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Bachi kis dil mein sachayi khuda aakar tu bhi dekh zara - 22nd January 2007, 09:47 PM

Shayri Parivaar ko mera sader Namaskar

Aaj phir apni ek rachna aapkey samukh rakh rahi huun...issey asha ke sath ki sachayi ki kuch kirane liye yeh rachna sachayi ke darr par ek dastak zaroor karegi.......kayi swaal khuda se kartey kartey yeh rachna likhti gayi...umeed hay aapki ashaon ke anuroop iss rachna ki roshani hogi...

Sada kush rahiye
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Khuda aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Khuda Kaise Duniya Banayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara
Jhuut se insaan de raha Safayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Khuda Kaise Fiza Lehrayi nahin dikhta koi apna yahan
Chal rahi Insanon ki Ladayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Saja raha tha babul doli gudiya ki umeedon ke sath
Daheej ne Zindagi sabki hilayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Yeh baat aur hay jee raha pinjare ka panchi kabse
Diwaarein Rivayaton ne banayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Khuda Kaise kaynaat Dikhayi nahin koi gulistan Yahan
Kat rahi har shaakh Lagayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Bik gayi bastiyaan karz chukatey chukatey Yahan
De raha kabse kisan duhayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Bhuul jaun main kaise sabak ‘Jhuut par Satya ki Vijay’
Khuda kaise duniya dikhayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Har mod khul rahi kitaab sach ki Sukanya tere aagey
Bachi kis dil mein sachayi khuda aakar tu bhi dekh zara


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23rd January 2007, 12:16 PM

Khuda aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Khuda Kaise Duniya Banayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara
Jhuut se insaan de raha Safayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Khuda Kaise Fiza Lehrayi nahin dikhta koi apna yahan
Chal rahi Insanon ki Ladayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Saja raha tha babul doli gudiya ki umeedon ke sath
Daheej ne Zindagi sabki hilayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Yeh baat aur hay jee raha pinjare ka panchi kabse
Diwaarein Rivayaton ne banayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Khuda Kaise kaynaat Dikhayi nahin koi gulistan Yahan
Kat rahi har shaakh Lagayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Bik gayi bastiyaan karz chukatey chukatey Yahan
De raha kabse kisan duhayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Bhuul jaun main kaise sabak ‘Jhuut par Satya ki Vijay’
Khuda kaise duniya dikhayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Har mod khul rahi kitaab sach ki Sukanya tere aagey
Bachi kis dil mein sachayi khuda aakar tu bhi dekh zara
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khuda ne to duniya achi banai thi magar ham insaanoin ne use is kadar bigad diya hai ki woh khud ab apni duniya ko nahi pahchan payega aur pahchan gya to dukhi hi hoga.
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bhut khub - 23rd January 2007, 07:41 PM

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Shayri Parivaar ko mera sader Namaskar

Aaj phir apni ek rachna aapkey samukh rakh rahi huun...issey asha ke sath ki sachayi ki kuch kirane liye yeh rachna sachayi ke darr par ek dastak zaroor karegi.......kayi swaal khuda se kartey kartey yeh rachna likhti gayi...umeed hay aapki ashaon ke anuroop iss rachna ki roshani hogi...

Sada kush rahiye
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Khuda aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Khuda Kaise Duniya Banayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara
Jhuut se insaan de raha Safayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Khuda Kaise Fiza Lehrayi nahin dikhta koi apna yahan
Chal rahi Insanon ki Ladayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Saja raha tha babul doli gudiya ki umeedon ke sath
Daheej ne Zindagi sabki hilayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

ye share bhut pyaara bana hai wah kyaa baat hai ek gehrii sacchai......

Yeh baat aur hay jee raha pinjare ka panchi kabse
Diwaarein Rivayaton ne banayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Khuda Kaise kaynaat Dikhayi nahin koi gulistan Yahan
Kat rahi har shaakh Lagayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Bik gayi bastiyaan karz chukatey chukatey Yahan
De raha kabse kisan duhayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Bhuul jaun main kaise sabak ‘Jhuut par Satya ki Vijay’
Khuda kaise duniya dikhayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Har mod khul rahi kitaab sach ki Sukanya tere aagey
Bachi kis dil mein sachayi khuda aakar tu bhi dekh zara
or makta to kamaal ka bana hai.....sukanya ji aapko aksar parta hoon aapke khyaal bhut gehre hote hain or dil mein bhut gehre uttar jaate hain......is purkashish kalaam pe meri dil se daad kabool kijiyega.......raj........


