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aaj khalaaon mein hamein dar badar hona hai... -
24th February 2005, 12:41 PM
Kambakht unki daad ne kiya ghayal iss kadar
Ki mere ashaaron mein huyi rakam iss kadar
Chaliye bardasht kar lijiey phirse hamein…daad mein kuch kami ho tau hum idhar ka rukh na karein
aaj hamari dilkashi ka huq adaa hona hai
hasraton ki qabr mein aaj hamein sona hai
sath chalne se mere, teri be-wajah ruswaayi
isliye *behiss andheron mein mujhe khona hai
senseless
kal tere labon kee *halawat ne hamein louta
aaj tere lehje ki kadwahat pe hamein rona hai
deliciousness
sab pe *numaayaan mera dehtaa hua sa dil
tujhko hi, O mehram-e-dil bekhabar hona hai
evident
faiz ghairon ko tere lutf o enayat se mila
humne hi tere dar se, lekin *sifar dhona hai
zero(nothing)
alehda ho hi gaya jab dil mera, tere dil se
phir teri yeh tadap kaisi, kaisa yeh khona hai
aaja audha doon tujhe apne khwabon ka *qabaa
phir *khalaaon mein ‘paras’ ko dar badar hona hai
gown
emptiness
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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hi! -
24th February 2005, 01:06 PM
lajawab paras ji!..thts all ican say!
tc
komal
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24th February 2005, 01:54 PM
aaj hamari dilkashi ka huq adaa hona hai
hasraton ki qabr mein aaj hamein sona hai
sath chalne se mere, teri be-wajah ruswaayi
isliye behiss andheron mein mujhe khona hai
Waaah.. Paras
kal tere labon kee *halawat ne hamein louta
aaj tere lehje ki kadwahat pe hamein rona hai
sab pe *numaayaan mera dehtaa hua sa dil
tujhko hi, O mehram-e-dil bekhabar hona hai
Beautifulll words!!
faiz ghairon ko tere lutf o enayat se mila
humne hi tere dar se, lekin *sifar dhona hai
alehda ho hi gaya jab dil mera, tere dil se
phir teri yeh tadap kaisi, kaisa yeh khona hai
Waaah again... This is tooo good!!
aaja audha doon tujhe apne khwabon ka *qabaa
phir *khalaaon mein ‘paras’ ko dar badar hona hai
Hi Paras!!
Kaisi Ho? Hope u r doing fine This one is really veyr beautiful...Bahut hi accha likha hai tumne... Meri bahut saari daad kubool karna....
Par mujhe yeh nahi samajh aya ke Isme jhelne wali baat kahan se aayi... kaun sa part jhelna thha bhai? Well.. agar aisi shayri ko jhlena kehte hain... to koi kya likhe?
Neways... I loved this work of urs 2... Likhti Rehna... and do TC
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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24th February 2005, 04:14 PM
Hi Paras Ji,
Lo phir haazir hai aapse seekh lene ke liye. Aur aaj ki class mein toh kuch ziyaada hi mazaa ayaa. Behud khoobsurat aur nihayat umda kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne. Hmmmm agar aisay umda kalaam ko jhelna parega toh, Hum toh bohot hi khush hai aur humeshaa haazir rahenge jhelne ke liye
Khayal rakhiye aur khush rahiye.
Luvs,
Salim
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Re: aaj khalaaon mein hamein dar badar hona hai... -
24th February 2005, 05:17 PM
aaj hamari dilkashi ka huq adaa hona hai
hasraton ki qabr mein aaj hamein sona hai
sath chalne se mere, teri be-wajah ruswaayi
isliye *behiss andheron mein mujhe khona hai.....
WAAH..Paras ji bahoot hi umda sher aapne pesh kiye hain...meri bhi daad kabool farmayne..
-Vij
Quote:
Originally posted by Parastaar
Kambakht unki daad ne kiya ghayal iss kadar
Ki mere ashaaron mein huyi rakam iss kadar
Chaliye bardasht kar lijiey phirse hamein…daad mein kuch kami ho tau hum idhar ka rukh na karein
aaj hamari dilkashi ka huq adaa hona hai
hasraton ki qabr mein aaj hamein sona hai
sath chalne se mere, teri be-wajah ruswaayi
isliye *behiss andheron mein mujhe khona hai
senseless
kal tere labon kee *halawat ne hamein louta
aaj tere lehje ki kadwahat pe hamein rona hai
deliciousness
sab pe *numaayaan mera dehtaa hua sa dil
tujhko hi, O mehram-e-dil bekhabar hona hai
evident
faiz ghairon ko tere lutf o enayat se mila
humne hi tere dar se, lekin *sifar dhona hai
zero(nothing)
alehda ho hi gaya jab dil mera, tere dil se
phir teri yeh tadap kaisi, kaisa yeh khona hai
aaja audha doon tujhe apne khwabon ka *qabaa
phir *khalaaon mein ‘paras’ ko dar badar hona hai
gown
emptiness
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24th February 2005, 05:50 PM
sone aur rone main
khone aur hone main
dhota raha dil
aaNsoo apane hi,
gair ko kahkar ke apana
nakaari main usaki
karate rahe girebaaN
kaale hum apane hi.
as you write more and more personal
it becomes more and more universal.
