shaad bhai,
bahot bahot shukriyaa aapka...hamesha khush rahen
aapka dost,
Pradhyuman
ahamad bhai,
bahot bahot shukriyaa aapka ki aapne apni baat yahaan rakhi..acha laga padhkar...
behisii ka phir dilaane jo ehsaas aayi
apne hisse ki khushiyaan sab udaas aayi
iss sher ke maaine yeh hai ki mujhme ehsaas hai hi nahi..iss baat ka ehsaas dilaane aaye ho waise mere hisse ki khushiyaan udaas aayi..khushi aapko khush karne aati hai..magar khud kya khushi se aati hai??..baat thodi kaalpanik hai..maslan bas use aana tha (majboori meiN) to aa gayi..ab lekhak to apni soch ka daayra aam zabaan aur samjh se aage le hi ja sakta hai..magar haan yeh baat maiN gar theek se keh nahi paaya to woh meri hi galti hai..
jo aapne
aayi pe kahaa woh interesting laga..khushiyaan aayeN (plural) hona chahiye..aur khushi aayi (singular) hona chahiye..
phir se ek koshish karta hun..(bebasi nahi behisi hi kehna chaah rahaa hun..)
behisi ka phir dilaane jo ehsaas aayi
apne hisse ki khushi bhi ab udaas aayi
aapki raaey zaroor chahiye hogi
aapka dost,
Pradhyuman