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Exclamation pyar kar meri jaan, MUJHE sirf par kar....!! - 18th November 2007, 11:48 AM

saare aashiqoN ko is nacheez aashiq ka salaam,

AansuoN ke saath jaan bhi nazroN se utar jaaye,, teri yaad jo aaj humko dhundhli nazar aaye,, teri yaad hawaa ban seene ko cheere,, aaNkhoN se kabhi dil se guzar jaaye,, hai itni si iltiza khuda se humari,, is hawaa me aaj ye jism v bikhar jaaye,, dil karta hai ki aaj is syahi ki sisi me,lahoo saara utar jaaye,, aur naam ye "ghayal" humesha ko marr jaaye,, isi bahaane kuch tera roop v nikhar jaaye............



Dariya-e-ishq ke liye khud ko taiyaar kar,
Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Kabhi koi dil jo na tootne paaye yahaaN,
Kuch aisa tu jahaaN me eh mere yaaar kar,

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Jane waale ko jana tha, to wo chala gaya,
Uske liye khud ko tu na yuN bekarar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Wapas tere paas aana pade us bewafa ko,
Mohabbat tu usse itni beshumaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Usw dhoodhta tu ktuN ghum kar, darbadar,
Dil cheer le apna aur uska deedaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Kyun karta hai tu dushmani khud se “ghayal”,
DushmanoN ko v dostoN me shumaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar. haaN sach sirf pyar kar.......!!



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saare aashiqoN ko is nacheez aashiq ka salaam,

AansuoN ke saath jaan bhi nazroN se utar jaaye,, teri yaad jo aaj humko dhundhli nazar aaye,, teri yaad hawaa ban seene ko cheere,, aaNkhoN se kabhi dil se guzar jaaye,, hai itni si iltiza khuda se humari,, is hawaa me aaj ye jism v bikhar jaaye,, dil karta hai ki aaj is syahi ki sisi me,lahoo saara utar jaaye,, aur naam ye "ghayal" humesha ko marr jaaye,, isi bahaane kuch tera roop v nikhar jaaye............



Dariya-e-ishq ke liye khud ko taiyaar kar,
Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Kabhi koi dil jo na tootne paaye yahaaN,
Kuch aisa tu jahaaN me eh mere yaaar kar,

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Jane waale ko jana tha, to wo chala gaya,
Uske liye khud ko tu na yuN bekarar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Wapas tere paas aana pade us bewafa ko,
Mohabbat tu usse itni beshumaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Usw dhoodhta tu ktuN ghum kar, darbadar,
Dil cheer le apna aur uska deedaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Kyun karta hai tu dushmani khud se “ghayal”,
DushmanoN ko v dostoN me shumaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar. haaN sach sirf pyar kar.......!!
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hi dear..))) - 18th November 2007, 12:43 PM

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saare aashiqoN ko is nacheez aashiq ka salaam,

AansuoN ke saath jaan bhi nazroN se utar jaaye,, teri yaad jo aaj humko dhundhli nazar aaye,, teri yaad hawaa ban seene ko cheere,, aaNkhoN se kabhi dil se guzar jaaye,, hai itni si iltiza khuda se humari,, is hawaa me aaj ye jism v bikhar jaaye,, dil karta hai ki aaj is syahi ki sisi me,lahoo saara utar jaaye,, aur naam ye "ghayal" humesha ko marr jaaye,, isi bahaane kuch tera roop v nikhar jaaye............



Dariya-e-ishq ke liye khud ko taiyaar kar,
Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Kabhi koi dil jo na tootne paaye yahaaN,
Kuch aisa tu jahaaN me eh mere yaaar kar,

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Jane waale ko jana tha, to wo chala gaya,
Uske liye khud ko tu na yuN bekarar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Wapas tere paas aana pade us bewafa ko,
Mohabbat tu usse itni beshumaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Usw dhoodhta tu ktuN ghum kar, darbadar,
Dil cheer le apna aur uska deedaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Kyun karta hai tu dushmani khud se “ghayal”,
DushmanoN ko v dostoN me shumaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar. haaN sach sirf pyar kar.......!!


ghayal ji pahle to apka naam padhkar hi dil kuch ghayal ho jata hai..ghayal_shayar..kitna dard sa hai..ab dear u write it very well..really this is a nice creation of ur's..

keep posting such gems..

hv anice time..

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Bahut hi umdaa likha hai aapne...............mujhe sabse zyada jo lines pasand aayin wo hain..........

