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Aa Jao - 12th June 2006, 08:02 PM

HI ALL,
THIS IS MY FIRST POEM, I M TOTALLY A NEW PERSON TO THIS SITE, I WRITE ONLY TO SATISFY MY DESIRE TO WRITE, ITS JUST MY HOBBY, SO PLS BE CANDID FOR GIVING UR PRECIOUS SUGGESTIONS..............



TUMHARI YAADO NE ISS DIL PER DERA DAALA HAI,
TUMHARE BINA YE DIN BHI GEHRA KAALA HAI,
TUM AA JAO, MUJHME SAMA JAO,
MAINE ISS DIL KO BADI MUSHKIL SE SAMBHAALA HAI.........


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Kyu Tanha-Se Ho Gaye Hai Tere Jane Ke Baad......JAYA

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Wow.... - 12th June 2006, 08:47 PM

hiiiiiii,
Empty heart.

i m so surprised that someone can write this much beautiful at the very 1st time on shayri .com

i think u r writing 4rm a long time n u came at the right place now.
i really like ur way of writing n i really like ur id also.
i think i hav already seen an id which is similar to ur id or it may be my imagination

the meaning of ur lines is so deep, so true n the only person who can understand it correctly,is the person 4 whom ur writing.
i really appreciate ur work...
anyway keep on writing, u really write very well. keep it on...

i hope soon i will read sumthing new from u..
with more beauty in lines n with more grace in it...

bye
take care

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20th June 2006, 02:38 PM

hey
that was great .........


MUJSE NARAZ HO TO HO JAO,
KHUDSE KHAFA KHAFA NA RAHO.....

MUJSETUM DUR JAO TO JAO,
AAP APNE SE JUDA TUM NA RAHO.....


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12th December 2007, 02:30 PM

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Originally Posted by raj_cute20 View Post
hiiiiiii,
Empty heart.

i m so surprised that someone can write this much beautiful at the very 1st time on shayri .com

i think u r writing 4rm a long time n u came at the right place now.
i really like ur way of writing n i really like ur id also.
i think i hav already seen an id which is similar to ur id or it may be my imagination

the meaning of ur lines is so deep, so true n the only person who can understand it correctly,is the person 4 whom ur writing.
i really appreciate ur work...
anyway keep on writing, u really write very well. keep it on...

i hope soon i will read sumthing new from u..
with more beauty in lines n with more grace in it...

bye
take care

Raj


Thanks.....................a lot


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