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kabhi wafaon ki doli utthi, kabhi armanon ki artthhi sajti hai.. - 7th November 2006, 03:58 PM

mere sabhi badon ko saadar pranaam aur doston ko namaskaar,
aaj mein fir ek kalaam lekar iss mehafil me haziir hu. mere dost dilip ji ne do line ka sher likha thha vo kuch yun thha...


mohabbat ki hawa chalati hai, har patte ko hawaa lagti hai,
inkar kare wo chaahe kitna, seene main aag to sulagti hai...


isi sher ko ek gazal ki shakal me mein apke samne pesh kar rahi hu...gazal ki shuruvaat dilip ji ke isi sher se hogi...ok ji
---------------------gaour kijiye ji


mohabbat ki hawa chalati hai, har patte ko hawaa lagti hai,
inkar kare wo chaahe kitna, seene main aag to sulagti hai...

tere naam se saans chati hai,yaadon me shaam dhalti hai,
kabhi wafaon ki doli utthi, kabhi armanon ki artthhi sajti hai..

saaki hum tere dar pe ate hai, pine nahi use bhulne ate hai,
aur tu deke du'haai usi be'wffa yaar ki, har jaam bharti hai...

katl karna tha to khanjar se kiya hota, jaan nikalti ek hi bar,
til-til marta dekh hanske kahate hai log, lash bhi marti hai....

are bedardi!! chala to gaya magar khata kya hui ye batata,
kami thi meri wafa me? ye saval kar kar ke ruh pighalti hai..

sarmaya de gaya dukhon ka, khushiyan uu’dhaar le gaya,
na aana samne, tujhe dekhne se nazar bhi sharm karti hai…

tabaahii kaa aalam dekh dekh tuu muskuaata raha wahan,
sab jal gayaa “pooja”,rakh karke ab sirf dhunva utth'ti hai..

grazie

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7th November 2006, 04:07 PM

pooja ji

pehle to main mere dost dilip ko mubarakbad deta hu k itna achha sher likha uspe se aapne puri gazal bana di

aapka jawab nahi maan gaye!!!!!!!

dard ko bayan karne me aap to badi mahir hai ..bina dard mile aap itna achha likh sakti ho bahot khub!!!
puri gazal kabile tarif hai

achha laga padhke aur khusi bhi hui mujhe bahot jab aap itna achha likhti ho achha lagta hai

tere naam se saans chati hai,yaadon me shaam dhalti hai,
kabhi wafaon ki doli utthi, kabhi armanon ki artthhi sajti hai..

sarmaya de gaya dukhon ka, khushiyan uu’dhaar le gaya,
na aana samne, tujhe dekhne se nazar bhi sharm karti hai…


ye do sher bahot hi pasand aaye mujhe

dil se nikali daad kubul kijiyenga
KHUS RAHO

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mere sabhi badon ko saadar pranaam aur doston ko namaskaar,
aaj mein fir ek kalaam lekar iss mehafil me haziir hu. mere dost dilip ji ne do line ka sher likha thha vo kuch yun thha...


mohabbat ki hawa chalati hai, har patte ko hawaa lagti hai,
inkar kare wo chaahe kitna, seene main aag to sulagti hai...


isi sher ko ek gazal ki shakal me mein apke samne pesh kar rahi hu...gazal ki shuruvaat dilip ji ke isi sher se hogi...ok ji
---------------------gaour kijiye ji


mohabbat ki hawa chalati hai, har patte ko hawaa lagti hai,
inkar kare wo chaahe kitna, seene main aag to sulagti hai...

tere naam se saans chati hai,yaadon me shaam dhalti hai,
kabhi wafaon ki doli utthi, kabhi armanon ki artthhi sajti hai..

saaki hum tere dar pe ate hai, pine nahi use bhulne ate hai,
aur tu deke du'haai usi be'wffa yaar ki, har jaam bharti hai...

katl karna tha to khanjar se kiya hota, jaan nikalti ek hi bar,
til-til marta dekh hanske kahate hai log, lash bhi marti hai....

are bedardi!! chala to gaya magar khata kya hui ye batata,
kami thi meri wafa me? ye saval kar kar ke ruh pighalti hai..

sarmaya de gaya dukhon ka, khushiyan uu’dhaar le gaya,
na aana samne, tujhe dekhne se nazar bhi sharm karti hai…

tabaahii kaa aalam dekh dekh tuu muskuaata raha wahan,
sab jal gayaa “pooja”,rakh karke ab sirf dhunva utth'ti hai..

grazie

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7th November 2006, 11:35 PM

wow.... very nice

hiii Pooja,

bahut achha likha hai. khaas kar yeh sher

tere naam se saans chati hai,yaadon me shaam dhalti hai,
kabhi wafaon ki doli utthi, kabhi armanon ki artthhi sajti hai..

really excellent... you should have post in dard section, khair meri dher saari daad kubul karo aur yun hi likhti raho.