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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23rd January 2007, 10:13 PM

sukanya ji namskaar

sukanya ji bahot hi gehraayioN se aap aapne dil meiN basi hui baatoN ko keh dete haiN , maiN sakhi ji ki kahi hui baatoN se sehmat huN ke khuda ki banayi hui is duniya ki insaano ne kadar nahi ki

aapko is sacchai ke sath paRh ke achha laga

apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazat

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khuda ne to duniya achi banai thi magar ham insaanoin ne use is kadar bigad diya hai ki woh khud ab apni duniya ko nahi pahchan payega aur pahchan gya to dukhi hi hoga.
suchhai likhhe ke liye shukriya.
sakhi
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Meri Rachna ki sachayi ki Roshani tum tak pahunchi yeh dekh bahut kushi hui......Haan sakhi khuda ne to duniya achi banayi thi magar kitni batein duniya ka roop badal detey hain......hum sari duniya ka roop to nahin badal saktey par ek koshish kar saktey hain....aur sachayi ke path par chalney ki koshish yeh roshani dikha deti hay......Thanks for replying.....

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or makta to kamaal ka bana hai.....sukanya ji aapko aksar parta hoon aapke khyaal bhut gehre hote hain or dil mein bhut gehre uttar jaate hain......is purkashish kalaam pe meri dil se daad kabool kijiyega.......raj........
Namaskar Rajveer ji

Aapne mere rachna parhi uska shukriya.....yeh sunkar acha laga ki aap aksar mere rachnayein parhtey hain......haan my words have a deep meaning...pata nahin iss rachna ka deep meaning kitney log samagh paye hoon....iss rachna ke do sher bahut touching hain....jo hain...

Saja raha tha babul doli gudiya ki umeedon ke sath
Daheej ne Zindagi sabki hilayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Yeh baat aur hay jee raha pinjare ka panchi kabse
Diwaarein Rivayaton ne banayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara.....


The first sher illustrates the dowry system(Dahej pratha)....and the second one illustrates what a girl goes through when she is a widow(vidhva)....jab rachna banayi thi tab sabse pehle yahi do sher baney thay....aur jab rachna ki udaan chalti gayi to aur sher judtey gaye......Thanks for reading...

God bless u


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sukanya ji namskaar

sukanya ji bahot hi gehraayioN se aap aapne dil meiN basi hui baatoN ko keh dete haiN , maiN sakhi ji ki kahi hui baatoN se sehmat huN ke khuda ki banayi hui is duniya ki insaano ne kadar nahi ki

aapko is sacchai ke sath paRh ke achha laga

apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazat

aapka dost
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Aapne mere iss rachna ko parha uske liye bahut bahut shukriya........mere rachna gehrayiyaan liye kuch batein keh jati hain ....aapne iss rachna ki gehrayi samghi jaankar acha laga.....sachayi par likhney ki prerna kab mil jaye kaun janey....ek din mughey bhi yeh rachna likhney ki prerna mile to bas kalam likhta gaya.....mughey kushi hay iss rachna ki roshani aap tak bhi pahunchi......thanks for reading

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hi sukanya ji

wah sukanya ji wah aapne ismein kaha hai ki kabhi aakar dekh zara...

mat bulao yaar is khuda ko sakhi ji ne sahi kaha hai ki agar wo aapni is banayi dunia ko agar pehchan bhi gaya to wo use is halat mein dekh kar bada dhuki hoga, hum to is zaleem jamane ko wese bhi seh lete hai magar mere khyal se wo khuda bhi is dunia ko dekhke tut jayega

aapne bahut sahi likha hai...

aapke is dard bhari nazm ka mein kuch is tarah se javaab dena pasand karuga ki aapka ye bhari dil thoda sa to halka hoo.....
gaur ki jiyega....

