage..!
aj tere hotho par aya hai mera naam
ye zikr hum sar e aam karne lage..

karan thx for accepting the honour!
jab bhee dekhogi mere naam ke saath khud ko juda paogi*
this is the greatest complement for me 2! thx for honouring me.

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Pehla he hai or pehla he rahega - 19th February 2005, 01:43 AM

naam to ab pehla hai or pehla he rahega
Hum dekhiye kahaan tak jaate hain or kya safar tay kerna hai hume.......
if that is written in my destiny .. to become a poet one day
You both people will be there with my name forever'
May be there are sevreal In real life
or on net as well.. some publisher's
or some indiviual personalitys
But the first autograph has been asked by rohin it self
But you are crossed the limit of compliment
when you have said that you are seeing an ideal in me.'
There is allot to think about
and there is allot to work for as well
If i m not one of that .. i would love to be the one definatly
for sure,'
mere jaise or log ho jayenge duniya me ....... to sach me kuch baat nahi.. thak jaata houn akela bhagte bhagte ,....logon ko samjhate samjhate
aaj bhee koi bol uttha....are yaar tumne kya samaj seva ka theka le rakha hai.... i said: i m not telling anything to anyone
This is the knowladge ... i got by someone and thats why just passing it to someone else as well.... there is no use of talant and knowladge .. if you can't distribute it
there is no use if you do have medicine
and you can't give it to the patient''
What ever you get ..just pass it to someone else... and learn more and more... from each and every sec. of life
That is what karan.q is all about

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20th February 2005, 12:11 AM

hye...Karan....

your shayri is like wonderful dimand in the sky...
but here you are picked that and drawn in to the paper...

its too too good...

i dont have any words to express to apriciate your nagma...
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Welcome in the world of dimonds - 20th February 2005, 03:36 PM

Hiii kajol
pehli baar tumhe dekha
Chalo .. khyaal hai ke aage bulane ki jaroorat nahi padegi
or bina bulaye he chale aayenge aap
Aate rahiye
mehfil sajaate rahiye
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