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koi kaise mahesoos kare??? - 8th May 2003, 10:15 AM

Mere dil ke kisi kone maie
Jab koi gum ubharta hai..
To chahti hu, ek aisa dost
Jo mujae... mere dard ko..
Mahesoos kare.....par
Ab lagta hai, maie galat hu..
Meri ichchha hi galat hai.
Is jivan ki bhag-daud maie
Jab koi khud ke liyae
Thhik se mahesoos nahi kar sakta
To wah..
Kisi dost ke liyae kyun??
Kyun mahesoos kare??
Kaise mahesoos kare??
   
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Good - 8th May 2003, 11:19 AM

Is jivan ki bhag-daud maie
Jab koi khud ke liyae
Thhik se mahesoos nahi kar sakta
To wah..
Kisi dost ke liyae kyun??
Kyun mahesoos kare??
Kaise mahesoos kare??


HooM.. Baat mai dam hai aapki, jo apna hi theek se nahi ho sakta wo kisi or ka kya hoga.


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8th May 2003, 11:33 AM

namste meenaji..

wah yar.. kya likha hai apne....aaaree yar.. per kuch dost aise bhi hote hei joo dusre ke dard ko mehsoos karte hai ... aur unki fikkar bhi ...wasie yeah .. apne ..apne..soch ne ka tarika hai ..

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meena gee - 8th May 2003, 02:12 PM

aap kie yeh nazm padh kar ek cheez yaad agayee pesh -e kidmat hai aap key

javed saab kie ghazaal

Khud ko dil se utarne ke bad
Kaisa lagta hai harne ke bad
Raizah raizah bikhairta hai mujhe
Raizah raizah sawarne ke bad

Rakh gaya hai bulandiyan mujh mein
Pastiyon mein utarne ke bad
Khuahishon ko daba raha hon main
Khuahishon ko ubharne ke bad

Aaj dil khol ker hansa hon main
Sare jazbon ko marne ke bad
Ras aane lagi hai tenhayee
Chund lamhe guzarne ke bad

Meri sansein ukher gayein javed
Zindagi ko pukarne ke bad

behaad khoob likhaa hai aap ney

keep it up
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9th May 2003, 11:02 AM

Is jivan ki bhag-daud maie
Jab koi khud ke liyae
Thhik se mahesoos nahi kar sakta
To wah..
Kisi dost ke liyae kyun??
Kyun mahesoos kare??
Kaise mahesoos kare??

Baat kuchh hadd tak theek hai aapki..

Magar jab Gam do logon kaa ek jaisa ho to woh ek dooje ka gam mehsoos bhi karte hain,samajhte bhi hai aur usme shaamil bhi hote hain..

Waise kabhi kabhi aisa sawaal hamare zehan mein bhi aaya hai..magar har waqt koi dost sahara dekar gam halka kar jaata hai..

Bahut achha likha hai aapne..aage bhi apni soch share karte rahiyega
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9th May 2003, 07:48 PM

hi didi how r u...

i m here after a great time...
didi aap ke jazbat hi to hain jo nujhe mujboor karte hain aapko
reply kerne ko...
bahot achcha likha hai aapne...
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9th May 2003, 10:46 PM

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10th May 2003, 06:57 PM

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shukria - 11th May 2003, 12:17 PM

dost........channd,
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ji aap sahi hai - 11th May 2003, 12:20 PM

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shukra gujaar hu tumhari - 11th May 2003, 12:57 PM

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Is jivan ki bhag-daud maie
Jab koi khud ke liyae
Thhik se mahesoos nahi kar sakta
To wah..
Kisi dost ke liyae kyun??
Kyun mahesoos kare??
Kaise mahesoos kare??

meena aise lafz to bus aap hi keh sakti hain jo sirf such bayan karte hain.
bahot dino ke baad kuch dil me utarne wali ghazal mili....
aise hi likhti rahiye aap bus yahii dua hai....
aur mujhe P.M bhejti rahiye us khuda se bus yahi dua hai...
khudahafiz...


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ohhhhhhhhh - 19th June 2003, 12:08 AM

varinder dost, sanam, fanaah,
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22nd June 2003, 08:31 PM

Meena Ji ..

YooN mahsoos hota hai ki AapkoO dosto se kafi shikveiN haiN .. Dua karunga ki aapko thes pahuchane wali har shay ka khuda dil badal de ..

bahut achha likha hai ..

Likhti rahiye ..


