Shayri.com  

Go Back   Shayri.com > Shayri > Shayri-e-Dard

Reply
 
Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
ab maie nahi chahti
Old
  (#1)
meena chheda
Registered User
meena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to behold
 
meena chheda's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,436
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 32
ab maie nahi chahti - 19th April 2003, 10:13 AM

Tumhe milne ki aash thhi
Tumhe n mil paaye hum
Tumhari yaad aati rahi
Tumhe n yaad aayae hum
Fir bhi chahte rahe hum

Thha khat ka zaria, to
Khat bhi n pa sake hum
Hawa ka rukh to dekho
Jo khat bheje hamne oonke
Tukdae raah maie paate rahe hum
Fir bhi chahte rahe hum?

So gaye yunh soch ke
Sapno maie mil le hum
Dekh ghair ki bahaon maie
Apni to nind gawa baithhe hum
Par ab nahi chahte hum
Kya koi goonah kar rahe hai hum?
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#2)
Dard ki daastan
Registered User
Dard ki daastan is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 43
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: U.S.A
Rep Power: 0
19th April 2003, 10:45 AM

bahut khoob likha hai aapne dear. likhte rahiye


Doston...pyar ki baatain na karo

Guzare hain mohabbat main aise mukaam se
Nafrat si ho gayi hai mohabbat ke naam se

Jai Mata Di
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#3)
Fanah....
Registered User
Fanah.... is on a distinguished road
 
Fanah....'s Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 25
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: infinite...
Rep Power: 0
19th April 2003, 11:37 AM

meena aap ke shikayat karne ka andaz bahot pasand aaya..
meena do u know my sister name is Meena also...
meena aap ki ghazal pasand aayi..
likhti rahiye...
Take care....


Fanah.......
For her....
By her...
   
Reply With Quote
bahot shukriya
Old
  (#4)
meena chheda
Registered User
meena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to behold
 
meena chheda's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,436
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 32
bahot shukriya - 19th April 2003, 08:16 PM

fanahji,
aapki shukrgujaar hu. aap hamesha meri rachna ke liyae apna wakt nikaalengae isi aasha maie.....
   
Reply With Quote
bahot shukriya
Old
  (#5)
meena chheda
Registered User
meena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to behold
 
meena chheda's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,436
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 32
bahot shukriya - 19th April 2003, 08:43 PM

dard ki dastaan?
kya maie dost kahu? haan muje yahi thhik lag raha hai.
dostji,
aapki bahot shukrgujaar hu jo aapne meri nazam ko saraha. aagae bhi apna wakt dengae isi raah maie rahungi.
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#6)
mein_aur_tanhai
Registered User
mein_aur_tanhai is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 492
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Kabaristaan...
Rep Power: 19
19th April 2003, 10:43 PM

namaste meenaji...

maaf kijyega.. bahut log tareef kar gaye .. uske.. baad mein kuch likh raha hun .. per sach mein apne..bahut accha likha hai yar.. dill ke aarmaan hila diye .. apne.. bahut khoob..


Lamha Lamha...saSein Khatam hoo rai hai...
Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai...
Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah...
Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai...
   
Reply With Quote
bahot shukriya
Old
  (#7)
meena chheda
Registered User
meena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to behold
 
meena chheda's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,436
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 32
bahot shukriya - 19th April 2003, 10:47 PM

dost mein aur tanhaiji,
aapka bahot shukria. ki aapne mere ahesaas ko samaja. bhale hi dar hui par aapne wakt diya. aapka shukria. hamesha salaah dijiega.
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#8)
ghayalparwana
Registered User
ghayalparwana will become famous soon enoughghayalparwana will become famous soon enough
 
ghayalparwana's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,128
Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: London
Rep Power: 21
21st April 2003, 08:02 PM

Meena ji,

kaafi achhi lagi aapki yah rachna.Isme ek anjaani si innocence chuppi hui hai,jo mujhe bahut pasand aayi..

Likhte rahiye
Varinder


kyon zindagi ki raah mein akele chalta hai dost
chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#9)
Sharaabi
madhoSH shaKHs
Sharaabi has a spectacular aura aboutSharaabi has a spectacular aura about
 
Sharaabi's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 974
Join Date: Oct 2002
Rep Power: 20
21st April 2003, 08:23 PM

Tumhe milne ki aash thhi
Tumhe n mil paaye hum
Tumhari yaad aati rahi
Tumhe n yaad aayae hum

-- waah!

bahot hi behtareen tareeqe se aapne puurii rachna likhi hai!
ummeed hai ki isi taraH aap likhti rahii gi

taareef ke saath,
aman



"je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa,
te bibba saada dil moD de..!"


kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN..
  Send a message via Yahoo to Sharaabi  
Reply With Quote
bahot shukriya
Old
  (#10)
meena chheda
Registered User
meena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to behold
 
meena chheda's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,436
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 32
bahot shukriya - 22nd April 2003, 12:59 AM

dost ghayalji,
aapko meri rachna pasand aayi, jaan kar mujae bahot khushi hui. aap jaise dosto se salaah bhi chahti rahungi.
pls! hameshadhyaan maie rakhiyaega
   
Reply With Quote
bahot shukriya
Old
  (#11)
meena chheda
Registered User
meena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to behold
 
meena chheda's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,436
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 32
bahot shukriya - 22nd April 2003, 01:02 AM

dost amanji,

aapne jo hamshae ummid rakhi hai, oonhae gar hum poora kar sake to aap jaise dosto ki duwa ka hi wah asar hoga.
   