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pooja ji

pehle to main mere dost dilip ko mubarakbad deta hu k itna achha sher likha uspe se aapne puri gazal bana di

aapka jawab nahi maan gaye!!!!!!!

dard ko bayan karne me aap to badi mahir hai ..bina dard mile aap itna achha likh sakti ho bahot khub!!!
puri gazal kabile tarif hai

achha laga padhke aur khusi bhi hui mujhe bahot jab aap itna achha likhti ho achha lagta hai

tere naam se saans chati hai,yaadon me shaam dhalti hai,
kabhi wafaon ki doli utthi, kabhi armanon ki artthhi sajti hai..

sarmaya de gaya dukhon ka, khushiyan uu’dhaar le gaya,
na aana samne, tujhe dekhne se nazar bhi sharm karti hai…


ye do sher bahot hi pasand aaye mujhe

dil se nikali daad kubul kijiyenga
KHUS RAHO

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dilip ji dhaval ki pahali daad apke liye.......haa dhaval mujhe yun to koi gam nahi fir bhi dard kalaam likhti hu.mein mahobbat ko aur khushiyon ko to bayan kar hi nahi sakti. isi liye....khaai apko ye do sher pasand aye meri khush nasibi...aapki daad mujhe kabuul hai dil se...........ok ji

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dilip ji dhaval ki pahali daad apke liye.......haa dhaval mujhe yun to koi gam nahi fir bhi dard kalaam likhti hu.mein mahobbat ko aur khushiyon ko to bayan kar hi nahi sakti. isi liye....khaai apko ye do sher pasand aye meri khush nasibi...aapki daad mujhe kabuul hai dil se...........ok ji

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wow.... very nice

hiii Pooja,

bahut achha likha hai. khaas kar yeh sher

tere naam se saans chati hai,yaadon me shaam dhalti hai,
kabhi wafaon ki doli utthi, kabhi armanon ki artthhi sajti hai..

really excellent... you should have post in dard section, khair meri dher saari daad kubul karo aur yun hi likhti raho.

take care!
kya soubhagya hai mera ki aaj aap meri post pe aai. apko yahan dekh ke bahot khushi hui. apne ise pasand kiya sukriya ji aur apko nahi pata mujhe to dard forum me shayri likhna mana hai. agar mujhe vahan dekh liya veer ji ne yaa sunita di ya dilip ji ya dhaval ne to meri shaamat kar denge vo

aapki dher saari daad mujhe dil se kabuul hai ji

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mere sabhi badon ko saadar pranaam aur doston ko namaskaar,
aaj mein fir ek kalaam lekar iss mehafil me haziir hu. mere dost dilip ji ne do line ka sher likha thha vo kuch yun thha...


mohabbat ki hawa chalati hai, har patte ko hawaa lagti hai,
inkar kare wo chaahe kitna, seene main aag to sulagti hai...


isi sher ko ek gazal ki shakal me mein apke samne pesh kar rahi hu...gazal ki shuruvaat dilip ji ke isi sher se hogi...ok ji
---------------------gaour kijiye ji


mohabbat ki hawa chalati hai, har patte ko hawaa lagti hai,
inkar kare wo chaahe kitna, seene main aag to sulagti hai...

tere naam se saans chati hai,yaadon me shaam dhalti hai,
kabhi wafaon ki doli utthi, kabhi armanon ki artthhi sajti hai..

saaki hum tere dar pe ate hai, pine nahi use bhulne ate hai,
aur tu deke du'haai usi be'wffa yaar ki, har jaam bharti hai...

katl karna tha to khanjar se kiya hota, jaan nikalti ek hi bar,
til-til marta dekh hanske kahate hai log, lash bhi marti hai....

are bedardi!! chala to gaya magar khata kya hui ye batata,
kami thi meri wafa me? ye saval kar kar ke ruh pighalti hai..

sarmaya de gaya dukhon ka, khushiyan uu’dhaar le gaya,
na aana samne, tujhe dekhne se nazar bhi sharm karti hai…

tabaahii kaa aalam dekh dekh tuu muskuaata raha wahan,
sab jal gayaa “pooja”,rakh karke ab sirf dhunva utth'ti hai..

grazie

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dear pooja
main aapki is gazal per kyakahoon bus itna hi kahna chahta hoon
tumne is khamosh sher ko aawaz dedi. wakai shayad main bhi yadi isper gazal ikhane ki koshih karta to likh na pata.
bahut khoobsurat anjam diya hai tumne ise
daad hazir hai kabool farmaiye