Khuda Kaise Duniya Banayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara
Jhuut se insaan de raha Safayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Ek din khuda ne insaan se kaha kabhi ishq mat karna,
Dewaana ban jayega,
Tabhi insaan bola,
Kabhi dewaana banker to dekh tu bhi insaan ban jayega.


Khuda Kaise Fiza Lehrayi nahin dikhta koi apna yahan
Chal rahi Insanon ki Ladayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Ae mere humnasin chal kahin aur chal,
Is chaman me ab apna guzara nahin,
Baat hoti gulon tak to seh lete hum,
Ab to kanto pe bhi haq hamara nahin.


Saja raha tha babul doli gudiya ki umeedon ke sath
Daheej ne Zindagi sabki hilayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Barbad-e-dunia ko fir basayenge,
hasin wadiya hasin nazare fir aawaaz lagayenge,
Dar na tu dastan-e-dunia ko dekhkar
Ek nai dulhan ki tarah fir use sajayenge.


Yeh baat aur hay jee raha pinjare ka panchi kabse
Diwaarein Rivayaton ne banayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Sanam chahe zindagi se bas itna,
Ek muththi mein kaid kar lu, ye aasman hai jitna,
Sanam ki dastaan aaj itni hi sahi,
Aasman ke panchi pinjre mein kaid nahi.


Bik gayi bastiyaan karz chukatey chukatey Yahan
De raha kabse kisan duhayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Har karz dosti ka kaun ada karenga,
Jab hum hi naa rahenge to dosti kaun karenga,
Ae khuda mere doston ko rakhna salamat,
Varna mere jine ki dua kaun karenga.


ese hi sath dete rehna
aapke javab ka intezzarr rahega
aapka dost
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Shayri Parivaar ko mera sader Namaskar

Aaj phir apni ek rachna aapkey samukh rakh rahi huun...issey asha ke sath ki sachayi ki kuch kirane liye yeh rachna sachayi ke darr par ek dastak zaroor karegi.......kayi swaal khuda se kartey kartey yeh rachna likhti gayi...umeed hay aapki ashaon ke anuroop iss rachna ki roshani hogi...

Sada kush rahiye
Sukanya


Khuda aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Khuda Kaise Duniya Banayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara
Jhuut se insaan de raha Safayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Khuda Kaise Fiza Lehrayi nahin dikhta koi apna yahan
Chal rahi Insanon ki Ladayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Saja raha tha babul doli gudiya ki umeedon ke sath
Daheej ne Zindagi sabki hilayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Yeh baat aur hay jee raha pinjare ka panchi kabse
Diwaarein Rivayaton ne banayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Khuda Kaise kaynaat Dikhayi nahin koi gulistan Yahan
Kat rahi har shaakh Lagayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Bik gayi bastiyaan karz chukatey chukatey Yahan
De raha kabse kisan duhayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Bhuul jaun main kaise sabak ‘Jhuut par Satya ki Vijay’
Khuda kaise duniya dikhayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Har mod khul rahi kitaab sach ki Sukanya tere aagey
Bachi kis dil mein sachayi khuda aakar tu bhi dekh zara


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Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.


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29th January 2007, 06:55 PM

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Shayri Parivaar ko mera sader Namaskar

Aaj phir apni ek rachna aapkey samukh rakh rahi huun...issey asha ke sath ki sachayi ki kuch kirane liye yeh rachna sachayi ke darr par ek dastak zaroor karegi.......kayi swaal khuda se kartey kartey yeh rachna likhti gayi...umeed hay aapki ashaon ke anuroop iss rachna ki roshani hogi...

Sada kush rahiye
Sukanya


Khuda aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Khuda Kaise Duniya Banayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara
Jhuut se insaan de raha Safayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Khuda Kaise Fiza Lehrayi nahin dikhta koi apna yahan
Chal rahi Insanon ki Ladayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Saja raha tha babul doli gudiya ki umeedon ke sath
Daheej ne Zindagi sabki hilayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Yeh baat aur hay jee raha pinjare ka panchi kabse
Diwaarein Rivayaton ne banayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Khuda Kaise kaynaat Dikhayi nahin koi gulistan Yahan
Kat rahi har shaakh Lagayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Bik gayi bastiyaan karz chukatey chukatey Yahan
De raha kabse kisan duhayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Bhuul jaun main kaise sabak ‘Jhuut par Satya ki Vijay’
Khuda kaise duniya dikhayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Har mod khul rahi kitaab sach ki Sukanya tere aagey
Bachi kis dil mein sachayi khuda aakar tu bhi dekh zara
Sukanya ji...

