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Mohabbat ki har rasam adaa kar chale - 18th April 2003, 10:43 PM

Mohabbat ki har rasam adaa kar chale
bewafaa tere liyeh bhi duaa kar chale

ek khata meri maaf karnaa meherban
tere hisse ke gum hum chura kar chale

phir milen to dosti ki ummed say milen
aj dilki har kad-wahat bhula kar chale

jaate jaate tere pasand kaa libaas
tere pasand ki khushbo laga kar chale

nashtar se chubhte hai be-chad-te hue
phir bhi hotoon par hasi saja kar chale

Mohabbat ki har rasam adaa kar chale
bewafaa tere liyeh bhi duaa kar chale

Zeba likhti rahegi......................

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wah wah wah - 18th April 2003, 10:52 PM

zeba JI SAHI MEIN BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI ,SAB DIL KE TUKDE PHIR SE FADFADANE LAGE ,APPNE SAB DIL KE TOOTE TAAR BHI BAJA DIYE, UMEED KARTHE HAI KI AISE HI LIKTHE REHENGE
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18th April 2003, 10:57 PM

kishor ji,
shukriya aap ne isko padha aur pasand kiya,meri dua hai ke aap ke dil ke tukdoon ko jodhe jaldi koi aaye.

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hi - 19th April 2003, 12:30 AM

hi zeba !

keasi ho aap ?

keya ghazab ka likha hai aapne aapki har post lajawab hoti hai ,


ek khata meri maaf karnaa meherban
tere hisse ke gum hum chura kar chale

phir milen to dosti ki ummed say milen
aj dilki har kad-wahat bhula kar chale

jaate jaate tere pasand kaa libaas
tere pasand ki khushbo laga kar chale

nashtar se chubhte hai be-chad-te hue
phir bhi hotoon par hasi saja kar chale

KIS KIS SHAIR KI TAREEF KURON BOHET HI ACHA LIKHA BOHET PASAND AAYA ,
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19th April 2003, 02:02 AM

WAFA JI,
Thanks a lot,aap nahi jaanti aap jaise logon ki tareef sun ke mujhe kitni khushi milti hai.yehi baat hai ke mai is form me likhtihoo.

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19th April 2003, 12:05 PM

zeba aap ke ehsaas aur jazbaat bahot dard bhare hain..
main kis tarha in ghamon ki tareef karoon mujhe samajh nahin
aata...
zeba kitne bebes hain aap ke jazbaat.
zeba is duniya bahot kum lig aise hote hain jo pyar ki rasm ada
karne ki qoowat rakhte hain...
lekin zeba aap ke lafzon mein woh qoowat saaf nazar aati hai...
BaWafa to woh hota hai jo ddooosre ki bewafai bhe sahan karke
usko hamesha pyar karta hai...
zeba aisi ghazal ke liye bahot-bahot shukriya.....
mafi chahta hoon ki main aap ki ghazal ki tareef nahin kar sakta..
kyonki KISI KE GHUM KI TAREEF NAHI KI JAATI...BULKI USKE
GHUM MEIN USKA SAATH DIYA JAATA HAI...
Likhti rahiye ...
Allahafiz..
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Re: Mohabbat ki har rasam adaa kar chale - 19th April 2003, 06:57 PM

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Mohabbat ki har rasam adaa kar chale
bewafaa tere liyeh bhi duaa kar chale

ek khata meri maaf karnaa meherban
tere hisse ke gum hum chura kar chale

phir milen to dosti ki ummed say milen
aj dilki har kad-wahat bhula kar chale

jaate jaate tere pasand kaa libaas
tere pasand ki khushbo laga kar chale

nashtar se chubhte hai be-chad-te hue
phir bhi hotoon par hasi saja kar chale

Mohabbat ki har rasam adaa kar chale
bewafaa tere liyeh bhi duaa kar chale

Zeba likhti rahegi......................


bahoot khoob zeba
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20th April 2003, 02:56 AM

arrey waah.. chand dinoN ke liye gaayab kya ho gaye, itni achchi ghazaleN logoN ne likh di
waaqaye bahot khoob likha hai aapne..
is naachiiz ki taareef karne ki aaukaat bhi nahiiN hai, magar maiN baaqi logoN ki baatoN se sehmat huuN.. bahot hi achchi ghazal sunaaii hai aapne!

"phir milen to dosti ki ummed say milen
aj dilki har kad-wahat bhula kar chale
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-- waah! bahot hi dilchasp!


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20th April 2003, 03:00 AM

Salaam, zeba

bohut khuub poem hai app ki

Mohabbat ki har rasam adaa kar chale
bewafaa tere liyeh bhi duaa kar chale


hope to see more tc.
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20th April 2003, 07:42 PM

fanah ji , paplu pat ji,aman shab aur rani ji,
aap sab logon ka tahe dil se shukriya ada karti hoo.
meri nacheez gazal ko aap logon ne pasand kiya aur mujhe itni sarahna de.thanks.

