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aise bhi bichadna hota hai..... - 20th January 2003, 06:06 PM

being a new member & ek sathi, ek humdard, ek sacha dost
who dont stem u in middle life jaisa kuch log karte hain..,
main kuch aap ki khid mein pesh karoonga..
aur yeh aap ki murzi ki aap ise thoda sa pyaar dein ya na dein...
leki main aap ki tawajjoh ka mohtaj rahoonga....

hum sub aise kitne logon ke bare mein jante honge, ya hum mein
se hi kitne aise log honge jo apne darde dil ki wajah sirf uske
dhoke ko batate hain, lekin kya kabhi humne yeh janne ki koshis
ki, kya tha uske dil mein ki woh humein tanha kar gaya....
maine bahot janne ki koshish ki, aur aaj tak nahin jaan paya

jub woh aakhri baar mili to maine usse uski bewafai ki wajah janni chahi,
mere sawal ke jawab mein uski aankhon me shabnam chalak aayi
aur main sirf uska masoom chehra dekhta reh gaya..
woh roti rahi main dekhta raha, woh us waqt kya kya keh gayi
main kuch nahi sun paya, sirf yahi sochta raha ki kya hum bhi
is tarha se juda ho sakten hain, kya hum bhi unme se honge,
jo apni mohabbat mein nakaam ho jaate hain
main yahisochta raha aur woh chali gayi...
uski aankhen aaj tak mujhko yaad hain
aur aaj main sirf uski yaadon ke liye jee raha hoon
kyonki main uski yadon se dhoka nahi kar sakta.......

kya aap kar sakte hain..........


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20th January 2003, 08:32 PM

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