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thanx - 22nd June 2003, 08:41 PM

kshitiz ji,
sabse pahlae to aapka shukria ada karti hu ke aapne meri nazam ko pasand kiya...
aap kahte hai muje dosto se hamesha shikve rahe hai... pata nahi.... maie sahi hu ya nahi.... is liyae to yah socha ke kisi se kya ummid rakhae....
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mahsoos - 15th February 2006, 10:15 AM

peera ko achee tarah se kaha hai bahut pyra hai..agar tumhe mahoos huya hai ki tumhara darad tumhre dost mahsoos nahee karte to galat mahsoos kiya hai doston ko mayoos kiya hai sach main galat mhoos kiya hai bas darad ka asas tumhre pas rahne dete hain ki shayree kar sako likhtee raho
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15th February 2006, 10:38 AM

Meena didi

Bahot hi sidhe labzo me aap ne bahot gaheri baat kar di he,
Khuda se dua he meri ki aap ki har tamanna puri ho jaye, aap ko bhi koi aisa dost mil jaye jo bina kahe aapki batein, aur aapki bhavna o ko samaz paye,


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Re: koi kaise mahesoos kare??? - 15th February 2006, 10:57 AM

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Mere dil ke kisi kone maie
Jab koi gum ubharta hai..
To chahti hu, ek aisa dost
Jo mujae... mere dard ko..
Mahesoos kare.....par
Ab lagta hai, maie galat hu..
Meri ichchha hi galat hai.
Is jivan ki bhag-daud maie
Jab koi khud ke liyae
Thhik se mahesoos nahi kar sakta
To wah..
Kisi dost ke liyae kyun??
Kyun mahesoos kare??
Kaise mahesoos kare??
Meena Ji
Mera Pranaam!!
Bahaut accha laga parhkar.

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15th February 2006, 04:32 PM

meena dost

pata naheen kaise aap ki yeh itni puraani nazm meri nazroan se oajhal rahi.
khair mein bas itna kahoon gaa ke ab itna arsa guzerne ke baad aap ka nazariya ghalat ho gaya ho gaa.
balke mein kahoon gaa ke yeh aap ne khud hi ghalat saabit kiyaa hai, aap khud sab doston ke bare mein soachti bhi ho, unke ghem o fikr share bhi kerti ho aur zahir hai aap ke dukh sukh bhi aap ke saath lage huey hain.
baharhaal aap ke likhne ka andaaz jab bhi aalaa thaa ab bhi aalaa hai.
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15th February 2006, 04:47 PM

Mere dil ke kisi kone maie
Jab koi gum ubharta hai..
To chahti hu, ek aisa dost
Jo mujae... mere dard ko..
Mahesoos kare.....par
Ab lagta hai, maie galat hu..
Meri ichchha hi galat hai.
Is jivan ki bhag-daud maie
Jab koi khud ke liyae
Thhik se mahesoos nahi kar sakta
To wah..
Kisi dost ke liyae kyun??
Kyun mahesoos kare??
Kaise mahesoos kare??


Sundar likha hai didi...humesha ki tarah... sach hi kaha aajkal apne liye kisi le paas samaya nahi... doosre ke dukha kahaan baantega...but fir bhi kucch log aise mil hi jaate hain....meri ek didi to hain mere saath

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Re: mahsoos - 21st February 2006, 10:53 AM

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21st February 2006, 10:56 AM

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Meena didi

Bahot hi sidhe labzo me aap ne bahot gaheri baat kar di he,
Khuda se dua he meri ki aap ki har tamanna puri ho jaye, aap ko bhi koi aisa dost mil jaye jo bina kahe aapki batein, aur aapki bhavna o ko samaz paye,

naaz,

tumhara bahut hi shukria. tumhari dua ko bhagwaan ke charno mai samarpiit karti hu .
waise mera maanna hai ke dost mil hi jaate hai shart itni ke aap
laayak hone chahiye dosti ke .

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Re: Re: koi kaise mahesoos kare??? - 21st February 2006, 10:58 AM

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21st February 2006, 11:01 AM

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meena dost

pata naheen kaise aap ki yeh itni puraani nazm meri nazroan se oajhal rahi.
khair mein bas itna kahoon gaa ke ab itna arsa guzerne ke baad aap ka nazariya ghalat ho gaya ho gaa.
balke mein kahoon gaa ke yeh aap ne khud hi ghalat saabit kiyaa hai, aap khud sab doston ke bare mein soachti bhi ho, unke ghem o fikr share bhi kerti ho aur zahir hai aap ke dukh sukh bhi aap ke saath lage huey hain.
baharhaal aap ke likhne ka andaaz jab bhi aalaa thaa ab bhi aalaa hai.
God bless you.

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Mere dil ke kisi kone maie
Jab koi gum ubharta hai..
To chahti hu, ek aisa dost
Jo mujae... mere dard ko..
Mahesoos kare.....par
Ab lagta hai, maie galat hu..
Meri ichchha hi galat hai.
Is jivan ki bhag-daud maie
Jab koi khud ke liyae
Thhik se mahesoos nahi kar sakta
To wah..
Kisi dost ke liyae kyun??
Kyun mahesoos kare??
Kaise mahesoos kare??


