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Kya thaa mera kasoor ye bataate jaate - 16th March 2002, 07:47 AM

Kya thaa mera kasoor ye bataate jaate
koii kahaanii logoN ko sunaate jaate

maine socha dil mera lautaa ke jaaoge
jaaN bhii liye jaa rahe ho jaate jaate




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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

maikash
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Thumbs up Bahut Khoob! - 17th March 2002, 12:16 AM

Ab samajh mein nahin aa raha ke kaise taarif karun. It's another masterpiece from you maikash. Keep it up.
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hello - 19th March 2002, 01:09 AM

Hi
Bahoth din ke baad humne kuch assa suna hai apnse apnse. Assa kyon hotha hai ke kabhi koi ithne lambhi shayri likha tha par uska assar assa nahin hotha jo chun lines mein hotha hai. Khoob likha apne, assa hona chayee ke jo chalee jatha hai, unko atleast dil aur jaan ka assa saath nahin lekhar jaana chayee. Anyways keep it up, after along time I have read something you wrote which caught my eye. You dont seem to be writting much these days.

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kitne sapne - 20th March 2002, 04:55 AM

kitne sapne dekhe humne jinki khatir
chod gaye hame vo tanha jatte jaate
vo to na aaye par yaadaain aati rahi
kaise kahe kya haal hai jab unhone hi muh fer liya hamare saaamne se atte aate..

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21st March 2002, 03:02 AM

Singhson saahab ...aap do lafz hii kaheN..achche ya burey....samajh lijiye aapne taariif kar dii.....bohat shukriya

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21st March 2002, 03:05 AM

dear chota sa dil.....

dil to chahataa hai ke aapke ta'suraat ka dil khol ke jawaab duuN...magar aaj muaaf kijiyegaa...phir kabhii sahii....

aapne rubaaii pasaNd farmaaii ...uske liyte bohat shukriya...


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21st March 2002, 03:11 AM

Priya sahebaa...aadaab

aapke jazbaat ko maiN achchii tarah se samajh saktaa huuN...magar ustaadoN kii taqiid hai ke bah'r ka zara sa khayaal rakhaa kareN....maiN khud abhii iss hunr ka talib-e-ilm huuN.....magar itnaa zaroor kahuuNgaa ke aapne jo qit'a pesh kiya uske aakhiri misre meN itnii lambii bah'r ki ijaazat nahiiN hai...is tarah ki tarqiib waajeh nahiiN hai..issey aap she'r nahiiN keh saktiiN....agar aap izhaar-e-jazbaat karnaa chahtii haiN to be'khauf seedhe lafzoN meiN kareN......


ummiid hai aap buraa naa maaneNgii.....

shukriya

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SSA maikasH jee - 22nd March 2002, 01:10 PM

wah maikasH jee ..

bahot khub likha hai aapne...ein chaar lines mein bahot kuch
keh gaye aap..


Kya thaa mera kasoor ye bataate jaate
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24th March 2002, 03:40 PM

bohat hi khoob kaha hai aap nay maikash ji
keep it up
seedhay dil ko chuwa hai in chund ulfaaz ne


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28th March 2002, 10:49 PM

Molly ji....

ye to paDhne waale ke jazabaatoN par munhasir hai ki koi kahaN tak samajh paataa hai......varna ye dard ka samandar kitna gehra hai ye apne sivaa kaun jaane...!!

daad ka shukriya...salaam arz karta huuN

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28th March 2002, 10:50 PM

maryam sahebaa...adaab kabool farmaayeN

tariif ka shukriyaa......khaaksaar ka dil rakh liye aapne...!!


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30th March 2002, 11:36 PM

SSA _/\_ Jashan ji...


bouth accha likha hai

"Kya thaa mera kasoor ye bataate jaate"


............dur chale gay vo...........pass aate aate...........dilka haal be na sunaya........jatte jatte.

(mein koi shyari karne ke koishish nai kar rahi hoon..........kyuN ke vo mein kabhi nai kar sakti.........just jo dil mein aaya.......likh diya....samajne vale samaj jayeN gay)

keep writing :-)
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4th April 2002, 05:37 AM

SSA anjaan saheba

samajhney waale samajh gaye haiN.....


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11th March 2004, 08:08 PM

maikasH...waah sahaab DIL ko chhu gaye ye ashaaR...Sanju!

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Kya thaa mera kasoor ye bataate jaate
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maine socha dil mera lautaa ke jaaoge
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