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3rd November 2006, 07:09 PM
Dil main teri chavi tujhe dikhlaa na sake
Chah kar bhi tujhe apna kehlaa na sake
Mast hawaaon ne hazaar baar pukaara
Bin dori ke patang hum ouDaa na sake
Waqt ke sang yaaddasht kam hoti gayi
Wo puraani ghazal phir dohraa na sake
Dil jeetne ke khel main hum rahe anaari
Baazi apni sahi kismat ko haraa na sake
Jab se tamaasha dekha teri beroukhi ka
Ankhon ko chain ki nind soulaa na sake
Jiss ke janam lete hi tum ne maar daala
Ous chaahat ko hum phir jeelaa na sake
Guftagoo ka hi jo bandh kar diyaa tumne
Ous darwaaze ko phir se khoulaa na sake
Mushkil hai tujhe sabab-e-judaai sunaana
Siwa-e-Khuda kissi ko bhi batlaa na sake
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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3rd November 2006, 09:36 PM
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Dil main teri chavi tujhe dikhlaa na sake
Chah kar bhi tujhe apna kehlaa na sake
Mast hawaaon ne hazaar baar pukaara
Bin dori ke patang hum ouDaa na sake
Waqt ke sang yaaddasht kam hoti gayi
Wo puraani ghazal phir dohraa na sake
Dil jeetne ke khel main hum rahe anaari
Baazi apni sahi kismat ko haraa na sake
Jab se tamaasha dekha teri beroukhi ka
Ankhon ko chain ki nind soulaa na sake
Jiss ke janam lete hi tum ne maar daala
Ous chaahat ko hum phir jeelaa na sake
Guftagoo ka hi jo bandh kar diyaa tumne
Ous darwaaze ko phir se khoulaa na sake
Mushkil hai tujhe sabab-e-judaai sunaana
Siwa-e-Khuda kissi ko bhi batlaa na sake
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danny ji namaskaar
aapki rachna har bar bahot hi alag aur ehsas se bhari hoti hai bahot hi achha laga is rachna ko padhke ehsas aapke pasand aaye
aur khas karke mujhe ye sher bhot hi achhey lage
Dil jeetne ke khel main hum rahe anaari
Baazi apni sahi kismat ko haraa na sake
Jiss ke janam lete hi tum ne maar daala
Ous chaahat ko hum phir jeelaa na sake
bahot khub !!!!
dil se nikali daad kubul kijiyenga
aapka dost
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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4th November 2006, 01:22 PM
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Originally Posted by Mushkil
Dil main teri chavi tujhe dikhlaa na sake
Chah kar bhi tujhe apna kehlaa na sake
Mast hawaaon ne hazaar baar pukaara
Bin dori ke patang hum ouDaa na sake
Waqt ke sang yaaddasht kam hoti gayi
Wo puraani ghazal phir dohraa na sake
Dil jeetne ke khel main hum rahe anaari
Baazi apni sahi kismat ko haraa na sake
Jab se tamaasha dekha teri beroukhi ka
Ankhon ko chain ki nind soulaa na sake
Jiss ke janam lete hi tum ne maar daala
Ous chaahat ko hum phir jeelaa na sake
Guftagoo ka hi jo bandh kar diyaa tumne
Ous darwaaze ko phir se khoulaa na sake
Mushkil hai tujhe sabab-e-judaai sunaana
Siwa-e-Khuda kissi ko bhi batlaa na sake
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dear danny ji
jab ham kisi ko apna banane ki koshish karte hai aur nahi bana paate to woh gam milta hai jiska byaan karna bahut mushkil hai. apne yahaan apne jajbaatoin ko likha padke acha laga. lekin shayad ye dard apke andar hai ye sochke acha nahi laga.dil ko kuch khraab laga.
par likhne se gam kam hota hai.yuhi likhte rahna dost.
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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6th November 2006, 07:01 PM
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danny ji namaskaar
aapki rachna har bar bahot hi alag aur ehsas se bhari hoti hai bahot hi achha laga is rachna ko padhke ehsas aapke pasand aaye
aur khas karke mujhe ye sher bhot hi achhey lage
Dil jeetne ke khel main hum rahe anaari
Baazi apni sahi kismat ko haraa na sake
Jiss ke janam lete hi tum ne maar daala
Ous chaahat ko hum phir jeelaa na sake
bahot khub !!!!
dil se nikali daad kubul kijiyenga
aapka dost
dhaval
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Shukriya, Dhaval Ji...!