Sundar likha hai didi...humesha ki tarah... sach hi kaha aajkal apne liye kisi le paas samaya nahi... doosre ke dukha kahaan baantega...but fir bhi kucch log aise mil hi jaate hain....meri ek didi to hain mere saath

bahut pyaara likha hai aapne...bass yun hi likhti rahiye

mere pulkit,
tumhare mere liye aise khayal ko bhagwaan ke charan mai samarpiit karti hu .
khush raho.

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Re: koi kaise mahesoos kare??? - 27th February 2006, 01:39 PM

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Mere dil ke kisi kone maie
Jab koi gum ubharta hai..
To chahti hu, ek aisa dost
Jo mujae... mere dard ko..
Mahesoos kare.....par
Ab lagta hai, maie galat hu..
Meri ichchha hi galat hai.
Is jivan ki bhag-daud maie
Jab koi khud ke liyae
Thhik se mahesoos nahi kar sakta
To wah..
Kisi dost ke liyae kyun??
Kyun mahesoos kare??
Kaise mahesoos kare??
Didu,
Aapke khyal pade Sach kaha didu aapne. Aksar zindagi ki bheed mein.... kisi acche dost ki chah mein.... yahi bhool jate hain ki shayad hum apne aapko zyada acche se sambhal sakte hain. Par didu, kabhi kabhi jo log humare aas pass hote hain, humein bina kuch kahe kitna kuch sikha dete hain... shayad wahi humare dost ban jate hain, shayad dosti aise hi hoti ho...? Ek khyal hai, bus aapse share karna chaha aur likh diya.

Shayad wo dost
khud ko aaj tak na samajh paya ho
Shayad
na dekh paye mujh darpan ke paar bhi
Par phir bhi lagta hai
Uske saath
Dekhungi ik aur nazaria
Zindagi jine ka
Mushkilon se ladne ka
Muskrane ka...
Dost na bhi de sake saath
Phir bhi dosti sikha degi har baat
Yun hi...
Chalte hue
Jab jab gum ubhrega
Kahin na kahin
Ik dost hoga
Jo kuch pal saath chalega


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bilkul sahi yahi lagta tha pahile mujhe bhi ,yaha kisi ko apne liye time mahi kisi aur ka dard kaha samjhega,
hamari umeed intzaar bemani hai, but yaha aakar ye bhi galat hi laga yaha par sab hain na dard baatne wale , aa sabse payari dost aur ab aap jeesi dost ho to kahna kya dard kaha raha

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Mere dil ke kisi kone maie
Jab koi gum ubharta hai..
To chahti hu, ek aisa dost
Jo mujae... mere dard ko..
Mahesoos kare.....par
Ab lagta hai, maie galat hu..
Meri ichchha hi galat hai.
Is jivan ki bhag-daud maie
Jab koi khud ke liyae
Thhik se mahesoos nahi kar sakta
To wah..
Kisi dost ke liyae kyun??
Kyun mahesoos kare??
Kaise mahesoos kare??


Namaskaar Meena dii

aapki baat to sahi hai, jeevan ki bhaag-daud meiN bahut kuch badal gya hai...kisi ke paas bhi waqt nahi hai doosre ke liye, har koi pehle apne bare meiN hi sochta hai...ab to yeh aam si baat hi ho chali hai...!

aapne bahut sahi aur sacchi baat saamne rakhi hai...dii mehfil meiN aate rha kijiye, aap jaise badoN ki SDC ko bahut jaroorat hai, aapke ashirwaad meiN sdc surakshit hai...so bazm meiN apni haziri lgate rha kijiye.

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Mere dil ke kisi kone maie
Jab koi gum ubharta hai..
To chahti hu, ek aisa dost
Jo mujae... mere dard ko..
Mahesoos kare.....par
Ab lagta hai, maie galat hu..
Meri ichchha hi galat hai.
Is jivan ki bhag-daud maie
Jab koi khud ke liyae
Thhik se mahesoos nahi kar sakta
To wah..
Kisi dost ke liyae kyun??
Kyun mahesoos kare??
Kaise mahesoos kare??
Ek dam durust farmaya aapne....sunder ahsaas
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Meena ji namste

aaj kal es maahol me insaan ke pass apne liye hi waqt hi nhi hai...
To bechaaraa dusron ki kyaa khaak parawaah karegaa...


Aisaa lagtaa hai jaise aapne rachnaa ke zariye mere dil ki baat likh di

Ek ek sabd dil ki baat kahtaa huaa.........

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