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Love Ab Laut Aho Sajaan - 10th May 2002, 08:07 PM

Ab Laut Aho Sajaan

Ab Laut Aho Sajaan
Kai Tum sai Bichra baraas gozar gahai
Kai Tum sai Mila Baraas Gozar Gahai

Mah Tera Houn tera hona Ehsaan Nahi
Ab in moshkoloh ko ahsaan kar

Ab Laut Aho Sajaan
Ab Laut aho Sajaan

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