Ek behad kadvi sachaai ko aapki is rachna me padha, mann dukhi ho gaya.. ki aakhir khuda ki khoobsoorat duniya ka hum insaano ne kya haal kar diya hai..

Bahut khoobsoorati se aapne saari baat kahi.. iske liye daad kubool keejiye..

~Priya



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30th January 2007, 05:18 PM

Namaskar Merul ji

Pehle to main aapka shukriya kehna chahungi ki aapney mere rachna itni gehrayi se parhi....thanks.......mughey nahin lagta ki khuda iss duniya mein aakar iss zalem zamaney ko dekh ke tuut jayega....kyunki aaj bhi iss duniya mein sachayi aur sachayi par chalney walon ki kami nahin hay ...kyun theek kaha na maine....aapne itni khoobsurti se har pankti ke liye ek sher jawaab mein likha shukriya.....chaliye aapke har sher ka bhi reply kartey hain....

Khuda Kaise Fiza Lehrayi nahin dikhta koi apna yahan
Chal rahi Insanon ki Ladayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara


Ae mere humnasin chal kahin aur chal,
Is chaman me ab apna guzara nahin,
Baat hoti gulon tak to seh lete hum,
Ab to kanto pe bhi haq hamara nahin.


This one is beautiful....and a good reply

Saja raha tha babul doli gudiya ki umeedon ke sath
Daheej ne Zindagi sabki hilayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara


Barbad-e-dunia ko fir basayenge,
hasin wadiya hasin nazare fir aawaaz lagayenge,
Dar na tu dastan-e-dunia ko dekhkar
Ek nai dulhan ki tarah fir use sajayenge.


This one is even beautiful....good one

Yeh baat aur hay jee raha pinjare ka panchi kabse
Diwaarein Rivayaton ne banayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara


Sanam chahe zindagi se bas itna,
Ek muththi mein kaid kar lu, ye aasman hai jitna,
Sanam ki dastaan aaj itni hi sahi,
Aasman ke panchi pinjre mein kaid nahi.


This line is beautiful Aasman ke panchi pinjre mein kaid nahi.

Bik gayi bastiyaan karz chukatey chukatey Yahan
De raha kabse kisan duhayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara


Har karz dosti ka kaun ada karenga,
Jab hum hi naa rahenge to dosti kaun karenga,
Ae khuda mere doston ko rakhna salamat,
Varna mere jine ki dua kaun karenga.


Very Nice

Acha laga to see u on my post.......Bahut bahut shukriya iss rachna ko itni gehrayi se parhney ke liye...u too keep writing....

God bless u

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Sukanya ji...

Ek behad kadvi sachaai ko aapki is rachna me padha, mann dukhi ho gaya.. ki aakhir khuda ki khoobsoorat duniya ka hum insaano ne kya haal kar diya hai..

Bahut khoobsoorati se aapne saari baat kahi.. iske liye daad kubool keejiye..

~Priya
Namaskar Priya ji

Kaise hain aap.....aap mere iss post par aayi...shukriya......haan priya khuda ki itni khoobsurat duniya ko insaan ne kya se kya bana diya hay sach mein yeh dukh ki baat hay......aapki daad sar ankhon pe......yuun hi aati raha kijeye....

