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jo ik baar - 9th May 2002, 03:21 AM

Jo ik baar dil peh chot khaee hai
ub yeh dil kisi pur kaisay eitbaar karey
Wafa nibhanay ki to saza payee hai
Najaanay nigaahein kyoun uska intezaar karein


Somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile, And finds in your presence that life is worth while, So when you are lonely, remember it's true: Somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!!
   
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Lovelly - 10th May 2002, 08:15 PM

Jo ik baar - Waah

Kya Baath Hai

Maryam Ji, really nice I like your this poem very much. I am a new shayer but so far I loved your poem. My Fav line is the finish, Kya Khoob Lika Hai tum Nai kai : -

"Najaanay nigaahein kyoun uska intezaar karein"

Just great.

Carry on with the good work

Faisla


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