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10th July 2006, 02:57 PM
Maazi, Haal aur mustakbill....
Iss naam ke teen nukkad hai aur na jaane kyoN pichle kuch dino se khayaalaat aur mere alfaaz haath mein haath daale inn nukkad ke darmiyaan chakkar lagaa rahe hain....aaj unkaa haath thaam karr poochaa hazraat maajraa kya hai..? to kehne lage.... Main ghar ko choR aaya tha khud Ghar ke vaaste, paane ko ek *bahaal se manzar ke vaaste. Ek Deep duur se hi sahi roshni tau de, aur chaahiye kya tumko rahguzar ke vaaste. main apni aarzoo ka Qatl karke khush huun ke, ik juu-e-narm-rau tau hai shajar ke vaaste. aise bhi hain charaag jinki lau se aaj tak, Dhundhlaayi aankh roti hai sahar ke vaaste. Insaan fard fard hai tau soch fard fard, pinha ke vaaste kahiiN patthar ke vaaste. abb jism-o-jaan-o-saans-o-raat-o-din ke sath sath, kuch maal bhi hai kharch-e-humsafar ke vaaste. hairat nahi ke meri fugaaN be-asar gayee, Gaafil jahaaN kyuN roye dar-badar ke vaaste. Sarr nahi jhuktaa kabhi "Talib" ka kisi taur, jhuktaa hai magar Allah-o-Akbar ke vaaste. Bahaal=in good condition (ba+haal) opp of be-haal. juu-e-narm rau=slow flowing river. fard= different. pinha = hidden. fugaan=cry gaafil=careless dar-badar= kinda vagabond. Talib. |
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Re: ..inn sab ke vaaste. -
10th July 2006, 03:38 PM
Ek Deep duur se hi sahi roshni tau de,
aur chaahiye kya tumko rahguzar ke vaaste. WAH...KYA KAHA HAI TAALIB BHAI AAPNE..WAH..WAH...BAHOOOT KHOOOOB...!!!! Insaan fard fard hai tau soch fard fard, pinha ke vaaste kahiiN patthar ke vaaste. abb jism-o-jaan-o-saans-o-raat-o-din ke sath sath, kuch maal bhi hai kharch-e-humsafar ke vaaste. WAH...KYA KEHNE....YEHI ANDAAZ AAP KA DIL CHEER LETA HAI..!! Sarr nahi jhuktaa kabhi "Talib" ka kisi taur, jhuktaa hai magar Allah-o-Akbar ke vaaste. WAH....KYA BAAT HAI...YEH SHER BEHAD BEHAD DAMDAAR LAGA,,KHAAS KAR ISMEIN CHUPE AAPKI KHUDDARI KE JAZBAAT..!!! TAALIB BHAI aap jab bhi apni gazal ke saath aate hai...fiza mein jaise ek raunaq aa jati hai...aap ka andaaz-e-bayaan mujhe jaatiye taur parbahot pasand hai..yeh gazal aur is mein choope aapke jazbaat bhi mujhe bahoot khaas lage,..,.meri dil se nikli mubaaraqbaad kubool kijiye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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10th July 2006, 04:28 PM
Namaskaar Taalib Ji,
kaise hain aap? dua hai hamesha hamesha khush rahein. Aap kamm likhtey hain magar jab bhi likhtey hain tow aas-paas ke maahol mein bilkul alag nazar aate hain. Aur fir wahan aapke shabd hamara ek gehraahi se parichay karaatey hain. Aapke gehre shabdon ko maapna aasaan nahin hai magar maine jab-jab aapko parha tow wahan jaane ki koshish kari jahan aapki nazm.ein humey lejaana chahati hain. Bas isi tarah likhtey rahiyega.....main aapse bahaut kuch seekhney ki ummeed rakhta hoon. aapka v i p i n 
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10th July 2006, 04:31 PM
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Ek Deep duur se hi sahi roshni tau de, aur chaahiye kya tumko rahguzar ke vaaste. main apni aarzoo ka Qatl karke khush huun ke, ik juu-e-narm-rau tau hai shajar ke vaaste. Wah.........bohat badhiya aise bhi hain charaag jinki lau se aaj tak, Dhundhlaayi aankh roti hai sahar ke vaaste. Insaan fard fard hai tau soch fard fard, pinha ke vaaste kahiiN patthar ke vaaste. Beautifulllllllll.......... hairat nahi ke meri fugaaN be-asar gayee, Gaafil jahaaN kyuN roye dar-badar ke vaaste. Sarr nahi jhuktaa kabhi "Talib" ka kisi taur, jhuktaa hai magar Allah-o-Akbar ke vaaste. Very very nice......... Talib jee Padha aapko kam hi haiN coz aap aaj kal kam hi aate haiN yaha..lekin jab bhi padha aapko padhkar hamesha sukoon mila haiN.sabhi sher bohat pasand aaye shukriyah..............aate rahiyega hamein aapko padhkar kuch sikhne ko milta rahega kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj" |
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10th July 2006, 07:33 PM
Hmmmn Ghalib ke Bhai...
