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Post hum ahle mohabbat walon per....... - 12th May 2003, 03:47 PM

sangdil khuda sangdil sanam sangdil hi insaan milte hain
tum use shahre wafa kehte ho jazbat jahan pe bikte hain

zakhmi dil ulfat ke mare hur ek se dhoka khate hain
hum ahle mohabbat walon per aksra aise zamane aate hain

itni mohabbat itni tamanna hamein kase ho gayi hai unki
woh zakhm dil ko dete hain hum rooh bhi hazir karte hain

dekho to diwana pan uska aur uski mohabbat bhi dekho
kabhi jo jaan humi pe dete the ab jaan hamari lete hain

kisi aur ka dard kisi aur ka ghum hum thuk gaye hain ab inse
hum jaan bhi deden unke liye per woh nufrat humse karte hain

ab aur 'Damal' kya butlaaye ab aur uski kya tareef kare
woh dil mein hamare rehte hain hum unse mohabbat karte hain


Damal.
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kuch too hi mere dard ka mazmoon samajh le
hansta hua chehra to zamane ke liye hai

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hi - 12th May 2003, 05:10 PM

hi damal g
how r u?
kiya ghazab ka likha hay aap ne
kitni gahri soch hay aap ki
or dard to ham samajh hi sakte hain kitna ho ga
is dard ko bardasht karne main..
keep it up dear.
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12th May 2003, 05:25 PM

sangdil khuda sangdil sanam sangdil hi insaan milte hain
tum use shahre wafa kehte ho jazbat jahan pe bikte hain

Qasam se kya sher hai Damal aap ne is duniya ki sachchayi bayan kar di...

zakhmi dil ulfat ke mare hur ek se dhoka khate hain
hum ahle mohabbat walon per aksra aise zamane aate hain

itni mohabbat itni tamanna hamein kase ho gayi hai unki
woh zakhm dil ko dete hain hum rooh bhi hazir karte hain

dekho to diwana pan uska aur uski mohabbat bhi dekho
kabhi jo jaan humi pe dete the ab jaan hamari lete hain

kisi aur ka dard kisi aur ka ghum hum thuk gaye hain ab inse
hum jaan bhi deden unke liye per woh nufrat humse karte hain

ab aur 'Damal' kya butlaaye ab aur uski kya tareef kare
woh dil mein hamare rehte hain hum unse mohabbat karte hain


Damal main kaise aap ki ghazal ki tareef karoon kitna dard hai aap ke lafzon mein, Damal aap ke alfaz mere seene ko cheer ker
is dil mein paiwast ho gaye,
Damal aap ki hur ek line to qayamat dha rahi hai.
aisa mut likha kariye Damal itne dard bhare sher hain kis me himmat hai jo apni aakhon ko bina num hue in ko padh le.
Damal aap ke qalaam ko khuda aise hi nikharta rahe yahi meri
dua hai.
isi umeed ke saath ki aap aise hi likhte rahenge aap se ijazat
leta hoon
khudahafiz


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13th May 2003, 03:55 PM

banjara and fanah aap logon ko MERI ghazal pasand aayi
uske liye main shukrguzar hoon...
aap logon ke saath ki aise hi umeed hai...
sirf aap logon ka bhi saath rahega to bhi mujhe bahot khushi
hogi...aur agar koi meri ghazal ki taref nahin karta to main mohtaj nahin hoon kisi ki tareef ka...jub insaan ko ghamand ho jata hai khud pur to woh aisa hi kerta hai...but i don't care whom, who don't respect my feelings...or anyones feeling
aise hi saath dete rahiye...
khudahafiz....


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13th May 2003, 04:03 PM

namaste damalji..

i can't say anything... its too good.. shayad..mere lafz.. bhi kaam pad jayenge...bahut hi umda aur accha likha hai apne

bye and take care..


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Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai...
Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah...
Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai...
   
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14th May 2003, 11:51 AM

tanhai aap ka bahot bahot shukriya jo aap ko meri ghazal
pasand aayi aap logon ka aise hi saath milta raha to aur bhi
achcha likhta rahoonga....
khudahafiz....


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14th May 2003, 01:30 PM

Wah! Damal ji... Apne to ghazab kar diya hai... yeh kalaam itna dard bhara hai, itna khubsoorat.. har ek sher apne aap me mukammil hai... Andaaz e bayaan lajawaab hai.. lafzon ka itna haseen istemaal kiya hai aapne.. tareef karne ke liye humare paas shayad sahi alfaaz nahi.. bas yahi kahenge ki aapka tahe dil se shukria ke aapne ke kalaam likha! Bohat Bohat Shukria


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15th May 2003, 12:06 PM

banno aap ka bahot bahot shukriya jo aap ne is ghazal ko apni
tareef ke qabil samjha....
thanks again..
i will try my best to come with a great shayri....
khudahafiz...


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15th May 2003, 02:13 PM

damal bhai bahut achha likha hai ..
mujhe ye line bahut pasand aai

ab aur 'Damal' kya butlaaye ab aur uski kya tareef kare
woh dil mein hamare rehte hain hum unse mohabbat karte hain

vaise to poori creation hi jabardast hai magar dil to kisi ek cheej par hi aata hai na ..

likhte rahiye
milte rahenge ..


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