Yaha kavita bhi aap ko pasand aayi so hamare liye khoushi ki baat hai...!
Apna khayaal rakhiyega
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6th November 2006, 07:07 PM
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dear danny ji
jab ham kisi ko apna banane ki koshish karte hai aur nahi bana paate to woh gam milta hai jiska byaan karna bahut mushkil hai. apne yahaan apne jajbaatoin ko likha padke acha laga. lekin shayad ye dard apke andar hai ye sochke acha nahi laga.dil ko kuch khraab laga.
par likhne se gam kam hota hai.yuhi likhte rahna dost.
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Dear Sakhi Ji...!
Aap ke nice comments ko parh kar acha lagaa...! Par sach maaniye, ye aap ke dost ke andar ka dard nahin hai...! Hum hamesha khush hein...!
Thik se apna khayaal rakhiyega...!
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7th November 2006, 05:31 PM
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Originally Posted by Mushkil
Dear Sakhi Ji...!
Aap ke nice comments ko parh kar acha lagaa...! Par sach maaniye, ye aap ke dost ke andar ka dard nahin hai...! Hum hamesha khush hein...!
Thik se apna khayaal rakhiyega...!
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dear danny ji
bahut acha laga janke ki ye apke andar ka dard nahi hai.
aap yuhi khush rahiye.
sakhi with
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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8th November 2006, 12:50 PM
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Dil main teri chavi tujhe dikhlaa na sake
Chah kar bhi tujhe apna kehlaa na sake
Mast hawaaon ne hazaar baar pukaara
Bin dori ke patang hum ouDaa na sake
Waqt ke sang yaaddasht kam hoti gayi
Wo puraani ghazal phir dohraa na sake
Dil jeetne ke khel main hum rahe anaari
Baazi apni sahi kismat ko haraa na sake
Jab se tamaasha dekha teri beroukhi ka
Ankhon ko chain ki nind soulaa na sake
Jiss ke janam lete hi tum ne maar daala
Ous chaahat ko hum phir jeelaa na sake
Guftagoo ka hi jo bandh kar diyaa tumne
Ous darwaaze ko phir se khoulaa na sake
Mushkil hai tujhe sabab-e-judaai sunaana
Siwa-e-Khuda kissi ko bhi batlaa na sake
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danny ji namaskaaR...!
aaj aapko phele baar padda, sach maniye dil ko chu gaye aapki yeh gazal. shayad maine galti ki jo ab tak aapko na pad paye,par ab yeh galti nahi karungi, lag raha hai kuch acchey kalaam miss kar diye maine. any way....!
ab nahi karungi....!
yeh sher bahut pasand aaya:
Waqt ke sang yaaddasht kam hoti gayi
Wo puraani ghazal phir dohraa na sake
yu hi likhtey rahiye,
aapki dost
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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8th November 2006, 11:00 PM
danny ji,
har baar ki tarah phir se ek behtareen peshkash.bahut acha lika hai.likhte rahie yunhin.
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
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12th November 2006, 01:20 PM
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dear danny ji
bahut acha laga janke ki ye apke andar ka dard nahi hai.
aap yuhi khush rahiye.
sakhi with
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Hum bhi aap ki khushiyan ke liye douaaein karte hein, Sakhi Ji...!
Take care, ok...?
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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danny ji namaskaaR...!
aaj aapko phele baar padda, sach maniye dil ko chu gaye aapki yeh gazal. shayad maine galti ki jo ab tak aapko na pad paye,par ab yeh galti nahi karungi, lag raha hai kuch acchey kalaam miss kar diye maine. any way....!
ab nahi karungi....!
yeh sher bahut pasand aaya:
Waqt ke sang yaaddasht kam hoti gayi
Wo puraani ghazal phir dohraa na sake
yu hi likhtey rahiye,
aapki dost
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Namaskaar Sunita Ji...!
Gar hamari yaaddasht galat nahin farmaa rahi hai, yaha dusri baar hai jo aap ne hamein parhaa...!
Aap ke hausle bhare alfaaz se hum bahout khush houe...!
Apna khayaal rakhiyega
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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12th November 2006, 01:28 PM
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danny ji,
har baar ki tarah phir se ek behtareen peshkash.bahut acha lika hai.likhte rahie yunhin.
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Shukriya jo aap ne iss kaviya ko bhi parha aur saraaha, Akelijaan Ji...!