Reply With Quote
hi
Old
  (#12)
Mehbuub
Registered User
Mehbuub is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 84
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: mohd.ALi road
Rep Power: 19
hi - 22nd April 2003, 01:07 AM

ok


Abidhussain!!
Apni marzi se kaha apne safar ke hum hai,
Rukh hawaoo ka jidhar ka hai,udhar ke ham hai.
   
Reply With Quote
yah kya?
Old
  (#13)
meena chheda
Registered User
meena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to behold
 
meena chheda's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,436
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 32
yah kya? - 22nd April 2003, 01:15 AM

dost mehbuubji,

aapne meri rachna padhi aapka tay dil se shukria.
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#14)
bedilMusafir
Registered User
bedilMusafir will become famous soon enough
 
Offline
Posts: 405
Join Date: Feb 2003
Rep Power: 19
30th April 2003, 11:40 AM

Salaam qubool kijiyega Meena ji, kaisi hai aap?

sach me bohat aur bohat achchi lagi aapki ye rachna...
ise padhte wakt mai ye soch raha tha ki kitni khoobi se aapne apne jazbaato ko kaagaz per utaar diya...
patthar ho chuka hoo per phir bhi ise padhker bohat dino baad meri aankho me aansu aaye...

Tumhe milne ki aash thhi
Tumhe n mil paaye hum
Tumhari yaad aati rahi
Tumhe n yaad aayae hum
Fir bhi chahte rahe hum


fir bhi unhe chahte rahe hum aur hamesha chahte rahenge...
bohat achcha laga aapka ye sher...

So gaye yunh soch ke
Sapno maie mil le hum
Dekh ghair ki bahaon maie
Apni to nind gawa baithhe hum
Par ab nahi chahte hum
Kya koi goonah kar rahe hai hum?


aap unhe nahi chahte isme aapka koi gunaah nahi...
ye to bus haatho ki laqeero ki baat hai...

shukriya aur mubaarakbaad qubool kijiyega...

likhti rahiye aur muskuraati rahiye...


mai 'bedil'
   
Reply With Quote
dear Meena gee
Old
  (#15)
Neha Haroon
Registered User
Neha Haroon has a spectacular aura aboutNeha Haroon has a spectacular aura about
 
Offline
Posts: 555
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: California
Rep Power: 20
Love dear Meena gee - 30th April 2003, 01:34 PM

inshallah jis lagaan say aap unsaay milnaa chatee hain aap zaroor milaingee

ameen

take care
KEEP IT UP
Neha


neha
 Send a message via ICQ to Neha Haroon Send a message via Yahoo to Neha Haroon Send a message via AIM to Neha Haroon  
Reply With Quote
thanx
Old
  (#16)
meena chheda
Registered User
meena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to behold
 
meena chheda's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,436
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 32
thanx - 3rd May 2003, 03:02 PM

bedilji,
aapka tahe dil se shukriaa. aagae bhi raay dijiyega meri nazmo ko
   
Reply With Quote
thanx
Old
  (#17)
meena chheda
Registered User
meena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to behold
 
meena chheda's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,436
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 32
thanx - 3rd May 2003, 03:04 PM

nehaji,
aapka shukriaa kaise adaa karu?? aisa laga jaise aapko mera dard chhu sa gaya. aapki duwa ke liyae tahe dil se aabhari hu.
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#18)
dil_e_sikast
Nacheej shayra
dil_e_sikast will become famous soon enoughdil_e_sikast will become famous soon enough
 
dil_e_sikast's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 557
Join Date: Sep 2002
Location: india(gujarat)
Rep Power: 20
3rd May 2003, 09:52 PM

dear meenaji
how r u? aap ne jo likha hai wo sahi me bahot pasand aaya. Aise lag raha hai jaise dil se ek ek word nikal kar likha hai
aaage bhi likhti rahiyega
aapki dost
sanam


taqdeer ne kya kam sataya hua tha
jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye
logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main
aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye
-> SaNaM
   
Reply With Quote
tum sahi ho
Old
  (#19)
meena chheda
Registered User
meena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to behold
 
meena chheda's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,436
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 32
tum sahi ho - 3rd May 2003, 10:01 PM

dost sanam,
achaa laga mujae ki tumne nere jajbaato ko samja. ha tum sahi ho. dil se jo baate nikalti hai wahi to sabke dil ko chhuti hai.
shukriaa. aur aagae bhi tumhari raah dekhungi...
   
Reply With Quote
tum sahi ho
Old
  (#20)
meena chheda
Registered User
meena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to behold
 
meena chheda's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,436
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 32
tum sahi ho - 3rd May 2003, 10:01 PM

dost sanam,
achaa laga mujae ki tumne nere jajbaato ko samja. ha tum sahi ho. dil se jo baate nikalti hai wahi to sabke dil ko chhuti hai.
shukriaa. aur aagae bhi tumhari raah dekhungi...
   
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
aur dard nahi chahti khanak Shayri-e-Dard 22 26th May 2009 10:21 AM
Aakar baaho mein mere,toot kar kyu mujhko chahti nahi.... Diggaj_Dave Shayri-e-Ishq 0 13th October 2005 11:59 PM
maie kyun nahi hu? meena chheda Shayri-e-Dard 24 16th September 2005 09:18 PM
yaad nahi tumhae....?? [gujrati aur hindi maie] meena chheda Shayri-e-Dard 2 4th April 2003 10:05 AM



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2021, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com