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Kyu Hai - 13th June 2006, 05:14 PM

HI ALL,
THESE LINES, I HAD WRITTEN WHEN I WAS FEELING VERY LONELY, AND NO ONE WAS THERE WITH ME, BUT THERE WAS STILL A HOPE IN MY EMPTY HEART THAT SOMEONE WAS THERE WITH ME...THOUGH I KNOW THAT THERE WAS NO ONE....KOI ANJANA SA HAI JO MUJHE APNI CHAHAT MAI LIYE BAITHA HAI...



YE DIL ITNA BEKRAAR KYU HAI,
TANHA TANHA MERA SANSAAR KYU HAI,
TERE ANE KI KOI UMEED NAHI,
FIR BHI TERA INTZAAR KYU HAI,


DIL SE DIL TAK JO CHAHAT JAGI THI,
USS CHAHAT KA DIL GUNAHGAAR KYU HAI,


TERI DO BAATO KO CHAHAT SAMAJH BAITHA,
YE DIL TERI CHAHAT KA TALABGAAR KYU HAI,


TERI BERUKHI KA ILM TO PEHLE SE THA,
FIR AB YE DIL ITNA BEZAAR KYU HAI,


NA TERI CHAHAT MERE LIYE, NA HI TU MERA HAI,
BAS ITNA BATA, MUJHE AAJ BHI TUJHSE PYAR KYU HAI............





LIFE IS LIKE A NEVER ENDING CHALLENGE....


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Kyu Tanha-Se Ho Gaye Hai Tere Jane Ke Baad......JAYA
   
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14th June 2006, 04:00 AM

Dear empty hrt, i dot knw ur name..

too good,,,,bahut dard chipa hai tumahre shabdon me..aapne theek kaha akele hoke bhi koyi paas tha,,,,shayad bhagwaan! he is there for everyone and sometimes we feel ye aisa kyu hua, but we dont know things could be even more worse...sometimes

DIL SE DIL TAK JO CHAHAT JAGI THI,
USS CHAHAT KA DIL GUNAHGAAR KYU HAI,


TERI DO BAATO KO CHAHAT SAMAJH BAITHA,
YE DIL TERI CHAHAT KA TALABGAAR KYU HAI,


These lines touched my hrt and sooul...dil se dil ki feelings aur aaj hum uski ke gunhegaar, kisi ka do pal humsey milna baatain karna aur hamara umar bhar us sey pyar samajh kar .........

i would jus say, your screen name says empty hrtm but agar dil empty hota, to kya aap itna kuch keh paatey, 'shayad nahi'

just a comment...

Luv ya
keep writing and let the feelings that run deep flow on the paper

Priya


Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......

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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!


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Agree with you - 14th June 2006, 04:35 AM

I have gone through this condition and believe me its very true.
But I have learned one thing.......

When ppl don't react the way you want them to be, just PUSH,
When you don't have any listening ears, jsut PUSH,
When nothing seems to go right, just PUSH.

Do you know what is PUSH ?

Pray Until Something Happens.

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14th June 2006, 07:31 AM

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14th June 2006, 10:51 AM

Nice words... accha likha hai aapne... likhte rahiye...


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12th December 2007, 02:34 PM

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Originally Posted by LuvPriya View Post
Dear empty hrt, i dot knw ur name..

too good,,,,bahut dard chipa hai tumahre shabdon me..aapne theek kaha akele hoke bhi koyi paas tha,,,,shayad bhagwaan! he is there for everyone and sometimes we feel ye aisa kyu hua, but we dont know things could be even more worse...sometimes

DIL SE DIL TAK JO CHAHAT JAGI THI,
USS CHAHAT KA DIL GUNAHGAAR KYU HAI,


TERI DO BAATO KO CHAHAT SAMAJH BAITHA,
YE DIL TERI CHAHAT KA TALABGAAR KYU HAI,


These lines touched my hrt and sooul...dil se dil ki feelings aur aaj hum uski ke gunhegaar, kisi ka do pal humsey milna baatain karna aur hamara umar bhar us sey pyar samajh kar .........

i would jus say, your screen name says empty hrtm but agar dil empty hota, to kya aap itna kuch keh paatey, 'shayad nahi'

just a comment...

Luv ya
keep writing and let the feelings that run deep flow on the paper

Priya

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Myself is Jaya......thnx for appreciating my poem..........


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26th December 2007, 08:50 PM

very nice..


mujhe phool na dena mujhe unse nafrat hai, dena hai to kaantey de dena ,mujhe unki aadat hai,
wo chubtey hai aur zakhm dete hai imaandaari se, phool to bewafa hotey hai...dhoka dete hai wafadaari se

DARD KO BHI AB DARD HONE LAGA, DARD KHUD HI GAAV BARANE LAGA,
DARD KE MAARE HUM NA ROYE KABHI, DARD HUM KO CHUKAR KHUD HI RONE LAGA..............
   
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Hi - 27th December 2007, 10:34 AM

Thnx Dear.............


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29th December 2007, 11:44 PM

Hi Jaya ji,

Accha likha hain aapne...


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15th January 2008, 11:37 AM

great posting i like it



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