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Masuum phuulon se chehre Dekhti huun kabhi Sarhad kay is par Kabhi us par dekhti huun -
1st March 2005, 09:17 PM
Shayri parivar ko mera Sader Namaskar
Aaj ek Rachna aapkey Samukh pesh kar Rahi huun...............Aaj Neele Amber mein Duaein se khichey ek Lakeer Dekhey Aur main apney Rachna ke Sath phir apne kalpanon ke safer par chal padi....Mughey yeh kavita likhtey ek Geet bhi yaad aaya panchi Nadiya Hawa ke jhokey koi Sarhad na inhey Rokey....... Ek Lakeer Khichey Dekhtey huun Kabhi Sarhad ke is par kabhi us par Dekhtey huun Ek Lakeer Khichey Dekhtey huun Kabhi Sarhad ke is par kabhi us par Dekhtey huun Ek dhuain se khichey ek Lakeer Dekhtey huun Kabhi Asmaan par kabhi Zameen par Dekhtey huun Neele Amber Kay Aanchal mein khichey ek Lakeer Dekhtey huun Neele Sagar ki God mein Khichey ek Lakeer Dekhtey huun Ek Lakeer Khichey Dekhtey huun Kabhi Sarhad ke is par kabhi us par Dekhtey huun Kuch yadein Nadi ke is par Kuch uss par Dekhtey huun Ek Nadi behtey Dekhtey huun Kabhi is Gaon Kabhi uss Gaon behtey Dekhtey huun Kuch Panchiyon ko udtey main Dekhtey huun Kabhi Sarhad kay is par Kabhi uss par Dekhtey huun Mausam ke sath badaltey havaon kay Rukh ko main Dekhtey huun Kabhi Sarhad ke is par Kabhi uss par Dekhtey huun Badaltey kitney Mausamon kay Rukh ko main Dekhtey huun Ek Lakeer Khichey Dekhtey huun Kitney bhukamp se lutey gharon ko main Dekhtey huun Kabhi Tufanon se Kabhi Aandhion se lutey Ashainey main Dekhtey huun Ek Lakeer Dilon par khichey main Dekhtey huun Kabhi Sarhad ke is par kabhi us par dekhtey huun Pyare se Masuum phuulon se chehre main Dekhtey huun Kabhi Sarhad ke is par kabhi uss par Dekhtey huun |
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Re: Masuum phuulon se chehre Dekhti huun kabhi Sarhad kay is par Kabhi us par dekhti huun |
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Re: Masuum phuulon se chehre Dekhti huun kabhi Sarhad kay is par Kabhi us par dekhti huun -
2nd March 2005, 02:29 PM
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ek lakeer sarhad nahi dil bant deti hai... par koi na is bandish ka mohtaz hota hai... aankheN aaNkhoN ka haal jaan leti hai... namaskaar didi... ek bohat hi shiksha wadi rachna ko anjam diya hai aapne.. khayal ek lakeer ka .. khayal mukoN ka ... khayal insaniyat ka ... aur jazba kuch diloN pe asar karne ka ... bohat nek aur saaf ... sach aapki ye kavita padh ke dil khush ho gaya... sab jante hai sahi kya hai ... par apnana koi nahi chahta ... isse jyada kya kahuN .. khair ye khel isan ke khud ka banaya hua hai .. jise khatam karna ab uske bas maiN hi nahi raha .... dukh hota hai soch ke ... aapne bohat accha likha hai ... apne bhai ki tareef teh dil se kabool kareN aapka bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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3rd March 2005, 12:45 AM
~~~Tanhaa~~~
