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Tera Jawab Nahin - 9th February 2007, 11:56 PM

Halki si aag jalakar,usse Aftaab kehte hain
Kya batayen abb humse,kya kya Janaab kehte hain

Kisi se milna toh khair,namumkin hua
Aaine se ho mulaqat,toh Swab kehte hain

Wafa ke mayne,pooch ke dekho sadiq se
Badle mein tumhe,kaise kaise Jawab kehte hain

Adhkhuli ankhon se,kitne haseen manzar dikhte hain
Haqikat se takra jayen toh,usse Khwab kehte hain

Phoolon ki baat karen,abb wo zamana kahan
Kanton se ghayal dil,usse haseen Shabab kehte hain

Kehte hain wah!,tera jawab nahin “wafa”
Kaagaz kala karne ko kya,shayri ka Khitab kehte hain


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10th February 2007, 04:15 PM

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Halki si aag jalakar,usse Aftaab kehte hain
Kya batayen abb humse,kya kya Janaab kehte hain

Kisi se milna toh khair,namumkin hua
Aaine se ho mulaqat,toh Swab kehte hain

Wafa ke mayne,pooch ke dekho sadiq se
Badle mein tumhe,kaise kaise Jawab kehte hain

Adhkhuli ankhon se,kitne haseen manzar dikhte hain
Haqikat se takra jayen toh,usse Khwab kehte hain

Phoolon ki baat karen,abb wo zamana kahan
Kanton se ghayal dil,usse haseen Shabab kehte hain

Kehte hain wah!,tera jawab nahin “wafa”
Kaagaz kala karne ko kya,shayri ka Khitab kehte hain

wafa ji bahoot khoob....bahoot dino baad aya hooN...so aapka kalaam saamne aya..toh dil nahi mana aage jaane ko.....bahoot hi khoob likha hai dost....dil ko chhoo sa gaya...

Kya kaheiN wafa ab jaane kahaan kho si gayi
Tere Husn ko sazane jo aya use aaftaab kehte haiN



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10th February 2007, 05:03 PM

wafa ji adaab aur namskaar

aapka andaz-e-bayaaN to bahot hi khub hai aur apne sabhi lafzoN ke sath insaaf bhi kiya hai ek behtrin si peshkasH aapki aur se

yeH sher mujhe behad pasaNd ayaa

Adhkhuli ankhon se,kitne haseen manzar dikhte hain
Haqikat se takra jayen toh,usse Khwab kehte hain


aapko paRH ke achha laga , dil se nikli daad ko kubul kareN

apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazaT

allah hafiz

aapka dost
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10th February 2007, 07:14 PM

wafaa Dost:

Bohat khuub Ghazal kahii hai aap ne...

mujhe ye a'Shaar behad pasand aaye...

Halki si aag jalakar,usse Aftaab kehte hain
Kya batayen abb humse,kya kya Janaab kehte hain

Kehte hain wah!,tera jawab nahin “wafa”
Kaagaz kala karne ko kya,shayri ka Khitab kehte hain!

kya baat hai! ham kaagaz kaala karte haiN, aur koii isay shayri ka khitaab kah deta hai.. par aap ki shayri mere khayaal se kaaghaz kaala karna nahiiN hai..

YuuN hi likhati raheN..

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bhut khub - 10th February 2007, 07:25 PM

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Halki si aag jalakar,usse Aftaab kehte hain
Kya batayen abb humse,kya kya Janaab kehte hain

Kisi se milna toh khair,namumkin hua
Aaine se ho mulaqat,toh Swab kehte hain

Wafa ke mayne,pooch ke dekho sadiq se
Badle mein tumhe,kaise kaise Jawab kehte hain

Adhkhuli ankhon se,kitne haseen manzar dikhte hain
Haqikat se takra jayen toh,usse Khwab kehte hain

Phoolon ki baat karen,abb wo zamana kahan
Kanton se ghayal dil,usse haseen Shabab kehte hain

Kehte hain wah!,tera jawab nahin “wafa”
Kaagaz kala karne ko kya,shayri ka Khitab kehte hain
wafa ji aap ki kalam ki taqdeer pe rashak hota hai kitnii khubsurti se likhti hai kaash hum aapki kalam hote ehsaas to aapke hote hain lakin byaan to aapki kalam hii karti hai or jab karti hai to seedhe dil mein uttar jaati hai......ye do ashaar bhut ache lagge.......raj....

Halki si aag jalakar,usse Aftaab kehte hain
Kya batayen abb humse,kya kya Janaab kehte hain

Kisi se milna toh khair,namumkin hua
Aaine se ho mulaqat,toh Swab kehte hain


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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Post 15th February 2007, 08:57 PM

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Halki si aag jalakar,usse Aftaab kehte hain
Kya batayen abb humse,kya kya Janaab kehte hain

Kisi se milna toh khair,namumkin hua
Aaine se ho mulaqat,toh Swab kehte hain

Wafa ke mayne,pooch ke dekho sadiq se
Badle mein tumhe,kaise kaise Jawab kehte hain

Adhkhuli ankhon se,kitne haseen manzar dikhte hain
Haqikat se takra jayen toh,usse Khwab kehte hain

Phoolon ki baat karen,abb wo zamana kahan
Kanton se ghayal dil,usse haseen Shabab kehte hain

Kehte hain wah!,tera jawab nahin “wafa”
Kaagaz kala karne ko kya,shayri ka Khitab kehte hain
wafa ko humara salam,
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