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tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,......... - 4th July 2006, 07:48 PM

dosto meri nai gazal appkay naam......


tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,
janta hoon main tu meri kismat main nahi........

khoot ho mere pyaar main kaya patta,
lakin koi bhee kami meri ibadat main nahi......

uskay sitam bhee hass kay saho gilla mat karo,
yaar ki ruswai ka chalan chahat main nahi.....

tujhay bhool kar zamanay kay saath ho jaoun,
itni taqat zamanay ki mohabbat main nahi......

tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say,
ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi......

mat karo mera yakee iski garmi ko mehsoos karo,
na kaho mera lahoo teri hina ki milawat main nahi.......

mat karo'veer' ko dafan kouay jana main yaro,
dekhta hoon koi kami unki adawat main nahi......


appka dost raj.........


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4th July 2006, 08:04 PM

tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,
janta hoon main tu meri kismat main nahi........

tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say,
ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi......

bahut khoob raj ji,acha laga aapko padhkar.har sher lajawaab hai.
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5th July 2006, 10:56 AM

hi raj jee

kya baat he apne dil ka tama dard bahut hi khubsurat andaz main kaghaz par utar dala ye hunar bhi sabhi main nahi hota
lakin really apki ghazal bahut hi umda he padh kar bahut achha laga

tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,
janta hoon main tu meri kismat main nahi........
wahhhhhhh

tujhay bhool kar zamanay kay saath ho jaoun,
itni taqat zamanay ki mohabbat main nahi......
bahut hi pur asar

tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say,
ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi......
nice one

mat karo'veer' ko dafan kouay jana main yaro,
dekhta hoon koi kami unki adawat main nahi......
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5th July 2006, 01:17 PM

dear veer

lagta hai tumne bhee mohhabt ki hai, kyonki ithni gahrai, ase hi to nahi aa sakti.
main to naya join kiya hoon
bahut accha likte ho,
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shukria - 8th July 2006, 04:15 PM

jaan ji appko meri gazal pasand i appka bhut bhut shukria......yu hee hosla afzai kartay rehna......raj.....


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Re: tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,......... - 10th July 2006, 02:09 PM

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Originally posted by rajveeer
dosto meri nai gazal appkay naam......


tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,
janta hoon main tu meri kismat main nahi........

khoot ho mere pyaar main kaya patta,
lakin koi bhee kami meri ibadat main nahi......

uskay sitam bhee hass kay saho gilla mat karo,
yaar ki ruswai ka chalan chahat main nahi.....

tujhay bhool kar zamanay kay saath ho jaoun,
itni taqat zamanay ki mohabbat main nahi......

tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say,
ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi......

mat karo mera yakee iski garmi ko mehsoos karo,
na kaho mera lahoo teri hina ki milawat main nahi.......

mat karo'veer' ko dafan kouay jana main yaro,
dekhta hoon koi kami unki adawat main nahi......


appka dost raj.........
hi raj

bahut khoob, appki rachna to pyar mai dubi hue hai,

tujhay bhool kar zamanay kay saath ho jaoun,
itni taqat zamanay ki mohabbat main nahi......

tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say,
ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi......

pyar se bhari es rachna ke liye mubarkbaad kabool kijiye janab.


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shukria - 24th July 2006, 11:18 AM

rubeena ji raj tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hai...or umeed karta hai ki app yu hee meri hosla afzai karti raho gi......raj.....


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hi - 8th September 2006, 05:55 PM

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lagta hai tumne bhee mohhabt ki hai, kyonki ithni gahrai, ase hi to nahi aa sakti.
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Re: tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,......... - 8th September 2006, 10:34 PM

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Originally posted by rajveeer
dosto meri nai gazal appkay naam......


tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,
janta hoon main tu meri kismat main nahi........

khoot ho mere pyaar main kaya patta,
lakin koi bhee kami meri ibadat main nahi......

uskay sitam bhee hass kay saho gilla mat karo,
yaar ki ruswai ka chalan chahat main nahi.....

tujhay bhool kar zamanay kay saath ho jaoun,
itni taqat zamanay ki mohabbat main nahi......

tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say,
ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi......

mat karo mera yakee iski garmi ko mehsoos karo,
na kaho mera lahoo teri hina ki milawat main nahi.......

mat karo'veer' ko dafan kouay jana main yaro,
dekhta hoon koi kami unki adawat main nahi......


appka dost raj.........
kya baat hai veer ji. o tussi kamaal kar ditta aaj ji.
aur kuch nahi kahungi bas yahi ki aapne achha aur bahot aach alikha hai. bass

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hi - 10th September 2006, 01:36 AM

Achha likha hain dost ...
muzhe aapki yeh shayri kafi achhi lagi ....


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Re: tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,......... - 14th September 2006, 01:14 PM

Raj ji

aapki yah ghazakl man ko bahut bhayi... jitani tareef kerunga kam hi lagegi.. esi tarah aage bhi padhane ko milega mujhe.. aisi ummid kerta hoon....


tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,
janta hoon main tu meri kismat main nahi........

< bahut khub veer ji... love ki pahchan yahi hai... >

khoot ho mere pyaar main kyaa patta,
lakin koi bhee kami meri ibadat main nahi......

< tumhe pujunga es tarah... kya baat hai... aapki ibadat mein... >

uskay sitam bhee hass kay saho gilla mat karo,
yaar ki ruswai ka chalan chahat main nahi.....

< biswas sabse badi daulat hai... pyar mein dard ko sahana sabse jyada kimati cheej... >

tujhay bhool kar zamanay kay saath ho jaoun,
itni taqat zamanay ki mohabbat main nahi......