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saare aashiqoN ko is nacheez aashiq ka salaam,

AansuoN ke saath jaan bhi nazroN se utar jaaye,, teri yaad jo aaj humko dhundhli nazar aaye,, teri yaad hawaa ban seene ko cheere,, aaNkhoN se kabhi dil se guzar jaaye,, hai itni si iltiza khuda se humari,, is hawaa me aaj ye jism v bikhar jaaye,, dil karta hai ki aaj is syahi ki sisi me,lahoo saara utar jaaye,, aur naam ye "ghayal" humesha ko marr jaaye,, isi bahaane kuch tera roop v nikhar jaaye............



Dariya-e-ishq ke liye khud ko taiyaar kar,
Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Kabhi koi dil jo na tootne paaye yahaaN,
Kuch aisa tu jahaaN me eh mere yaaar kar,

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Jane waale ko jana tha, to wo chala gaya,
Uske liye khud ko tu na yuN bekarar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Wapas tere paas aana pade us bewafa ko,
Mohabbat tu usse itni beshumaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Usw dhoodhta tu ktuN ghum kar, darbadar,
Dil cheer le apna aur uska deedaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Kyun karta hai tu dushmani khud se “ghayal”,
DushmanoN ko v dostoN me shumaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar. haaN sach sirf pyar kar.......!!

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ghayal ji aapne bahut aacha likha hai bahut dino baada aapko padha padh kar bahut aacha laga aise hi likhte rahan.....daad kubul kijiy ga......

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saare aashiqoN ko is nacheez aashiq ka salaam,

AansuoN ke saath jaan bhi nazroN se utar jaaye,, teri yaad jo aaj humko dhundhli nazar aaye,, teri yaad hawaa ban seene ko cheere,, aaNkhoN se kabhi dil se guzar jaaye,, hai itni si iltiza khuda se humari,, is hawaa me aaj ye jism v bikhar jaaye,, dil karta hai ki aaj is syahi ki sisi me,lahoo saara utar jaaye,, aur naam ye "ghayal" humesha ko marr jaaye,, isi bahaane kuch tera roop v nikhar jaaye............



Dariya-e-ishq ke liye khud ko taiyaar kar,
Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Kabhi koi dil jo na tootne paaye yahaaN,
Kuch aisa tu jahaaN me eh mere yaaar kar,

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Jane waale ko jana tha, to wo chala gaya,
Uske liye khud ko tu na yuN bekarar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Wapas tere paas aana pade us bewafa ko,
Mohabbat tu usse itni beshumaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Usw dhoodhta tu ktuN ghum kar, darbadar,
Dil cheer le apna aur uska deedaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Kyun karta hai tu dushmani khud se “ghayal”,
DushmanoN ko v dostoN me shumaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar. haaN sach sirf pyar kar.......!!



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har baar ki tarah yeh bhi khoob likkha hai tumne.or ishq me doobkar likkha hai toh or bhi cute cute lag raha hai..waise jo jo tumne likkha hai us per amal bhi karte ho ya nahi

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saare aashiqoN ko is nacheez aashiq ka salaam,

AansuoN ke saath jaan bhi nazroN se utar jaaye,, teri yaad jo aaj humko dhundhli nazar aaye,, teri yaad hawaa ban seene ko cheere,, aaNkhoN se kabhi dil se guzar jaaye,, hai itni si iltiza khuda se humari,, is hawaa me aaj ye jism v bikhar jaaye,, dil karta hai ki aaj is syahi ki sisi me,lahoo saara utar jaaye,, aur naam ye "ghayal" humesha ko marr jaaye,, isi bahaane kuch tera roop v nikhar jaaye............



Dariya-e-ishq ke liye khud ko taiyaar kar,
Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Kabhi koi dil jo na tootne paaye yahaaN,
Kuch aisa tu jahaaN me eh mere yaaar kar,

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Jane waale ko jana tha, to wo chala gaya,
Uske liye khud ko tu na yuN bekarar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Wapas tere paas aana pade us bewafa ko,
Mohabbat tu usse itni beshumaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Usw dhoodhta tu ktuN ghum kar, darbadar,
Dil cheer le apna aur uska deedaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Kyun karta hai tu dushmani khud se “ghayal”,
DushmanoN ko v dostoN me shumaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar. haaN sach sirf pyar kar.......!!


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Jane waale ko jana tha, to wo chala gaya,
Uske liye khud ko tu na yuN bekarar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Wapas tere paas aana pade us bewafa ko,
Mohabbat tu usse itni beshumaar kar….


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ghayal ji pahle to apka naam padhkar hi dil kuch ghayal ho jata hai..ghayal_shayar..kitna dard sa hai..ab dear u write it very well..really this is a nice creation of ur's..

keep posting such gems..

hv anice time..

pari..

nanhi pari ji pehle to maafi chahuNga k bahut der se javaab de raha huN, doosra aapka nam mujhe pata nahiN, aur aapko pehli baar hin is nacheez ne apni mehfil meN dekha hai, aur dekh kar behad khushi hui ki aapko is nacheez ka likha pasand aaya, haaN ye guzarish jaroor rahegi aapse ki aage aap hume yuNhi padhti raheN, aur haaN mujhe aap keh ke na bulaaya kateN, lagta hai maiN bahut buddha ho gaya huN....!!