Apna khyal rakhiyega


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Khuda, Kaise Duniya Banayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara
Jhuut se insaan de raha Safayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Saja raha tha babul doli gudiya ki umeedon ke sath
Daheej ne Zindagi sabki hilayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Yeh baat aur hay jee raha pinjare ka panchi kabse
Diwaarein Rivayaton ne banayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Khuda Kaise kaynaat Dikhayi nahin koi gulistan Yahan
Kat rahi har shaakh Lagayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Bik gayi bastiyaan karz chukatey chukatey Yahan
De raha kabse kisan duhayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Bhuul jaun main kaise sabak ‘Jhuut par Satya ki Vijay’
Khuda kaise duniya dikhayi aakar tu bhi dekh zara

Har mod khul rahi kitaab sach ki Sukanya tere aagey
Bachi kis dil mein sachayi khuda aakar tu bhi dekh zara
Sukanya jee:

aap ke yeh a'Shaar behad achchhe lage, bohat khuubsuurat aur gehere Khayaal haiN.. jo kee waastvikta ke eird-gird ghuum rahe haiN.. maiN bhi sochata huuN kii waastvikta par poori ek Ghazal likhuuN par do-ek Sher se zeyaadah nahiiN likh paata.. par chuN kii aap ne raadeef hi aisa chuna hai 'aakar tu bhi dekh zara' kee pooraa ka poora kalaam hi waastvikta ke eird gird mandrataa huaa nazar aa raha hai.. har Sher se ek kahaani bayaaN ho rahii hai.. bohat khuub! yuuN hi likhati raheN.. apna khayaal rakheN:

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9th February 2007, 11:55 PM

sukanya ji.....bahut khoob raha aapka invitation khuda ko.....khuda ko bulaya ja raha hai insaano ki duniya mein....wah! kya baat hai...bahut khoob!

har sher dil chhoo kar guzra....bahut khoob!

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Hi "Sukanya" ji,

aapki soch bahut hi acchi lagi.Aur bahut hi sundar dhang se aapne duniyan me ho rahe taklifon ki taraf dhyan dilwaya hai.


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khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii

lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii

ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii


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Sukanya jee:

aap ke yeh a'Shaar behad achchhe lage, bohat khuubsuurat aur gehere Khayaal haiN.. jo kee waastvikta ke eird-gird ghuum rahe haiN.. maiN bhi sochata huuN kii waastvikta par poori ek Ghazal likhuuN par do-ek Sher se zeyaadah nahiiN likh paata.. par chuN kii aap ne raadeef hi aisa chuna hai 'aakar tu bhi dekh zara' kee pooraa ka poora kalaam hi waastvikta ke eird gird mandrataa huaa nazar aa raha hai.. har Sher se ek kahaani bayaaN ho rahii hai.. bohat khuub! yuuN hi likhati raheN.. apna khayaal rakheN:

Mayank
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Aapka bahut bahut shukriya jo aapne iss rachna ki waastvikta ke liye do shabd kahey.....shayad sachayi par likhi rachna apney aap mein hi kayi kahaniyaan samete huay hoti hay.....thanks ki aapne mere iss rachna ka radeef bhi pasand kiya...bass ek din khuda ko bulaney ki chaah thi to likhti gayi khuda aakar tu bhi dekh zara.....

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sukanya ji.....bahut khoob raha aapka invitation khuda ko.....khuda ko bulaya ja raha hai insaano ki duniya mein....wah! kya baat hai...bahut khoob!

har sher dil chhoo kar guzra....bahut khoob!

daad qabool kijiyega
Namaskar wafa ji

waise bahut kum apni post par aapko dekha hay..par main aapki jab bhi koyi nayi rachna aati hay usay parhti huun....haan insanon ki duniya mein khuda ko bula rahi huun....par na janey kahan hay khuda....ek din shayad sabhi jawab pa luun khuda se...issey umeed par likhi hui hay yeh rachna...aapka dil se shukriya karna chahungi iss rachna ko parhney ke liye...

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Hi "Sukanya" ji,

aapki soch bahut hi acchi lagi.Aur bahut hi sundar dhang se aapne duniyan me ho rahe taklifon ki taraf dhyan dilwaya hai.


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Hi Aryaa ji

pehle to aapka naam bahut khoobsurat hay...mughey apni ek bahut pyari dost ki yaad aa gayi aapka naam parh...she was too good ...lagta hay aap site par nayi aayi hay...kabhi aapki rachnaein parhungi....thanks for liking my poetry...

God bless u


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15th February 2007, 11:03 PM

aapko humara naam khubsoorat laga..iske liye shukriya sukanyaji,
nice to know I reminded you of a friend.


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lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
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