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24th February 2005, 05:58 PM
Parastaar G Adaab,
Ummeed hai mijaaz sath khair ke honge, kafi khubsoorat kalaam nazar kiya hai aapne...aur yeh sher kafi pasand aaya...
sab pe *numaayaan mera dehtaa hua sa dil
tujhko hi, O mehram-e-dil bekhabar hona hai
yunn hi likhte rahiyega...Dua Go.
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Re: aaj khalaaon mein hamein dar badar hona hai... -
24th February 2005, 08:29 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by Parastaar
Kambakht unki daad ne kiya ghayal iss kadar
Ki mere ashaaron mein huyi rakam iss kadar
Chaliye bardasht kar lijiey phirse hamein…daad mein kuch kami ho tau hum idhar ka rukh na karein
aaj hamari dilkashi ka huq adaa hona hai
hasraton ki qabr mein aaj hamein sona hai
sath chalne se mere, teri be-wajah ruswaayi
isliye *behiss andheron mein mujhe khona hai
senseless
kal tere labon kee *halawat ne hamein louta
aaj tere lehje ki kadwahat pe hamein rona hai
deliciousness
sab pe *numaayaan mera dehtaa hua sa dil
tujhko hi, O mehram-e-dil bekhabar hona hai
evident
faiz ghairon ko tere lutf o enayat se mila
humne hi tere dar se, lekin *sifar dhona hai
zero(nothing)
alehda ho hi gaya jab dil mera, tere dil se
phir teri yeh tadap kaisi, kaisa yeh khona hai
aaja audha doon tujhe apne khwabon ka *qabaa
phir *khalaaon mein ‘paras’ ko dar badar hona hai
gown
emptiness
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meri paras,
tumhe bardaast karna gar yahi hai ... to prathna hai k tamaam umr yunhi bardaast lamhe gujre.........
khush raho
tumhari meena
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26th February 2005, 06:09 AM
komal jee...
waah kya khubsurat avataar chuna hai apne...shukriya mujhe padhne ka, saraahne ka...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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26th February 2005, 06:11 AM
Hello pulkit...
how are you...tumne avatar ko thoda sa change kiya...hai na? well very good...i like it...
haan tau tumhein meri nazm pasand aayi, tumne ise jhelaa uske liye bahut bahut shukriyaa...
aage bhi yoonhi jhelte rehna...kyunki mera nischay tau hai ki dard badhta rahe aur main likhti rahoon...
take care buddy mine...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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26th February 2005, 06:14 AM
Salam Salim Bhai...
malum hai mujhe...ki aap jhelne mein chookeinge nahin... isliey hum bhi apni dithaayi se baaj nahin aayeinge aur apko jhelne ke liye majboor karte raheinge...
shukriya bahut bahut...aur apna khayal rakhieyga...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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26th February 2005, 10:53 AM
Yeh Jhelna Jehlna kya hai yaar... Main complaint kar doonga tumhari Meena didi se.. Yahan par apni shayri ke liye aisa likhna sakhta mana hai... Please abide by the rules of Shayri.com
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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Yeh Jhelna Jehlna kya hai yaar... Main complaint kar doonga tumhari Meena didi se.. Yahan par apni shayri ke liye aisa likhna sakhta mana hai... Please abide by the rules of Shayri.com
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pulkit,
achha kiya tumne daant diya sahi waqt par..... maie bhi na jara jyada hi laad kar deti hu to bhul maaf kar deti hu . bas thhoda waqt mera dar raha ... ab fir paras wahi likhne lagegi to galat baat hui .