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20th April 2003, 08:10 PM

zeba ji
bahut achha likha hai is bar bhi aapne khas taur se line

ek khata meri maaf karnaa meherban
tere hisse ke gum hum chura kar chale

bahut khoob
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22nd April 2003, 01:58 AM

kshitiz ji,
Thanks aap ka bhi meri tareef karne ke liye.

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22nd April 2003, 04:06 PM

Zeba,
bohat hi khoobsoorat tehreer hai apki... itna dard aur qurbaani ka jazba bohat khoob......

apka matla kya kaha hai....

Mohabbat ki har rasam adaa kar chale
bewafaa tere liyeh bhi duaa kar chale

ek ek sher main kya qurbaani ka jazba hai...

ek khata meri maaf karnaa meherban
tere hisse ke gum hum chura kar chale


phir milen to dosti ki ummed say milen
aj dilki har kad-wahat bhula kar chale

mohabbat ka izhaar is andaaz main.....

jaate jaate tere pasand kaa libaas
tere pasand ki khushbo laga kar chale

nashtar se chubhte hai be-chad-te hue
phir bhi hotoon par hasi saja kar chale

saaaaaaaaaaaaaare ashaar behad pasand aaye.....
isi tarah likhti rahein waise mujhe maaloom hai aap likhti raheingi.......

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Thumbs up excellent - 23rd April 2003, 12:39 AM

ZEBA JI,

Lagta hai is baar mein bahut late ho gaya hun reply dene mein kyunki mein kai din se aya nahi hun yahan aur aapne itni behtareen ghazal likh di aur logon ne itni taref kar di ke mein ab kya kahun fir bhi aapki yeh lines

Mohabbat ki har rasam adaa kar chale
bewafaa tere liyeh bhi duaa kar chale

Kya baat hai wafa ke baare mein to paase seekhne jaisa hai ke bewafaa ke liye bhi dua kar chale sachhi mohabbat is ko kehte hain kyun theek kaha na maine

Zeba likhti rahegi aur ZINDAGI RAHI TO HUM PADHTE RAHENGE

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23rd April 2003, 05:32 AM

Adil ji aur pyasa ji,
aap dono ne to mujhe bohot khush kardiya hai aaj is gazal ki tareef karke.thanks
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23rd April 2003, 04:16 PM

HEY ZEBA JEE,

BAHOOT ACHCHHA LIKHA HAI APANE.BAHOOT PASAND AAYA. UMMID KERTA HOON KI AAGE BHI ESI TARAH AAP LIKHATI RAHENGI. SHABHI SHER PASAND AAYE.

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bahot khub - 24th April 2003, 11:47 AM

zebaji,
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akant ji aur meena ji,
Thanks aap dono ka bhi ke yeh gazal aap logon ko achi lagi.

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waah Zeba ji bohat khoob...

kaise tareef karu iskii aur kis sher ki kitni tareef karu samajh me nahi aa raha hai...

ek khata meri maaf karnaa meherban
tere hisse ke gum hum chura kar chale

phir milen to dosti ki ummed say milen
aj dilki har kad-wahat bhula kar chale


ufff aahh... kaise likha hoga aapne ye...
dard hi dard.. gham hi gham bhara hua hai isme...
sach me Zeba ji bohat achcha likha hai aapne....
her ek sher lajawaab hai...

aapka andaaz behad kashish bhara hai...

mubaarakbaad qubool kijiyega...

likhti rahiye aur muskuraati rahiye...


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bedil ji,
aap ne itne dinoon ke baad yeh gazal padhi aur iski itneee tareef ki hai mera dil khushi se has utha.thanks a lot.

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Zeba ji, aapne bahut hi khoob likha hai.

"nashtar se chubhte hai be-chad-te hue
phir bhi hotoon par hasi saja kar chale

Mohabbat ki har rasam adaa kar chale
bewafaa tere liyeh bhi duaa kar chale"

Yeh lines mujhe bahut pasand aayi. Bahut mushkil hai toote hue dil ko le kar, hoton par hasi sajana. Aur is..se zyada mushkil hai, uss bewafa ke liye dua karna. May God bless u. Likhte rahiyega dost.


Doston...pyar ki baatain na karo

Guzare hain mohabbat main aise mukaam se
Nafrat si ho gayi hai mohabbat ke naam se

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dard ji,
thanks dard ji aap ka shukriya behad aap ko yeh sher pasand aaye aur inki aap ne mere dard ko mehsoos kiya.

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