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Ghazal: gham ko bechne ka hunar nahi aaya... -
1st June 2010, 01:37 PM
Shayri parivaar ke sabhi dosto ko mera aadaab..
yeh mein har baar kehta hun ki ek arsa ho gaya hai yahaan aaye hue..lekin haan yeh sach hai ki jab kuch likhta nahi to maano zindagi adhuri se rehti hai aur har pal ek arse se kam nahi lagta..aur jab likhta hun to yahaan aana ho hi jaata hai.. kuch mamooli se ashaar likhe hain (mamooli se zyaadah kuch likhna bhi nahi aata)..aap sab ki raaey ke muntazir rahunga..god bless munaasib hota ke, na-hoke agar nahi aaya woh muhalle se guzra par ghar nahi aaya? jahaan-e-bedaar meiN masaruuf raha hoga jo mere haalatoen se be-khabar nahi aaya inn ankhoeN ko ek khwaab ka intezaar tha jo raat bhar nahi aaya, umr bhar nahi aaya ishq mein fana’a hona chaahte the magar qahar dhaanaa use bhi sar basar nahi aaya mere wujood ka maqsad zaroor raha hoga fuzool hi zamaane meiN kuch kar nahi aaya dil meiN basa hai aathon pahar, khuda hai arsah’e hayaat meiN tujhe nazar nahi aaya? go harf-e-ranjish se fikr farmaate ho “Bismil” tumhe gham ko bechne ka hunar nahi aaya Pradhyuman - Bismil gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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1st June 2010, 01:46 PM
Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...........wahhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhh............Subhan_allah Marhaba Marhaba Marhaba wah janab wah maza aa gaya dil khush kar diya aapne mere bhai.............wah kya nayaab tohfa baksha hai mehfil samne hote to apne gale se laga leta.
Allah aapki kalam ko aur takat bakshe....AAMEEN Har sher pasandida raha par yeh sher bohat zalim the........ inn ankhoeN ko ek khwaab ka intezaar tha jo raat bhar nahi aaya, umr bhar nahi aaya ishq mein fana’a hona chaahte the magar qahar dhaanaa use bhi sar basar nahi aaya mere wujood ka maqsad zaroor raha hoga fuzool hi zamaane meiN kuch kar nahi aaya Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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1st June 2010, 01:54 PM
munaasib hota ke, na-hoke agar nahi aaya
woh muhalle se guzra par ghar nahi aaya? very beautiful... kya word play hai . mazaa aa gaya inn ankhoeN ko ek khwaab ka intezaar tha jo raat bhar nahi aaya, umr bhar nahi aaya again.......... yaar ... just awesome .......... its so natural ............. bahut hi umda sachi-muchi mere wujood ka maqsad zaroor raha hoga fuzool hi zamaane meiN kuch kar nahi aaya bahut badhiya , badhiya fir se go harf-e-ranjish se fikr farmaate ho “Bismil” tumhe gham ko bechne ka hunar nahi aaya jya zubaan hai kya byaaN hai yaar aisa kuch mere maiN bhi hota kaash repsssssssssssssss for whole ghazal |
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1st June 2010, 01:57 PM
inn ankhoeN ko ek khwaab ka intezaar tha
jo raat bhar nahi aaya, umr bhar nahi aaya ishq mein fana’a hona chaahte the magar qahar dhaanaa use bhi sar basar nahi aaya Bahut Khoob lage mujhe....aapke yeh do khayal....Pradhyuman Ji ! dil se daad hazir hai.....qubuul farmaayen... Aise hi behtar kalaam ke saath humesha aate rahen.... khush rahen... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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1st June 2010, 10:15 PM
bahut bahut badhiya pradhyuman saheb,
bahut khoob...maza aa gaya padh kar.... daad haazir hai janaab, qubuul farmaiyega... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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2nd June 2010, 11:29 AM
Sajid bhai, Janumanu ji, Naresh ji aur Vikram bhai,
aap sabne meri is mamooli si koshish ko saraha isse honsla badha hai.yunhi saath dete rahiyega..to apne andar ke lekhak ko zinda rakh paaunga  god bless. aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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2nd June 2010, 11:38 AM
go harf-e-ranjish se fikr farmaate ho “Bismil”
tumhe gham ko bechne ka hunar nahi aaya baki to theek magar iske liye jitni daad di jaaye shayad kam hogi.... sadangry man  regards |
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3rd June 2010, 01:40 AM
WOW!!... I must say this one is a master piece....Pradhyuman ji...behad khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne,...har sher qabil-e tareef hai...dil se daad qubool kijiye...
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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3rd June 2010, 01:33 PM
Zidd bhai,
daad ke liye aapka tahe dil se shukriyada karna chahta hun..aapko mere thread pe dekh kar acha laga..yunhi saath dete rahiyega 'baaki to theek magar" yeh bahot pasand aaya...aap bahot kuch keh gaye inn shabdoeN mein..aage kabhi maqte mein zaroor istemaal karunga.. god bless... Zainy ji, aapne to hamesha hi meri koshishoeN ko saraaha hai..kya kahun? bas aapke saath ki umeed rakhta hun...god bless..khush rahiye..aabaad rahiye... aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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4th June 2010, 12:35 AM
Bismil Sahab Aadaab!
Bade dino baad bazm mein aapko dekhker khushi huyi...... Paheli baar aapki sidhe sade lafzoN mein peshkash padhi aur yakeen ho gaya ke Bismil sahab sirf hard urdu words se hi dil ke ahsaas bayan nahi karte hai balke sade side lafzoN se bhi samaa bandhe rakh sakate hai....... Puri gazal hi khoob lagi janab har ashaar per dil se daad hazir hai kabool kijiye........ Bazm, mein aate rahiye .... Khush rahiye .... Likhte rahiye...... Khuad Hafez.,,,,,,,,,, 
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4th June 2010, 11:43 AM
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aapki daad hamein kubool hai..aage bhi aapke saath ki umeed rakhta hun.. god bless...apna khyaal rakhiyega.. aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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4th June 2010, 07:38 PM
jahaan-e-bedaar meiN masaruuf raha hoga
jo mere haalatoen se be-khabar nahi aaya inn ankhoeN ko ek khwaab ka intezaar tha jo raat bhar nahi aaya, umr bhar nahi aaya very nice pradhyuman ji.. keep writing...... |
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5th June 2010, 05:09 AM
bahot khub dost
puri ghazal kabil-e-tarif hai keep sharing Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
 Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
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5th June 2010, 12:40 PM
Shipra ji, Praneeta ji,
meri yeh adna si kaavish pasand karne ke liye be-had shukriya..aage bhi saath dete rahiyega... aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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