dear Sukanya ji, aapki rachna bahot kareeb paayi apne zehn ke. ek baat kehna chaahoonga, jis tarah paani mein laathi maarne se paani alag nahi hota, kuchh der ke liye phael jaata hai. usi tarah in do mulkon ko bhi koi taakat alag nahi kar sakti. kyuki dono ki rooh ek hai. aur aane waali generations is baat ko bahot achhi tarah samajhti hain. jo beet gaya wo kal tha, jo ab guzar chuka hai, aane waala kal jo hai wo dono deshon ke liye khushi ka paigaam lekar aayega, ye mera yakeen hai..... bas duaa keejiye wo din jaldi aaye.. aapka dost ~~~Tanhaa~~~ . wo chubtey hai aur zakhm dete hai imaandaari se, phool to bewafa hotey hai...dhoka dete hai wafadaari se DARD KO BHI AB DARD HONE LAGA, DARD KHUD HI GAAV BARANE LAGA, DARD KE MAARE HUM NA ROYE KABHI, DARD HUM KO CHUKAR KHUD HI RONE LAGA.............. |
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3rd March 2005, 04:55 PM
Namaste Sukanya Ji,
Itni simple si cheez dekhke itni khoobsurat nazm likh daali!!!!! Behud pasand aayi aapki nazm aur dil ke kareeb rahegi. Khush rahiye aur sada muskurate rahiye. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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3rd March 2005, 06:20 PM
Ek Lakeer Khichey Dekhtey huun
Kabhi Sarhad ke is par kabhi us par Dekhtey huun Ek dhuain se khichey ek Lakeer Dekhtey huun Kabhi Asmaan par kabhi Zameen par Dekhtey huun Neele Amber Kay Aanchal mein khichey ek Lakeer Dekhtey huun Neele Sagar ki God mein Khichey ek Lakeer Dekhtey huun Very Nice Words Didi!! Ek Lakeer Khichey Dekhtey huun Kabhi Sarhad ke is par kabhi us par Dekhtey huun Kuch yadein Nadi ke is par Kuch uss par Dekhtey huun Ek Nadi behtey Dekhtey huun Kabhi is Gaon Kabhi uss Gaon behtey Dekhtey huun Kitana sundar chitra bana hai... Kuch Panchiyon ko udtey main Dekhtey huun Kabhi Sarhad kay is par Kabhi uss par Dekhtey huun Mausam ke sath badaltey havaon kay Rukh ko main Dekhtey huun Kabhi Sarhad ke is par Kabhi uss par Dekhtey huun Badaltey kitney Mausamon kay Rukh ko main Dekhtey huun Ek Lakeer Khichey Dekhtey huun Bahut hi khoobsurat! Kitney bhukamp se lutey gharon ko main Dekhtey huun Kabhi Tufanon se Kabhi Aandhion se lutey Ashainey main Dekhtey huun Ek Lakeer Dilon par khichey main Dekhtey huun Kabhi Sarhad ke is par kabhi us par dekhtey huun Pyare se Masuum phuulon se chehre main Dekhtey huun Kabhi Sarhad ke is par kabhi uss par Dekhtey huun Wah.. yeh bhii bahut khoob raha!! Didi! Kaisi hain.. ummeed hai bahut acche se hongi! Aapki kalpana ki udaan ne ek chitra sa baa diya mere man me..aisa laga maano kucch pla ke liye main bhi kho gaya hoon.. aapke ehsaas aur shabd dono hi bahut khoobsoorat lage... humesha ki tarah...  Saadgi se bhare shabdon ke liye meri Dher saari Daad aapke saathh hai..Likhti rahiyega!! Apna acche se khayal rakhiyega...Hav a nice time Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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3rd March 2005, 08:23 PM
Sukanya ji....