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8th November 2006, 09:43 AM

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mere sabhi badon ko saadar pranaam aur doston ko namaskaar,
aaj mein fir ek kalaam lekar iss mehafil me haziir hu. mere dost dilip ji ne do line ka sher likha thha vo kuch yun thha...


mohabbat ki hawa chalati hai, har patte ko hawaa lagti hai,
inkar kare wo chaahe kitna, seene main aag to sulagti hai...


isi sher ko ek gazal ki shakal me mein apke samne pesh kar rahi hu...gazal ki shuruvaat dilip ji ke isi sher se hogi...ok ji
---------------------gaour kijiye ji


mohabbat ki hawa chalati hai, har patte ko hawaa lagti hai,
inkar kare wo chaahe kitna, seene main aag to sulagti hai...

tere naam se saans chati hai,yaadon me shaam dhalti hai,
kabhi wafaon ki doli utthi, kabhi armanon ki artthhi sajti hai..

saaki hum tere dar pe ate hai, pine nahi use bhulne ate hai,
aur tu deke du'haai usi be'wffa yaar ki, har jaam bharti hai...

katl karna tha to khanjar se kiya hota, jaan nikalti ek hi bar,
til-til marta dekh hanske kahate hai log, lash bhi marti hai....

are bedardi!! chala to gaya magar khata kya hui ye batata,
kami thi meri wafa me? ye saval kar kar ke ruh pighalti hai..

sarmaya de gaya dukhon ka, khushiyan uu’dhaar le gaya,
na aana samne, tujhe dekhne se nazar bhi sharm karti hai…

tabaahii kaa aalam dekh dekh tuu muskuaata raha wahan,
sab jal gayaa “pooja”,rakh karke ab sirf dhunva utth'ti hai..

grazie

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dear dilip,

pooja ne yeh gazal bahut acchi tarah puri ki hai, par pooja se phele tumey mubarkbaad dena chahti hu ki tumne etne aachi shuruyaat ki aur pooja ne usko utni hi aachi tarah anzaam diya. mubarak ho.

tumhari didi


wowwwwwwww........!

great........................!

hey meri matko rani, yeh tumne likha hai, bahut pasand aaya mujhe, dekh pooja tu esko shayri-e-dard mai.n post kar, mai.n tujhe es liye manna karti hu jab tu aapne pyar se naraz hokar dard likhti hai. ha agar sirf as a shayri likhtey to mujhe koi eitraaj nahi hai. mai.n chati hu ki aapko sab padey to tumhari housla-afjaei karey. mujhe kushi hoti hai jab aap log accha likhtey ho. samji meri gudiya rani.

es ko sahyri-e-dard mai.n post kar abhi.

meri aur se tujhe pyar se galey lagga kar mubarakbaad aur mithi se parri bhi

kush raho aur yu hi accha accha likhti raho.

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dear dilip,

pooja ne yeh gazal bahut acchi tarah puri ki hai, par pooja se phele tumey mubarkbaad dena chahti hu ki tumne etne aachi shuruyaat ki aur pooja ne usko utni hi aachi tarah anzaam diya. mubarak ho.

tumhari didi


wowwwwwwww........!

great........................!

hey meri matko rani, yeh tumne likha hai, bahut pasand aaya mujhe, dekh pooja tu esko shayri-e-dard mai.n post kar, mai.n tujhe es liye manna karti hu jab tu aapne pyar se naraz hokar dard likhti hai. ha agar sirf as a shayri likhtey to mujhe koi eitraaj nahi hai. mai.n chati hu ki aapko sab padey to tumhari housla-afjaei karey. mujhe kushi hoti hai jab aap log accha likhtey ho. samji meri gudiya rani.

es ko sahyri-e-dard mai.n post kar abhi.

meri aur se tujhe pyar se galey lagga kar mubarakbaad aur mithi se parri bhi

kush raho aur yu hi accha accha likhti raho.

teri didi


hanji sister sahi kaha aapne

pooja is post ko shayri e dard me submit karo

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dear pooja
main aapki is gazal per kyakahoon bus itna hi kahna chahta hoon
tumne is khamosh sher ko aawaz dedi. wakai shayad main bhi yadi isper gazal ikhane ki koshih karta to likh na pata.
bahut khoobsurat anjam diya hai tumne ise
daad hazir hai kabool farmaiye

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8th November 2006, 08:44 PM

hmmm great pooja ji,yr title sayz it all.acha laga padhkar.likhti rahiye yunhun.
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pooja ji aapne bahot achha likha hai