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5th March 2005, 07:06 PM
Namaskar paras ji
kaise hain aap.......aapkey yeh rachna dekhe dil ko chuu gayi................Aapkey yeh lafz ek dard sa de gaye........Hamare daad kabul kijeyga....
aaj hamari dilkashi ka huq adaa hona hai
hasraton ki qabr mein aaj hamein sona hai
sath chalne se mere, teri be-wajah ruswaayi
isliye *behiss andheron mein mujhe khona hai
Sada kush rahiye issey duaon ke sath
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5th March 2005, 07:12 PM
bahut accha likha aapne
aaj hamari dilkashi ka huq adaa hona hai
hasraton ki qabr mein aaj hamein sona hai
Tum to so gaye hastrat liye us qubr main
haal us dil ka pucho jise wo bhi naseeb nahi hoti
tadpata hai wo pal pal mar ke
magar dard_e_dil ko hasrat tak naseeb nahi hoti......
tanha
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Re: aaj khalaaon mein hamein dar badar hona hai... -
6th March 2005, 12:18 AM
Quote:
Originally posted by Parastaar
Kambakht unki daad ne kiya ghayal iss kadar
Ki mere ashaaron mein huyi rakam iss kadar
Chaliye bardasht kar lijiey phirse hamein…daad mein kuch kami ho tau hum idhar ka rukh na karein
aaj hamari dilkashi ka huq adaa hona hai
hasraton ki qabr mein aaj hamein sona hai
sath chalne se mere, teri be-wajah ruswaayi
isliye *behiss andheron mein mujhe khona hai
senseless
kal tere labon kee *halawat ne hamein louta
aaj tere lehje ki kadwahat pe hamein rona hai
deliciousness
sab pe *numaayaan mera dehtaa hua sa dil
tujhko hi, O mehram-e-dil bekhabar hona hai
evident
faiz ghairon ko tere lutf o enayat se mila
humne hi tere dar se, lekin *sifar dhona hai
zero(nothing)
alehda ho hi gaya jab dil mera, tere dil se
phir teri yeh tadap kaisi, kaisa yeh khona hai
aaja audha doon tujhe apne khwabon ka *qabaa
phir *khalaaon mein ‘paras’ ko dar badar hona hai
gown
emptiness
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hi aapa
der saari mithhiya
apko kahin nahi khona yahi rahna hai ham sab ke saath ok
achi rachana ..
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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6th March 2005, 03:57 AM
Shukriya Vij Sahib...
kaise hain aap? muaafi ki talabgaar hoon...bahut der baad aayi yahan...apke web page pe chakkar laga leti hoon kabhi kabaar...
very creative...and intense work i must say...
keep it up...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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6th March 2005, 04:00 AM
Quote:
Originally posted by paplupopat
sone aur rone main
khone aur hone main
dhota raha dil
aaNsoo apane hi,
gair ko kahkar ke apana
nakaari main usaki
karate rahe girebaaN
kaale hum apane hi.
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Waah kya khoob jawaabi daad hai..aur bilkul durust farma rahein hain aap...dhota raha dil aanso apne hee...humari bhi daad kabool farmayein...paplupopat sahib...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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6th March 2005, 04:04 AM
Talib sahib...
kaise hain? nazar e saani ke liye...shukrguzaar hoon...aksar maine dekha hai...aap sabse alag hee koyi sher choose karte hain mere kalaam mein se...aapko yeh sher achha laga...khushi huyi...
yoonhi kabhi kabaar padh liya kijiey hamein...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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6th March 2005, 04:07 AM
meri paras,
tumhe bardaast karna gar yahi hai ... to prathna hai k tamaam umr yunhi bardaast lamhe gujre.........
khush raho
tumhari meena
lol...meena jee...pyaari meena jee...
woh tau aise hee nikal gaya kalam se...waise bardaasht tau aap karti hain hamari har gustakhi ko...ismein koyi shaq nahin...aur uspe beshumaar pyaar bhi ataa karti hain...
apki paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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6th March 2005, 04:12 AM
ohhh...
abide by the shayri com rules haan....badaa aaya guru ko sikhaane...lol...
pullu...thanks for the warning...
and muaafi meena ji...bola na bus kalam se chuut gaya wo lafz pata hee nahin chala...nahin tau mera shayri mein kaun saani hai?
aise kahoon tau chalega?
ha ha ha...
paras
just kidding...main ek adna sa insaan khud ko shayraa samajhne kee gustakhi karti hoon......bus aur kuch nahin...
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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6th March 2005, 04:14 AM
Sukanya ji...
always love to see you on my post...aapne qeemti waqt nikal mujhe padhaa...bahut abhaari hoon...daad ke liye shukriyaa...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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6th March 2005, 04:16 AM
waah Tanha Sahib...
aap tau dard mein hamein peeche chode jaa rahe hain...pls yeh dard hamara hai...hamari inspiration...aur kuch nahin....
ek sundar jawaab ke liye shukriya....
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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6th March 2005, 04:19 AM
Lol Sakhi...meri gudiya...
kya hua? aaj tau bahut man hai re...ki kho hee jaaon...bus kisi ko na dikhoon...kahin nazar na aaon...
mithiyaan mujhse bhi leti jaao...bhagwaan tumhein hamesha khush rakhein...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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