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~.. Baandhiye - 15th December 2012, 07:18 PM

baraye- islaah ek ghazal pesh hai

is tarah shouk ka rasta bandhiye
rahbaroN se zara faslaa bandhiye

jism se rooh tak ek sa bandhiye
naam se naam ko naam sa bandhiye

baandhna aab* kaa koe mushkil nahiN
haaN magar iski had bhi zara bandhiye

* aab ... water

ye jo dil hai kayee raste haiN ise
aisa kariye ise do jagah bandhiye

sabne dair-o-haram maiN hai baandha use
aap bhi Qaafiye meiN khudaa bandhiye

ye hai ahad-e-wafa toot hi jayega
bandhiye bandhiye jis tarah bandhiye

kar to leN ishq fir se magar fikr ji
apne darwaaje par kyuN bala bandhiye

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15th December 2012, 08:42 PM

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baraye- islaah ek ghazal pesh hai

is tarah shouk ka rasta bandhiye
rahbaroN se zara faslaa bandhiye

bahut khoob
jism se rooh tak ek sa bandhiye
naam se naam ko naam sa bandhiye

kya kehne
baandhna aab* kaa koe mushkil nahiN
haaN magar iski had bhi zara bandhiye

lajwaab
* aab ... water

ye jo dil hai kayee raste haiN ise
aisa kariye ise do jagah bandhiye

gour talab
sabne
dair-o-haram maiN hai baandha use
aap bhi Qaafiye meiN khudaa bandhiye

ye hai ahad-e-wafa toot hi jayega
bandhiye bandhiye jis tarah bandhiye
bemisaal
kar to leN ishq fir se magar fikr ji
apne darwaaje par kyuN bala bandhiye

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16th December 2012, 01:52 AM

vikaas bhaii:

namaste

janaab bahot hi umdaah ghazal kahi hay aapne .dil khush ho gayaa


kar to leN ishq fir se magar fikr ji
apne darwaaje par kyuN bala bandhiye

waah bahot khoob farmaayaa hai aapne

dil se daad aur duaaen

khush rahiye. . .apnaa khayaal rakhen

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sabne dair-o-haram maiN hai baandha use
aap bhi Qaafiye meiN khudaa bandhiye

ye hai ahad-e-wafa toot hi jayega

bandhiye bandhiye jis tarah bandhiye

kar to leN ishq fir se magar
fikr ji
apne darwaaje par kyuN bala bandhiye



waahhhh wahhh janumanu ji ,,,, behad khubb gazal kahi hai aapne... ye ashaar to behad khub rahe

   
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baraye- islaah ek ghazal pesh hai

is tarah shouk ka rasta bandhiye
rahbaroN se zara faslaa bandhiye

jism se rooh tak ek sa bandhiye
naam se naam ko naam sa bandhiye

baandhna aab* kaa koe mushkil nahiN
haaN magar iski had bhi zara bandhiye

* aab ... water

ye jo dil hai kayee raste haiN ise
aisa kariye ise do jagah bandhiye

sabne dair-o-haram maiN hai baandha use
aap bhi Qaafiye meiN khudaa bandhiye

ye hai ahad-e-wafa toot hi jayega
bandhiye bandhiye jis tarah bandhiye

kar to leN ishq fir se magar fikr ji
apne darwaaje par kyuN bala bandhiye

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bhai 2nd , 4th aur 5th ashaar ko samajh nahi paaya main.............ho sake to inki explaination kar de............baaqi ke sabhi ashaar achchhe rahe...........daad qabool kare.............take care
shukriyaa bhayee ..................
chalo kuch aisa hai jo tumko samjh ni aata hai

chalo let me try... magar tumhi kahte ho na... apna kaha aap his amjhe to kya samjhe.... magar yaar ........ jo na samjhe wo anaari hai ..

are yaha par ek "Anaari" sahab bhi thye...

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jism se rooh tak ek sa bandhiye
naam se naam ko naam sa bandhiye

haan to ye sher yuN hai... yaar teri bhabhi k liye likhaa hai... aur un sabke liye jo shadi karne wale ho ....

jisme se rooh tak .. ek sa bandhiye ...
ek sa bandhiye means .... jism aur rooh ko ek sa milaa do...

naam ko naam se ...... naam sa bandhiye...

means apne naam ko uske ya mere... naam se aise jodo ki ek hi naam lage

jaise teri bhabhi pahle aarti chandel thi... fir.. after shadi aarti rana ho gayee

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ye jo dil hai kayee raste haiN ise
aisa kariye ise do jagah bandhiye

hmm.... yaar kitna aasaan sher hai....

oola main kaha hai ki ye jo dil hai... iske pas bahut raaste hai... bhaag jane ke ud jane ke...

aisa karo... ise ek baar ni do baar yaa do jagah se baandho.... haatho se pairo se.. ab dil ke hath pair na dhoonda


sabne dair-o-haram maiN hai baandha use
aap bhi Qaafiye meiN khudaa bandhiye

oolaa to samjh aa gaya hoga ... means sabne ... khuda ko.. mandir masjiz main .... seemit .. kar diyaa hai... baandhne se yaha matlab ... limit main kar dene se hain ..... koe sach main baandhne se ni... u know its not possible to say

to sher aapse kuch ye kahta hai ki

ufaq saab .. sabne apne mandir masijid main khuda rakh liyaa .. aap shayer ho... qafiye main khudaa bandh lo..
qafiyaa bandhnaa means .... kafiyaa lagana ....
yaani khuda ko qafiye main use karo...
jaise maine khudaa ko kafiyaa banaya ...


so bas itna hi tha isme...

halki fulki ghazleN likh shayar bantaa firta huN
ye bhi sab uska socha ho.... aisa bhi ho sakta hai

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16th December 2012, 07:22 PM

kar to leN ishq fir se magar fikr ji
apne darwaaje par kyuN bala bandhiye


ghazab.... qatl.......... bhai dheeron daad maQte k liye...



*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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baandhna aab* kaa koe mushkil nahiN
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wah vikas bhai ... bahut khoob ... sunder ghazal ... dil se daad .. radhe radhe ...


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