Saath nibhaate rahiyega aur apna khayaal bhi rakhna, ok...?
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13th November 2006, 09:33 PM
Mast hawaaon ne hazaar baar pukaara
Bin dori ke patang hum ouDaa na sake
Waqt ke sang yaaddasht kam hoti gayi
Wo puraani ghazal phir dohraa na sake
Namaskar Danny Ji
Kayi din baad aapki rachna padhi...it's really beautiful.....Upar quote kiye sher bahut khoobsurat lage...aapki yeh rachna parh mughey ek apni purani rachna yaad aa gayi ...Keep up the Good work...
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20th November 2006, 04:33 PM
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Mast hawaaon ne hazaar baar pukaara
Bin dori ke patang hum ouDaa na sake
Waqt ke sang yaaddasht kam hoti gayi
Wo puraani ghazal phir dohraa na sake
Namaskar Danny Ji
Kayi din baad aapki rachna padhi...it's really beautiful.....Upar quote kiye sher bahut khoobsurat lage...aapki yeh rachna parh mughey ek apni purani rachna yaad aa gayi ...Keep up the Good work...
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Isse bhi pasand karne ke liye shukriya, Sukanya Ji...!
Jiss purani rachna ka zikr aap ne kiya, uss ka link mil jaaye to khushi hoti...! Hum bhi aap ke kalaam ko parhne ka anand utha lete...!
Thanks in advance
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20th November 2006, 08:38 PM
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Isse bhi pasand karne ke liye shukriya, Sukanya Ji...!
Jiss purani rachna ka zikr aap ne kiya, uss ka link mil jaaye to khushi hoti...! Hum bhi aap ke kalaam ko parhne ka anand utha lete...!
Thanks in advance
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Namaskar Danny ji
Waise to bahut pehle likhi thi yeh rachna...chaliye yeh hay link....
www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=24424...pata nahin pehle kaisa likhti thi ...asha karungi aapko pasand aayegi yeh rachna...
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22nd November 2006, 01:50 AM
Hello Amnush
hi nice work hamesha ki tarha bahote hi aach likha hia. nice work pade ke aacha laga. keep up.
aapki dost mushkan
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23rd November 2006, 12:45 PM
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Namaskar Danny ji
Waise to bahut pehle likhi thi yeh rachna...chaliye yeh hay link....
www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=24424...pata nahin pehle kaisa likhti thi ...asha karungi aapko pasand aayegi yeh rachna...
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Bahout shukriya, Sukanya Ji...!
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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23rd November 2006, 12:48 PM
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Hello Amnush
hi nice work hamesha ki tarha bahote hi aach likha hia. nice work pade ke aacha laga. keep up.
aapki dost mushkan
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Hi Soni...!
Acha lagaa jaan kar ki yaha kavita bhi pasand aayi...!
Younhi hausle baDhaanaa...!
Aap ka dost Amanush...!
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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24th November 2006, 01:59 PM
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Jab se tamaasha dekha teri beroukhi ka
Ankhon ko chain ki nind soulaa na sake
Mushkil hai tujhe sabab-e-judaai sunaana
Siwa-e-Khuda kissi ko bhi batlaa na sake
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Danny sahab....aap ki khidmat me addaab baja laate hai...barkhurdaar bahut achha likha aapne aur isme b koi shak nahi k aap ka har kalaam bahut hi badiya aur dil ko chhoota hua sa hota hai...waqt ki masrufiyat hame aap tak pahuncha nahi pati varna apke har kalaam ko ham saraahe....iske liye maafi chahenge...aur abhi hamari tahe dil se daad kabool kare...ye uper ki lines hame bhut asardaar lagi..
ab izazet de....aur apne khayaal rakhiyega....khush rahiye..
DIL KI TANHAAI KO AASHAAR BANA LETE HAI....
DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO KUCHH LIKH LETE HAI....
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Danny sahab....aap ki khidmat me addaab baja laate hai...barkhurdaar bahut achha likha aapne aur isme b koi shak nahi k aap ka har kalaam bahut hi badiya aur dil ko chhoota hua sa hota hai...waqt ki masrufiyat hame aap tak pahuncha nahi pati varna apke har kalaam ko ham saraahe....iske liye maafi chahenge...aur abhi hamari tahe dil se daad kabool kare...ye uper ki lines hame bhut asardaar lagi..
ab izazet de....aur apne khayaal rakhiyega....khush rahiye..