"tere naam se saans chati hai,yaadon me shaam dhalti hai,
kabhi wafaon ki doli utthi, kabhi armanon ki artthhi sajti hai..
saaki hum tere dar pe ate hai, pine nahi use bhulne ate hai,
aur tu deke du'haai usi be'wffa yaar ki, har jaam bharti hai..."
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mohabbat aur khusiyo ko kyu bayan nahi kar sakti???????

kisine mana kiya hai kya?

mana to nahi kiya. lekin mujhe kisine itni mahobbat di aur usi ki mahobbat khushi bani hai mere liye use mein lafzo me bayan nahi kar sakti. shabd hi nahi hote fir kaise likhu. aur darti hu agar kuch likha to kisiki nazar na lag jaye meri khushiyon ko.

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Hey.......! My Soni Di - 10th November 2006, 12:16 AM

dear dilip,

pooja ne yeh gazal bahut acchi tarah puri ki hai, par pooja se phele tumey mubarkbaad dena chahti hu ki tumne etne aachi shuruyaat ki aur pooja ne usko utni hi aachi tarah anzaam diya. mubarak ho.

tumhari didi


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hey meri matko rani, yeh tumne likha hai, bahut pasand aaya mujhe, dekh pooja tu esko shayri-e-dard mai.n post kar, mai.n tujhe es liye manna karti hu jab tu aapne pyar se naraz hokar dard likhti hai. ha agar sirf as a shayri likhtey to mujhe koi eitraaj nahi hai. mai.n chati hu ki aapko sab padey to tumhari housla-afjaei karey. mujhe kushi hoti hai jab aap log accha likhtey ho. samji meri gudiya rani.

es ko sahyri-e-dard mai.n post kar abhi.

meri aur se tujhe pyar se galey lagga kar mubarakbaad aur mithi se parri bhi

kush raho aur yu hi accha accha likhti raho.

teri didi

di bilkul thik kaha aapne.dilip ji ne mujhe achhi shuruaat di aur meine gazal bana di.. thanku dilip ji

apke itne bade wowwwwwwww ke liye bada sa thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.......!

ha ye meine likha. aur sahi kaha apne ye sirf ehasaas hai jo kagaz par utar ayen hai. pyaar me to USNE mujhe koi dukh nahi diya. mere pyaar se mujhe koi gila nahi hai.

hmm kar diya ji ise dard forum me bhi post kar diya.

aapki mubarakbaad mujhe dili se kabuul hai di.

grazie

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shayri - 10th November 2006, 10:47 AM

mohabat karna sikhaya ussne hume, par mohabat bhulna na sikhaya, hum kar baithe mohabat unse, par mohabat karke bhi unhe na paya.

Aapke aashiyana hum ne dil me basa rakha hai, aapki yaadon ko seene se laga rakha hai, pata nahi aap ki yaad aati hai kyon, dost toh humne auron ko bhi bana rakha hai.
   
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pooja is post ko shayri e dard me submit karo

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hmmm great pooja ji,yr title sayz it all.acha laga padhkar.likhti rahiye yunhun.
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pooja ji aapne bahot achha likha hai

"tere naam se saans chati hai,yaadon me shaam dhalti hai,
kabhi wafaon ki doli utthi, kabhi armanon ki artthhi sajti hai..
saaki hum tere dar pe ate hai, pine nahi use bhulne ate hai,
aur tu deke du'haai usi be'wffa yaar ki, har jaam bharti hai..."
aapki urdu zuban ismai aur bhi khubsurti aur badhai daal deti hai bus uhi likte rahiye
aapka dost
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ji meri urdu achhi nahi hai lekin fir bhi koshish ki aur apko pasand aya shukriya ji....

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mohabat karna sikhaya ussne hume, par mohabat bhulna na sikhaya, hum kar baithe mohabat unse, par mohabat karke bhi unhe na paya.

Aapke aashiyana hum ne dil me basa rakha hai, aapki yaadon ko seene se laga rakha hai, pata nahi aap ki yaad aati hai kyon, dost toh humne auron ko bhi bana rakha hai.
ronak aagai apki in do sher se..................thanku ji

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tere naam se saans chati hai,yaadon me shaam dhalti hai,
kabhi wafaon ki doli utthi, kabhi armanon ki artthhi sajti hai..


are bedardi!! chala to gaya magar khata kya hui ye batata,
kami thi meri wafa me? ye saval kar kar ke ruh pighalti hai..


BEHAD ACCHI LAGI HAME AAPKI YE GHAZAL POOJA JI.....KHAAS TAUR PER YE DO SHER DIL KO CHU GAYE...YUHI LIKHTI RAHIYE.....

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