Ek aur zabardast kalaam apki kalam ki tez dhaar se… Ek Deep duur se hi sahi roshni tau de, aur chaahiye kya tumko rahguzar ke vaaste Yeh sher dil-lazeez raha…aur ek purane geet ki lines yaad aayin khushabuu aatii rahe duur se hii sahii saamane ho chaman koii kam to nahii.n chaa.Nd milataa nahii.n sabako sa.Nsaar me.n hai diyaa hii bahut roshanii ke lie Insaan fard fard hai tau soch fard fard, pinha ke vaaste kahiiN patthar ke vaaste. Bahut khuub! Khuda aur Bhagwaan ko apki shayri mein aksar sath sath paaya hai… Maine kuchh kaha tau chota munh badi baat hogi… halanki sab ashaar apne aap mein mukammal hain…zara sa rabt aur badhaaya karein sheron ke beech…...shayri ki duniya mein aap bahut aage nikleinge saaf zaahir hai…pinhaa aur patthar se dua bhi hai… gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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10th July 2006, 07:43 PM
Ek Deep duur se hi sahi roshni tau de,
aur chaahiye kya tumko rahguzar ke vaaste. Namaskar Talib Ji Aapki rachna ki yeh panktiyaan bahut khoobsurat hain....a kind of inspirational words....... Duur se hi sahi ek diya to Jaley Mana uss se Jag ka Andhera na mitey Par Asha ki ek kiran woh Baney Duur se hi sahi ek Diya to Jagey Keep writing |
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10th July 2006, 07:52 PM
Ha Ha Ha....
Sabse pehle iss kuRi (Parastaar ji) ke jawaab ka jawaab de rahaa hoon iss liye inn teeno upar waale mundoN se maufii bhi chaataa huuN..(sorry guys - Manoj, Vipin Bhai ne Mr. Dave Digajj) Kyaa baat hai madame.. aapko meraa kalaam inta zyaadaa pasand aayaa ke woh dil-lazeez ho gayaa.. ha ha ha.. aisaa lagtaa hai maine bhari mehfil mein koi pakwaan rakh diyaa ho... it should have been.. dil-azeez.. Well aapkaa jawaab bhi maine kaafi dil-lazeez payaa.. i mean dil-azeez paayaa.. Shurkiyaa aapki daad aur dua dono ka..Apna Khayaal rakhiyega. Talib. |
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10th July 2006, 08:00 PM
you couldn't resist...could you...? chupke se ishaara nahi kiya ja sakta thaa...i could have edited..it was only a typo...bhari mehfil mein...ohhhhhhhh...!!!
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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bhut pyari gazal hai |
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bhut pyari gazal hai -
11th July 2006, 03:29 PM
talib bhai jaan ajj raj appka mureed ho gaya...app mujhay apni shagirdee main lelo......kasam say bhut khus likha hai har share purasar thaa......rouh ko sakoon mila.....khaas kar yeh share dil main uttar gaya,......
aise bhi hain charaag jinki lau se aaj tak, Dhundhlaayi aankh roti hai sahar ke vaaste......... meri dilli daad kabool kijiye........raj...... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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11th July 2006, 08:15 PM
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PurKhulooS tasleemaat, Aaj aik taveel arse ke ba'd aap ko paRhna naseeb huaa.. aap ne buhat pur.fikr she'r kahe haiN. daad qubool keejiye! Waah! bohta khoob! -Mayank |
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12th July 2006, 06:25 AM
talib ji ,
kaise hai aap ? umeed hai ki achhe honge hmm chhithi nahi likhti  main apni aarzoo ka Qatl karke khush huun ke, ik juu-e-narm-rau tau hai shajar ke vaaste. aapki kahi baaton ki kya taairf karen hum humne to abhi seekhna hai ye sher bhaut gahra laga shrdh 
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12th July 2006, 10:42 AM
Talib saheb
behad khoobsurat ghazel hai yeh aap ki. is mein aap ne apne makhsoos andaaz mein jis shuguftgi ke saath, jis khud-daari ke saath, apni anaa ki paasdari ke saath, apne dard ka zikr kiyaa hai, voh behad pur-asr hai aur parhne waale per gehraa asar chorta hai. is ke saath saath ek inkisaari aur khaloos ki jhalak yeh bataati hai ke aap sirf achchay shayer hi naheen balke bohat achchay insaan bhi hain. aap se istidaa hai ke aap isi tarz per qayem rahiye, Allah aap ko bohat taraqqi aur kaamraani ataa kare gaa. yehi hamari dua hai yehi tamanna. musharrafhusain |
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12th July 2006, 02:46 PM
aaghaaz se anjaam tak mashallah bahaut hi umda laga...khas kar ke anjaam toh bahaut hi badhiya tha..
Sarr nahi jhuktaa kabhi "Talib" ka kisi taur, jhuktaa hai magar Allah-o-Akbar ke vaaste. aapko jabbhi padha hai dil se waah waahi khud ba khud nikal jaati hai..khuda aapki kalam ke hunar ko yuhin barqaraar rakkhe. khush rahiye.aabaad rahiye. Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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