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kitne haseen chaand -
13th March 2003, 09:43 PM
kitne haseen chaand naqaaboN mein band hain
in ke khatoot meri kitaboN mein band hain... aye baagbaa khuda ke liye tuu rihayi de khusbu ke kaafile to gulaboN mein band hain... mein kaise mil sakooNga koi raasta nahi mehboob mere kitne hizaaboN mein band hain... paani samajh ke kitne parindoN ne jaan di kitne haseen fareb saraaboN mein band hain... falak ke haseen sitaaroN se puuch lo meri wafaayeiN un ke hisaaboN mein band hain... ab tak kisi haseen ka lifafa nahi mila kitne jawaab khat ke jawaaboN mein band hain... hasrat, junoon, ishq, ya mohabbat na puchiye kitne junoon to khana khraaboN mein band hain... BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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HI -
13th March 2003, 10:02 PM
HI PYAASA JI
VERY NICE WORDING'S ONCE AGAIN!! U WRITE VERY GOOD mein kaise mil sakooNga koi raasta nahi mehboob mere kitne hizaaboN mein band hain... paani samajh ke kitne parindoN ne jaan di kitne haseen fareb saraaboN mein band hain... falak ke haseen sitaaroN se puuch lo meri wafaayeiN un ke hisaaboN mein band hain... ab tak kisi haseen ka lifafa nahi mila kitne jawaab khat ke jawaaboN mein band hain... hasrat, junoon, ishq, ya mohabbat na puchiye kitne junoon to khana khraaboN mein band hain... PRIYA. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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THANKS -
13th March 2003, 10:48 PM
PRIYA JI,
Ek baar fir dil se shukriyaa adaaa karna chahunga aapka Aaap hamesha hi reply dete ho aur such maniye aap ka reply milte hi ek ajeeb si khushi hot ihai dil ko ke ek itna achha likhne vaali PRIYA JI hum jaise ke kalaam par reply deti hain . Bahut bahut bahut shukriyaa. Thanks once again BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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vaah -
14th March 2003, 05:47 PM
pyaasa ji
bahut achhe keep it up |
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Bahut achhe -
15th March 2003, 11:24 AM
Pyasa sahab aapki ye post bahut pasand aai, har stanza kamaal ka hai, Likhte rahiye ga.
Regards Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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Thanks -
15th March 2003, 09:50 PM
Shukriyaa piyush ji jo aapne meri likhaawat ki tareef ki
Shukriyaa CHAAND JI aap ne aaj pehli baar meri post ka reply diya hai shukriyaa. Waise aap bhi bahut hi achha likhte ho BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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Adaab kabool Kijiye |
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Adaab kabool Kijiye -
17th March 2003, 10:08 PM
Janab apka kalaam parha mashallah bahut acha laga yaqeen karein dost apki yeh ghazal parhke aj bahut kushi hoi aur dil ne yeh chah ke kash yeh ghazal humne likhi hoti yaqeen kijiye apse agey bhi yehi umeed rahegi likhte rahega...
Ek Anjaan Dost Salman Shaikh in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara.... ______________________ Ashk bankaar woh mere chashm-e-tar main rehta hai.... ajeeb woh shaks hai jo pani ke ghar main rehta hai........ |
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Shukriyaa -
17th March 2003, 11:21 PM
Shukriyaa SALMAN JI .
aaap ke reply ke liye bahut bahut shukriyaa . Waise aapki likhaavat bhi bahut achhi hoti hai. Aur is baar kai dino baad aapko shayri.com par dekha humne. Anyways likhte rahiyega .................................................. ................... PYAASA.................. BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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HAPPY HOLI -
18th March 2003, 01:45 PM
Pyaasaji
wah wah wah...lajawab....behisab bahot badiya....bahot hi atchha hi likha hai i like these most... kitne haseen chaand naqaaboN mein band hain in ke khatoot meri kitaboN mein band hain... hasrat, junoon, ishq, ya mohabbat na puchiye kitne junoon to khana khraaboN mein band hain... ummeed hai wo naqaab jald hi uth jayenge sanam happy holi  jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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THANKS -
18th March 2003, 09:49 PM
THANKS SANAM JI .
Shukriyaa SANAM JI jo aapne is nacheez ka likha padh kar reply diya. aur aap ki umed hai ke woh naqab jaldi hi uth jayenge. Lekin lagta hai ke aapne yeh lines nahi dekhi mein kaise mil sakooNga koi raasta nahi mehboob mere kitne hizaaboN mein band hain... lol just kidding SANAM JI anyways thanks for ur reply BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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