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Aadaab, Saheeba Ji...!
Aap ki nazar hamare kalaam par bhi padti hai, yaha jaan kar bahut khushi houi...! Aap ki sneh bhari aalochana parh kar dil khil uthaa hamara...!
Tah-e-dil se daad kabul karte hein hum...!
Apna khayaal rakhiyega
Khuda Ji aap ko salaamat rakhe
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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28th January 2007, 12:38 AM
hi amanush
hi bhoate hi aacha likha hia. hamesha ki tarha dil choolene wala aure eke toote dil ke hare kone ka dard jaise ise maie dlae diya hia bhaote hia khoob keep it up.
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15th February 2007, 06:58 AM
Hi "Mushkil" ji
liked the way you have written the poem.
Regards
aarya
khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii
lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii
ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii
regards aarya
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Hi "Mushkil" ji
liked the way you have written the poem.
Regards
aarya
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Thanks for liking the poem, Aarya Ji...!
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24th August 2007, 05:50 AM
bahut khoob Amanush ji
yeh bahut gehrra saach hai ... jisko kabool karana asaan nahi hota ... yehi b kisi ne sehi kaha hai ... duniya ki har ek cheez humari nahi ho sakti ... afsoos .... esi baat ka hai ... khaas hum kuch cheeze badal sake ...
anyways ... yu hi aate rahe ... n take care
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8th September 2007, 06:47 PM
Dil main teri chavi tujhe dikhlaa na sake
Chah kar bhi tujhe apna kehlaa na sake
bahut hi khoob!!
Waqt ke sang yaaddasht kam hoti gayi
Wo puraani ghazal phir dohraa na sake
yaadein kam ho sakti hain....par kabhi khtam nahin hoti
Dil jeetne ke khel main hum rahe anaari
Baazi apni sahi kismat ko haraa na sake
very nice!!
Jab se tamaasha dekha teri beroukhi ka
Ankhon ko chain ki nind soulaa na sake
bahut sahin likha hain!!
Mushkil hai tujhe sabab-e-judaai sunaana
Siwa-e-Khuda kissi ko bhi batlaa na sake
AAp ko padhna hamesha accha lagta hain...dannyjee......aise hi is mehfil ki ronak badhate rehna....
mausam
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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11th September 2007, 09:18 PM
Very very sorry for late replies...! My pc was in ineffective condition...!
Hope to be regular in future as usual...!
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bahut khoob Amanush ji
yeh bahut gehrra saach hai ... jisko kabool karana asaan nahi hota ... yehi b kisi ne sehi kaha hai ... duniya ki har ek cheez humari nahi ho sakti ... afsoos .... esi baat ka hai ... khaas hum kuch cheeze badal sake ...
anyways ... yu hi aate rahe ... n take care
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Aap ne iss kalaam ko pasand kiyaa, aap ka shukriya, Manu Ji...!
Aap ke khayaal parhkar achaa lagaa...!
Yun hi saath dete rahiyegaa uar apna khayaal thik se rakhna, ok...?
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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Dil main teri chavi tujhe dikhlaa na sake
Chah kar bhi tujhe apna kehlaa na sake
bahut hi khoob!!
Waqt ke sang yaaddasht kam hoti gayi
Wo puraani ghazal phir dohraa na sake
yaadein kam ho sakti hain....par kabhi khtam nahin hoti
Dil jeetne ke khel main hum rahe anaari
Baazi apni sahi kismat ko haraa na sake
very nice!!
Jab se tamaasha dekha teri beroukhi ka
Ankhon ko chain ki nind soulaa na sake
bahut sahin likha hain!!
Mushkil hai tujhe sabab-e-judaai sunaana
Siwa-e-Khuda kissi ko bhi batlaa na sake
AAp ko padhna hamesha accha lagta hain...dannyjee......aise hi is mehfil ki ronak badhate rehna....
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Aap ko apne posts par dekh kar atii khushi hoti hai, Mausam Ji...! Shayri pasand karne ke liye bahut dhanyavaad...!
Aap hausla dete rahiyegaa aur hum raunak e mehfil main chaar chaand
lagaane ki koshish kareinge, ok...?
Apna khayaal thik se rakhiyegaa
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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27th June 2015, 01:55 PM
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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27th June 2015, 02:39 PM
Bahut shukriya, ChoTi Behna...!
Ashirvaad ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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