bahut khoob..... ek lakeer aur uski aadat.....kitni shiddat se aapne lafzon mein bayan kiya hai..... ye lakeer hi to hai jo baanti hai dilon ko..... ek naksha bana baanti hai doorion ko..... Aur jab dooriyan badti hain to faasle bhi rishton ke darmiyaan aa hi jaate hain..... khush rahiye..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Hi -
4th March 2005, 11:14 AM
Kunal bhai
Kaise ho ……….Sabse pehle tumney jo itne pyare Lafz likhe hain unkey liye apni di ki daad Kabul karna……….kya baat kahe hay ek lakeer sarhad nahin dil bant deti hay………ankhein ankhon ka haal jaan lete hain………..bahut acha likha hay………..Tumney isey jab shiksha wadi kaha bahut accha laga ki mainey kuch accha likha hay jo mere sweet little brother ko accha laga………..tumhara dil kush ho gaya mere kavita padhkar tum to di ko yeh keh kar bahut saree kushian de gaye ………haan tumney ek bahut badi sachai kahey hay yeh sab insaan ne bana diya jise khatm karna insaan ke bas mein nahin haan par muskurahat har jagah aaj bhi waise hi hay…..Apne bhai ki daad tahe dil se koobul hay……….Aaj bahut kushi hui tumhara reply dekhSada muskurate raho. Tumhari di |
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Namaskar -
4th March 2005, 06:20 PM
Namaskar Tanha ji
Pehle baar apni post par aapka reply dekha accha laga.Aapko Rachna achhi lagi bahut bahut dhanyawad…………..kitney sundar andaz mein aapney yeh bataya hay ki jaise pani mein lathi marney se pani alag nahin hota usey taranh mulkon ko alag nahin kiya ja sakta…..Hamare daad kabul kijeyga…….Haan donon mulkon ki Rooh to ek hi hay……..Haan jo beet gaya who kal tha aaney wala kal kushion ka paigam laye hum bhi aisey dua karainge……. Sada kush rahiye |
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Namaskar -
4th March 2005, 06:23 PM
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Aapko achi lagi hamare koshish bahut bahut dhanyawad………..haan asmaan mein ek dhuaein se khichey lakeer dekh hi kab yeh rachna sochi……..aur kagaz par utar dali pata hi nahin chala shayad yahi kalpana hay Aap bhi sada kush rahiye |
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Pulkit bhai kaise ho |
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Pulkit bhai kaise ho -
4th March 2005, 08:01 PM
Namaskar Pulkit bhai
main achii huun.......tum kaise ho ...........bahut achha laga jo ek bar phir tum mere post par aaye..........jab tum har panktiyon ke samuh ko alag alag dhan mein appreciate kartey ho bahut accha lagta hay.........mere shabd sundar lage thanks tumney bhi kunal jaise bahu sari kushian de di apni di ko.........ek chitra sa ban gaya tumharey zehan mein bahut acha lagaTake care di |
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Namaskar Aman ji -
5th March 2005, 06:59 PM
Namaskar Aman ji
Aap hamare post par aaye aur usey pasand kiya bahut bahut dhanyawad...............Aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hay ye lakeer hi to hai jo baanti hai dilon ko..... ek naksha bana baanti hai doorion ko..... Haan ek naksha bana banti hay dooriyon ko ek aur mod sa de diya aapne is rachna ko banti hay dooriyon ko.........Accha laga rachna ek aur mod..... Sada kush rahiye hamare duein aapkey sath hain |
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5th March 2005, 07:02 PM
Bahut accha likha aapne kuch kahunga is par
Kyun dosh dete hai hum Lakeeron ko Banane waale bhi hum aur mitane waale bhi hum......... bye tanha |
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Namaskar Tanha ji -
5th March 2005, 07:32 PM
Namaskar Tanha ji
Aaj pehle baar apni kisey post par aapka reply dekha ........accha laga ........Bahut khoob kaha hay aapne........ Kyun dosh dete hai hum Lakeeron ko Banane waale bhi hum aur mitane waale bhi hum......... Haan kya dosh unn lakeeron ka.......banane wali hum hain to sahe...par mitaney waley bhi hum hain........yahi dua hay sab kush rahein aur sabhey hath mila kar kushion se asmaan mein ek indradhanush jaise rang bharein .........phir koi lakeer nahin reh jayegi Sada kush rahein |
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