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Bahut hi umdaa likha hai aapne...............mujhe sabse zyada jo lines pasand aayin wo hain..........

Wapas tere paas aana pade us bewafa ko,
Mohabbat tu usse itni beshumaar kar….

issi tarah likhte rahiye...............shubhkaamnaayen

maiN aapse v maafi chahuNga ki aapka v naam mujhe pata nahin hai, par jaan kar khushi hui ki is nacheez ki kosish aapko pasand aayi, bas guzarish yahi rahegi ki is nacheez ko padhne ki jehmat aap aage v yuNhi uthaati raheN....!!



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wahhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhhh
kya khub likha hai aap ne....dad kabul farmaye...

lamha ji behad shukriya is nacheez ki mehfil meN shirkat karne ke liye, aur iski khubsoorati meN chaar chaand lagane ke liye, bas aage v ye jehmiyat aap uthati raheN....!!



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hi Lucky

bahut tym baad tumhari koi poetry padhne ko mili mujhe
sacch bahut accha laga padh kar

har baar ki tarah yeh bhi khoob likkha hai tumne.or ishq me doobkar likkha hai toh or bhi cute cute lag raha hai..waise jo jo tumne likkha hai us per amal bhi karte ho ya nahi

Jane waale ko jana tha, to wo chala gaya,
Uske liye khud ko tu na yuN bekarar kar….


yeh sher mujhe accha laga...umeed hai is sher ko tum bhi samjhoge or usper amal karoge
aise hi likhte rehna humeshaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

take care


dd mujhe poori umeed thi ki koi puraana padhega to ye savaal jaroor uthaayega, aur aapne mujhe bilkul v niraash nahin kiya, aur aapke savaal ka yai javaab de sakta huN, shayad haaN aur sayad na....!! waise aapne ise padha aur pasand kiya aan kar behad khushi hui, bsa aage aap yuNhi padhti raheN....!!



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ghayal ji aapne bahut aacha likha hai bahut dino baada aapko padha padh kar bahut aacha laga aise hi likhte rahan.....daad kubul kijiy ga......

aapki dost,
sandhya

aapki daad humare sar aaNkhoN par, bas guzarish yahi rahegi ki aage v aap yuNhi hume padhne k jehmiyateN uthaati raheN....!!



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lucky bohat acha laga tumhara likha parrh ker ye sher bohat acha laga mujhe



Wapas tere paas aana pade us bewafa ko,
Mohabbat tu usse itni beshumaar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.


yunhi likhte raho khush raho aur haan shayri se hat ker bhi kuch kehna hai mujhe ke apna ye avatar change ker sako to bohat mehrbani hogi pehli baar meri nazar parri to mera dill kharab hogaya main bohat kamzor dill ki hoon aesi cheezain nahi dekh sakti lekin nazar to parr hi jati hai aur main nahi chahti ke ye baar baar dikhe mujhe agar amalker sako to bohat nawazish werna bura mat manna kionki behar haal tum apni merzi ke malik ho

ye to humari khusnasibi ki aapne ise pasand kiya aur hume yaad rakha, nahin to itne dinoN meN to maiN shayri bhool gaya tha, ye to socha hiN nahin tha ki aap logoN ko yaad rahuiNga, waise ap kosish rahegi ki aata rahuN, bas yuNhi aap log mehfil ki raunak barqaraar rakheN....!!



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Jane waale ko jana tha, to wo chala gaya,
Uske liye khud ko tu na yuN bekarar kar….

Pyar kar meri jaan! mujhe sirf pyar kar.

Wapas tere paas aana pade us bewafa ko,
Mohabbat tu usse itni beshumaar kar….


BAhut hi acchi peshkash hain lucky tumhari...Hume behad pasand aayi khaaskar ye upar ke do sher....daad....

Plz ek request hain apna avataar plz change karo.....yeh dusri baar keh rahin hoom main tumse request hain..bahut daravna lagta hain...mujhe jab pata hota hain ki tumhari post hain to turant avatar ki side pe kuch rakh deti hoon taki tumhaar avatar na dekhna pade..koi aisa bhi avatar lagata hain..I hope tum change kar doge.............


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umeed hai dd, ki ab aap khush hoNgi naye avatar se, aur ab aapko prblm nahin hogi, aur aapne is kalaam ko padha aur pasand kiya humare liye bahut badi baat hai, aur fir se maafi chaahuNga muddatoN baad javaab dene ke liye....!!



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