< estarah ka swarthipan hona hi chahiye... akhir yah lova ka sawal hai... >

tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say,
ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi......

< bas sath tumhara mere liye sabkuchh hai.. tumhara sath hona mere liye paripurnta ko dersata hai... >

mat karo mera yakee iski garmi ko mehsoos karo,
na kaho mera lahoo teri hina ki milawat main nahi.......

< behatreen lines...... >

mat karo'veer' ko dafan kouay jana main yaro,
dekhta hoon koi kami unki adawat main nahi......

< dafan hoker bhi amar rahega... per aatma rupi sharir to hamesha tere sath rahega.. so mujhe dafan mat kero... kal ko pachatana na pad jaay.. >



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Re: tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,......... - 15th September 2006, 06:19 AM

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dosto meri nai gazal appkay naam......


tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,
janta hoon main tu meri kismat main nahi........

khoot ho mere pyaar main kaya patta,
lakin kami meri ibadat main nahi......

uskay sitam bhee hass kay saho gilla mat karo,
yaar ki ruswai ka chalan chahat main nahi.....

tujhay bhool kar zamanay kay saath ho jaoun,
itni taqat zamanay ki mohabbat main nahi......

tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say,
ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi......

mat karo mera yakee iski garmi ko mehsoos karo,
na kaho mera lahoo teri hina ki milawat main nahi.......

mat karo'veer' ko dafan kouay jana main yaro,
dekhta hoon koi kami unki adawat main nahi......


appka dost raj.........

aadaab raj bhai,

kaise hain? umeed karta hun khairiyat se hi honge.maafi ka talabdaar hun ki aapki mehfil me itni dino baad aaye.

bhai aapne jo matla likha usne dil me ched kar diya,aagaaz bahut hi khoobsurat tha.par saara kalaam us khoobsurati ko shayad barkaraar nahi rakh paya.bhai jaan maine pehle v kaha tha aapse ki kabhi kabhi aapke sheron me kuch alfaaz thoonse hue lagte hain.jinhe aap hata do to sher aur v khhobsurat ho jayega aur jinki koi jaroorat nahi kalaam me.aapko main udahran deta hun.

aapka matla hai......

tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,
janta hoon main tu meri kismat main nahi........

isme ddosre misre se agar aap main hata den to dekhiye isme jyada asar hota hai ya nahi,aur doosri baat hai yahaan ye known hi ki aap apne bare me keh rahe hain,isiliye ye shabd hata dene se koi fark nahi padta.

tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,
janta hoon tu meri kismat main nahi........

waise hi ddosre sher me bhi thoonsa hua lagta hai.aise hi aap dekhna kuch kuch shabd kitna kam kar dete hain teekhapan sheron ki.

agar koi v baat meri aapko buri lage to main aapse us baat ke liye maafi ka talabdar hun.umeed karta hun ki aap aage v yunhi likhte rahenge.............



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15th September 2006, 11:10 AM

hi big b aapki peskas ye bahot hi badhiya hai aaapki peshkas me ehsas basta hai

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frnd 4 ever - 16th September 2006, 09:24 PM

hi raj ,,kaise hain aap,


***** tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say,********
ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi......

mat karo mera yakee iski garmi ko mehsoos karo,
na kaho mera lahoo teri hina ki milawat main nahi.......



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hi - 23rd September 2006, 12:23 PM

hi raj

bahut khoob, appki rachna to pyar mai dubi hue hai,

tujhay bhool kar zamanay kay saath ho jaoun,
itni taqat zamanay ki mohabbat main nahi......

tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say,
ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi......

pyar se bhari es rachna ke liye mubarkbaad kabool kijiye janab.


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hi - 17th October 2006, 06:58 PM

Hi veer

how r u i am fine tume hara likha hamesha ki tarha bhoteh i aacha hai dil ko choogaya nice work keep it up.

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muskaan ajj kal app kahan ho bhut din huye app kahin dikhai hee nahi deti...appne mujhe parha or pasand kiya iske liye main appka shukar guzaar hoon....yu hee saath dete rehna.....take care.....raj.....


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17th October 2006, 09:54 PM

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dosto meri nai gazal appkay naam......


tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,
janta hoon main tu meri kismat main nahi........

khoot ho mere pyaar main kaya patta,
lakin koi bhee kami meri ibadat main nahi......

uskay sitam bhee hass kay saho gilla mat karo,
yaar ki ruswai ka chalan chahat main nahi.....

tujhay bhool kar zamanay kay saath ho jaoun,
itni taqat zamanay ki mohabbat main nahi......

tum aa jao jo is main to keh doon khuda say,
ab koi kami mere ghar ki banawat main nahi......

mat karo mera yakee iski garmi ko mehsoos karo,
na kaho mera lahoo teri hina ki milawat main nahi.......

mat karo'veer' ko dafan kouay jana main yaro,
dekhta hoon koi kami unki adawat main nahi......


appka dost raj.........

rajveer ji ko mera salaam...
Ek bahoot hi sunder kalaam ko anjaam diya hai aapne.....

tujhay bhool jana meri fitrat main nahi,
janta hoon main tu meri kismat main nahi........

khoot ho mere pyaar main kaya patta,
lakin koi bhee kami meri ibadat main nahi......


bahoot hi sunder ahsaas....


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hi - 24th October 2006, 12:40 PM

woooow kooool yaar
keep it up

cute girl app meri post par i mujhe parha or pasand kiya main tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hoon yu hee saath dete rehna......raj,....


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