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dost ki khatir aana pada yahan - 24th September 2004, 08:19 PM

kabhi jamood kabhi inteshaar sa hai
meri zindagi ko apni tabahi ka intezar sa hai
hui to kahan aa ke veeranon mein shaam
ki yaha jo majar hai meri majar sa hai

kaise rakhunga khamoshi ko dil mein
pichle shor-e-kayamat ki dhamak baki hai
meri jhulsi hui yaadon ki ghuti season mein
teri saason ki thori se mahak baki hai

yeh aankhein ayeena dil ka
hazaron rang mein dhal ke
yeh jhukti hain haya ban ke
yeh uthti hain dua ban ke

main dhoondhta hoon jise woh jahan nahin milta
kahin jameen to kahin aasmaan nahin milta
woh cheez mil gaye jisse hua katl mera
magar uspe kisi ke hathon ka nishan nahin milta
gar khuda nahin milta to yeh matam kyon hai
mujhe khud apne pairon ka nishan nahin milta
khada hoon kab se to chehron ki basti mein
per tere chehre ke jaisa koi chehra nahin milta.


wo siva yaad aye door jane ke baad
zindagi badh gaye zahar khane ke baad
roshni ke liye ghar jalana para
kaise kulmat badhi tere jane ke baad
   
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25th September 2004, 01:04 PM

HI Ek Tanha dil ji,

Dost bohot hi dard bharey alfaz likhey hai tumney. Wah kah kar gunaah nahi karna chaahta, par such may dil mein utar gaye hai aap kay alfaz.

Dua kartey hai aap ko aap ki manzil jaldi hi mil jaaye.


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25th September 2004, 05:20 PM

Ek Tanha dil ji,

Sabse pehle toh aapka swagat hai yahan….

Aapka kalaam……dard se sarobaar…kitna dard liye huey hain aapke shabd….
Dard saaf jhalak raha hai…iss par wah nahin karoongi….lekin jis khoobi se dard ko lafzon mein dhaala hai wo kabeel-e-tareef hai….dua rahegi….ki aapko sukoon mile…

Chalti hoon…take care


Main zakhm zakhm hoon phir bhi tujhe dikhayi na doon
tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon
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Namaskar - 26th September 2004, 11:23 AM

Namaskar....(............)

Aapke pehle rachna padee thi and was very touching.Fir aapke yeh rachna padee sach mein kabeel-e-tareef hay.Daad kabul kijeye.

wo siva yaad aye door jane ke baad
zindagi badh gaye zahar khane ke baad
roshni ke liye ghar jalana para
kaise kulmat badhi tere jane ke baad

Apne Ek Rachna ki kuch panktiyaan yaad aa gayee aapke yeh Panktiyaan dekh kar.


Tere Jaaney kay baad

Ek Mohlat mili hay maut se Aaj
Ek Zindagi hay bakey teray janey kay baad
Kuch Ashq hain baakey Naino mein Aaj
Ek Mohlat mili hay muskuraney ki Aaj
Ek Saans hay baakey teray kafa honey kay baad

Dil ki Ek Dhadkan hay baakey teray Jaaney kay baad
Hawaon mein khushboo hay baakey teray janey kay baad
Yaadon ka toofan hay baakey teray jaaney kay baad
Ek faasla hay baakey teray janey kay baad
Ek Aas hay baakey teray janey kay baad
Ek Saans hay baakey teray Jaaney kay baad

Shayad yeh kuch panktiyaan aapka dard kum kar sakey.Sada kush Rahiye.Aur Muskurate rahiye

Take care


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26th September 2004, 02:17 PM

tanha sahab

phir wahi .... bhai kya bat hai aap apne sher post kyun nahi karte.... ye sare bhi sune hue hai,.... aur aapne phir inko likhne walon ke nam pesh nahi kiye..... bhai muafi chahunga ... par aap samjhe meri bat ko aap akele hakdar nahi.. in tareefon ke... ki jinme aapka hath khali unhe yahan likhne main hai... khair yahan post karne ke liye shukriya.....

aapka apna


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Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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26th September 2004, 02:32 PM

Tanha dil saahab..

Sabse pehle to is site par aapka swaagat hai.. Aapne bohat achha likha hai.. aapki kuchh pankiyaan paR kar kuchh naami shayaroN ka likha yaad aa gaya.. jaise:

main dhoondhta hoon jise woh jahan nahin milta
kahin jameen to kahin aasmaan nahin milta
woh cheez mil gaye jisse hua katl mera
magar uspe kisi ke hathon ka nishan nahin milta
gar khuda nahin milta to yeh matam kyon hai
mujhe khud apne pairon ka nishan nahin milta
khada hoon kab se to chehron ki basti mein
per tere chehre ke jaisa koi chehra nahin milta.

Is par yaad aaya hume..

kabhi kisi ko mukammal jahaan nahi milta
kahin zami to kahin aasmaa nahi milta

jise bhi dekhiye vo apne aap mein gum hai
zubaa mili hai magar humzubaa nahi milta

bujhaa saka hai bhala kaun vaqt ke shole
ye aisi aag hai jisme dhuaa nahi milta

tere jahaaN mein aisa nahi ki pyaar na ho
jahaa ummeed ho iski vahaaN nahi milta.


aur..

yeh aankhein ayeena dil ka
hazaron rang mein dhal ke
yeh jhukti hain haya ban ke
yeh uthti hain dua ban ke

ye par kar Javed Akhtar ka lkha.. aur nusrat Fateh Ali Khan ji ka gaya ye geet yaad aaya..

Aankhein neechi hui to haya ban gayi..
Aankhein oonchi hui to dua ban gayi..
Aankhein uth kar jhhuki to adaa ban gayi..
Aankhein jhhuk kar uthi to kaza ban gayi..
Aankhein jinme hai qaid aasmaan o zameen..
Nargisi nargisi.. Surmagi surmagi.


Aapke kalaam bohat khubsorat hain.. jo itna pyaare naghmoN ki yaad aa gayi..

yunhi likhte rahein..


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23rd May 2009, 06:09 PM

Hi friend

Its really very heart touching.

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Thokar se Jaag Jaate hain Ashique mare mare.
   
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